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Posted: 18 years ago
togepe30 wrote:
excellent part..........awesome.........plz continue soon...........

luv,
vandana

thx soo much...
janu_2006 wrote:
awesoem part &n bsp;
ab sujal kashish ko kaha leke gaya
cont. soon

thx...well ab Sijal kashish kahan gaye yeh janne ke liye toh wait karna padega 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
kimmi yaaar awesome part bohot hi mazedar tooo tooo gooooooooooooooood can't wait to read more cntinue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Honii wrote:
kimmi yaaar awesome part bohot hi mazedar tooo tooo gooooooooooooooood can't wait to read more cntinue soon

hey hana..me so glad u likd it..il cont soon 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
hii!!!! 😉

omg... ur ff is awesome....amazing....mindblowing....perfect.....great....fa ntastic....funny....excellent....fun 2 read 👏 👍🏼 i can just keep on going on and on....

i love it soooooo much....zaib-kripa and sujal-kashish have always been 2 of my fav. couples 😳

plz continue soon....i can't wait to read the next part 😊
Edited by 100%indiangirl - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
armaghan0 wrote:
really cute and awsome perfect songs

hacker7 wrote:
that was simply amazing...plz cont soon

guriya wrote:
gr8 part.. ...so sweet n cute.. ...good gng...

thx soo much every1..me too glad with ure comments 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Honii wrote:
kimmi yaaar awesome part bohot hi mazedar tooo tooo gooooooooooooooood can't wait to read more cntinue soon

hey hana glad u commented il cont soon 😳 😳
100%indiangirl wrote:

hii!!!!

omg... ur ff is awesome....amazing....mindblowing....perfect.....great....fa ntastic....funny....excellent....fun 2 read i can just keep on going on and on....

i love it soooooo much....zaib-kripa and sujal-kashish have always been 2 of my fav. couples

plz continue soon....i can't wait to read the next part

thx

hey thats soo sweet of u....me 2 love ZK N SK ..il cont soon 😳 😳
Edited by komalsirwani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok ppl me kimmy bak with the 17th part of LAMHE...
Recap:Ashu n Vinu get married...Kashish n kripa angry with Sujal n Zaib par they patch up....Sujal takes Kashish n goes away....
In the recption party....all the couples are dancing....zaib kripa ashu Vinu all the budhhas but Sujal Kashish gayab hai....par kahan...lets see....
The road is all empty...xcept 4 2-3 cars pasin by...but there is one car that is just standing there....n outside there is one cute couple....sujal kashish...kashish rests her head on sujal's shoulder n both of them are silent enjoying the time....sujal is playin with kashish's hair n kashish with his shirt...Sujal's cell rings...He picks it up...itz frm home...
Veena:hello sujal beta kaise ho tum...
Sujal:main bilkul theek hoon mumma ...wahan sab kaise hai
Kashish:mumma ka phone hai mujhe bhi baat karni hai
Veena:sujal...wahan kashish hai...mujhe do
Sujal:kyun...mujhse nahi baat karoge
Veena:nahi kaha na kashish ko do
Sujal:yeh kya...bete se zyada bahu ko importance
Veena:haan chal ab de meri bahu ko
Kashish takes the cal..
Kashish:hi mumma kaise ho aap..pata hai main apko kitna miss kar rahi hoon
Veena:sujal ke hote hue toh kisi aur ko miss kare...ho hi nahi sakta
Kashish blushes:mummmaaa.......
Veena:mumma ki bachi...acha bata shaadi kaisi hui...tum dono kahan ho...koi shor hi nahi hai..maine toh socha tha ki bahut shor hoga shaadi ka
Kashish:woh...mumma....woh...hum dono bahaar garden mein baat kar rahein hai na isliye
Veena:oh...theek hai meri taraf se vinu aur ashok ko badhai de dena...aur tum dono bhi jaldi wapis aajao taki tum dono ki bhi hum shaadi jald se jald karwa de..chalo main rakhti hoon
Kashish blushes:bye mumma
Sujal:kya kaha mumma ne
Kashish:mumma ne kaha...jaldi se wapis aajao...taaki
Sujal:taki
Kashish:taaki mujhe
Sujal:taaki tumhe
Kashish:taaki mujhe tumhari
Sujal:taaki tumhe meri bana de hai na
Kashish:nahi...taaki mujhe tumhari boring company se chutkara mile
Kashish starts laughin n gets up ....Sujal kya kaha...kashish starts running n sujal behind her...both of them run 4 sumtime when sujal catches hold of her....he hold her tightly....
Sujal:kya kaha tumhe main borin hoon...
Kashish:haan bahut borin ho tum...aaj tak kabhi tareek ki hai meri
Sujal:ruko tumhe dikhata hoon main kitna interestin hoon...
He goes closer to her...Kashish pushes him back
Kashish:sujalll...humein chalna chahiye bahut der ho gayi hai
Sujal:nahi abhi tumhe mera romantic side dekha kahan hai.....
Kashish:mujhe nahi dekhna....sujal plz chalo na...
Sujal keeps his finger on her mouth....
Sujal:shhh....
Kashish becums silent....sujal stares into her eyes...
Sujal:tareek toh uski ki jaati hai jo kabhi kabhi khoobsurat lagta hoon...jispar kabhi koi dress toh kabhi koi hairstyle suit hoti hai....agar tumhari tareek karoonga toh woh tareek sirf us ek pal ke liye hogi lekin tumhari khoobsurti aisi hai ki iski tareek agar koi apni umar bhar bhi karein toh kam hogi....tumhari khoobsurati mein toh yeh raat din ho jata hai aur din raat...tumhari aankhon mein woh nasha hai jo kisi ko bhi in mein dooba sakti hai aur phir wapis aana mushkil hi nahi namumkin hota hai....tumhare hoton mein woh jaddo hai ....jo koi isse dekhega tumhari har baat maane bina usse chain nahi milega....aur tumhare baal....
Before sujal could continue..kashish puts her hand on his mouth...
Kashish(very slowly):agr iske aage tumne kuch kaha toh...main toh pagal hi ho jaongi
she shyly hugs him....sujal smiles n hugs her back...
Sujal:i love u kashish....
Kashish:i love u too sujal...
Both are lost in each other when there's another call...sujal dosent answr it...
Kashish:sujal tumhara phone baj raha hai
Sujal:pata hai..mujhe nahi baat karni
Kashish:sujalll..utha lo koi imp call hoga...plzz
Sujal:ok...
He picks it up...itz zaib
Zaib:sujal kahan hai yaar tu...kya kashish tere saath hai...
Sujal:haan
Zaib:chal theek hai...pata hai hum yahan kitna pareshan hogaye the tum dono ke liye...acha ab tu jaldi wapis aajaa..vinu ashok jaa rahe hai...
Sujal:theek hai hum aate hai
Zaib cuts the cal..
Kashish:kya kaha zaib ne...(walks forward)chalo chalte hai
Sujal(holds her hand):jaana zaroori hai...
Kashish:sujall....chalo...
Sujal leaves her hand n sits in the car....both of them leave ....they reach the reception venue...the whole family was outside sending Vinu with Ashu...Sujal n Kashish come quickly n stand there...as if they were there frm long....Sujal goes beside Zaib n Kashish beside Kripa....
Zaib:kahan reh gaya tha yaar..sab pooch rahe the
Sujal:tune kuch bataya toh nahi na
Zaib:nahi..maine kaha tu yahin hai party mein
Sujal:thx....

