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monika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#181

hi dear its mindblowing pl conti soon 👏

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Kaz

@SujalkiDeewani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#182

whoooooooof!!

finally i read all da parts!!

its simply mindblowing kimmmy~~

its amazing~~

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hats off to ur creativity darling!!

n plzz continuee sooon!jus can't w8 anymore!

luv kaz😛

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armaghan

@sidra01

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Posted: 18 years ago

#183

awsome really interesting shattering twist coming up hope its not that bad pls con asap

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Kaz

@SujalkiDeewani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#184

kimmmmmmyyyyyy,,,,,,,,,,,,,,continue sooooooooon!!!

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komal

@komalsirwani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#185

Honii wrote:
kim dear great parrt loved it tooooooooo toooooooo goooood omg big shock dosent sound good contine soooon

hehe wait ill the nxt part dear 😆 😆

zeenat_786 wrote:
hi!!!

your fanfic is awesome!! i've been waiting soooo long!!
anywayz....it's amazing!! But wat will shatter their dreams????? cont. sooooon!!!!

thx soo much 4 likin it...well wait till the nxt part comes 😳
janu_2006 wrote:
gr8 part
cont. soon

guriya wrote:
wonderful part... ; ..jus 2 good...gr8 gng....

nm16 wrote:
wonderful part

thx soo much 😳 😳

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komal

@komalsirwani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#186

monikaseth wrote:
hi dear its mindblowing pl conti soon

hacker7 wrote:
plz cont soon

thx...il cont soon 😳

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komal

@komalsirwani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#187

Sujalkideewani wrote:

whoooooooof!!

finally i read all da parts!!

its simply mindblowing kimmmy~~

its amazing~~

👏

hats off to ur creativity darling!!

n plzz continuee sooon!jus can't w8 anymore!

luv kaz😛

kimmmmmmyyyyyy,,,,,,,,,,,,,,continue sooooooooon!!!

?????????????

hehe kinzu...tumhare username dekh ke toh pehchaana hi nahi hehe...thx soo much 4 likin my story..il cont soon😳

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Kaz

@SujalkiDeewani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#188

lol!!no thanx dear!! 😃 😃

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komal

@komalsirwani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#189

hey ppl here's the 18th part of LAMHE..
sujal and kashish are back to shimla.......and are very happy..................the sweet moments of their trip are still fresh in thier minds and they are cherishing each and every moment spent by them
woh ek cab mein beithe hain joh kashish ke ghar jaa rahi hai
S-kashish !!!!! main aaj bahut bahut khush hoon
K-sujal main toh apni khushi zahir bhi nahin karr sakti.........kuch dino mein hum dono ki shaadi ho jaayegi........and then ek nayi duniya omg main toh soch soch ke hi pagal ho jaungi
S-jaan mujhe pagal karke khud mat pagal ho jaana mera better half bhi agar pagal ho jaayega then toh i will land in an asylum
K-tum bhi naaa
the cab stopped in front of the virani house and both of them get down
S-chalo jii aapke ghar tak chod dun and aunty and uncle se bhi mil lun
K-gr8 chalo
they were abt to enter the primises but are stopped by tulsii at gate itself
K-mama hiii kaisi hain (hugs her) ???
then kash observes the tension on her face and asks
K-mama wat happened why r u soo tensed
S-aunty !!!! aap aise andar toh aane diijiyee
T-wait sujal (pulls kash inside) tum bahar hi raho toh behter hoga and plzz ab yahan dobara mat aana
both S and K are shocked to death
K-wattttttttt yeh kyaa mama aap yeh............
T-chup ab kashish tu bilkul chup ho and andar jaaaa abhi isi waqt
K-nahin main nahin jaaungiii aap mujhe batiye ki kya hua hai
T- tere..........tere papa ki condition bahut hi critical hai woh city hospital mein hain
kash was not yet recovered from the 1st shock and got the 2nd shock of her life
K-wattt (uski aankhon mein aansoon they) mama yeh aap kya keh rahi hain
S-aunty uncle ko kya huaa hai
T- jiski wajah se hua hau woh hi itni concern dikha raha hai
K-mama !!!!!!!!!!!
T-main sach keh rahi hoon unhe heartattack sirff sirff iss sujal ki wajah se aaya hai itna bada dhoka koi kaise seh sakta hai.............sujal juz get lost out (and pushes him bac)
K-mama lekin........(pauses and sees sujal and then) mama papa kis hosipital mein hain..........mamaaaa
tulsi kashish ko andar kheench kar le jaati hai and sujal wahan helpless khare khare use dekhta rehta hai use pata chal gaya tha ki kuch gadbar ho gayi hai but woh kyaa thi yeh nahin pata tha jaise hi kash andar chali gayi woh bhi cab mein beithkar apne ghar pahunchta hai............ghar mein sab hall mein beithe hote hain
S-mama papa !!!!!
everyone gets up seeing them
V-sujal acha hua tum aagaye jao fresh ho jaao
S-ek min mama main abhi abhi kashish ke ghar se aa raha hoon uncle ko heartattack aaya hai and aap sab yahin beithe hain
lalit gets up in utter anger
L-toh hum kya karein unhone joh kiyaa uske baad tohh
sujal is pissed off and shouts
S-wahan aunty keh rahi hain ki maine kuch kiya yahan aap sab ka itna indifferent behaviour wat the hell is happening
SUM-sujal bas ab tum kashish ko bhool jaao hum us ghar se kisi bhi tarah ka rishta nahin rakhna chahte
S-wattttttttt kashish ko bhool jaao yeh yeh kya ho raha hai koi mujhe saaf saaf batayega
L-ok toh tum saaf saaf sunn naa chahte ho toh sunoo hamari company MEHTA comapnies se deal kar rahi thi........woh project hum dono pariwaaron ke liye bahut imp tha............500 crs were at stake and mihir took it soo lightly....................ki pata nahin kisi ne hamari private and confidential baatien leak ho gayi and that project went to GOENKAS......................and now hamare financers humse saare paise maang rahe hain.........becoz of that carelessness ek financial crises aa gayi hai.......................hamara sab kuch daav par hai.......(pauses) chalo yeh sab toh bhulaya bhi jaa sakta hai business mein aisa hota hai butt woh saara ilzaaam unhone tum parr daaal diya i mean koi apni galati kaise kisi doosre par daal sakta hai itni hadd tak mihir gir jaayega yeh mujhe nahin pata tha
There was pin drop silence and sujal broke the silence
S-lekin papa aap project ke chale jaane ka ilzaaam uncle par kaise daal sakte hain loss toh unhe bhi hua hai.........aur bhala woh private baatien kyon leak karenge
SUM-sujal mr verma hamare manager ko maine uncle ke ghar mein dekha woh kuch paise de rahe the use.........pehle maine lightly liya but phir jab yeh sab kuch hua toh bas ek hi naam saaamne aaya that was mr verma's............................aur unse jab maine poocha toh bahut and unke naa baatane par main police ke saaath unke ghar gaya and tab unhone yeh batayaa ki mr mihir virani ne unhe paise diye the woh private files leak karne ke liyee and tum yeh bhool rahe ho ki hum 65% ke partners hain toh zyada loss toh hume hi hoga naa....................saari baatien saaf hain sujal pyaar ki patti apni aakhon se hatao and see the real world which is very mean
S-nahin aisa nahin ho saktaa
V-sujal aisa hi hua hai and aise jhoote pariwaar se humne koi rishta nahin rakhna
L-main kuch bhi bardasht kar sakta hoon lekin jhoot nahin and phir unhone tum par ungali uthai hai
S-nahin main khud sab kuch clear karungaa
and he was abt to go out butt
L-sujal tu kahin nahin jaayega tujhe meri kasam
and instantly his feet stopped
S-watt papa ???
L-soch le kashish chahiye yaa main kyonki yaa toh woh teri zindagi mein reh sakti hai yaa main
S-papa

hey ppl lemme tell ull this...this spl sepration part is wriiten by lklk(surbhi) a very dear frnd....i couldnt write SK sepration dats y requested her...hope u liked it...do comment 4 surbhi.... 😳 😳 ...n surbhi thx a lot 4 this 😳 😳

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Hana

@HhAaNnAa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#190

kimmy yaaar yeh kya surbhi appp bi SK ko juda kardia 😭 yeh kya ... i hope sab kuch theek hojae geat part tooo toooo gooood kim yaar abbb app hi donon ko jaldi seh milado okay continue sooooon 😊