Vinu hugs al her family members n then kripa n then kashish....while huggin kashish...
Kashish:bhagwan kare tu aur ashu humesha yun hi khush raho aur ek dusre se bahut pyaar karo
Vinu:jaise sujal tujhse karta hai na
Kashish blushes...She looks at sujal...sujal smiles...she smiles...Vinu goes away...every1 elz goes...
Vinu's mom:Kashish beta tum humare saath aarahi ho na
Kashish:jee aunty...
Kashish goes with vinu'mom...without informing Sujal...after some time sujal is searchin 4 kashish....he calls her up...
Kashish(sleepy tone):hello
Sujal:kashish..thank god tumne phone uthaya kahan ho tum aur itni der se kyun uthaya phone..tum theek toh ho na
Kashish:sujal....itni raat ko kyun phone kiya main theek hoon ...aur is waqt neend mein hoon...
Sujal:yahan meri jaan chali gayi thi...tumhe na pakar aur tum wahan so rahi ho mujhe bata kar jaa sakti thi na
Kashish:sorry ....aunty ne kaha chalo toh main aa gayi(she yawns)sujal ab main so jaon
Sujal:ruko ruko ek min apni aankhen band karo
Kashish:sujalllll
Sujal:plz karo na
Kashish(dosent close):haan kardi
Sujal:kashish jhoot mat bolo chalo sach mein aankhen band karo
Kashish(closes it):ab sach mein ki kaho
Sujal kisses the phone:..yeh meri good night kiss...love u
Kashish blushes:bye(she cuts da call)i love u too sujal
Sujal keeps the phone n blushes....

Kashish n Sujal both go to sleep.....
Next morning...sujal kashish leave 4 shimla...only for a big shock that can shatter their dreams...

ok ppl here ends this part.,...i tried to make it very romantic...well...theres gonna be a big shock 4 SK....lets see whats that....keep waitin n keep commentin.... 😳 😳
tc,
kimmy
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Posted: 18 years ago
kim dear great parrt loved it tooooooooo toooooooo goooood omg big shock dosent sound good contine soooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

hi!!!

your fanfic is awesome!! i've been waiting soooo long!!
anywayz....it's amazing!! But wat will shatter their dreams????? cont. sooooon!!!!

Edited by zeenat_786 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful part... 👏 ..jus 2 good...gr8 gng.... 😊

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