ARSHI FF: string of fate

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According to this myth, the gods tie an invisible red cord around the ankles of those that are destined to meet one another in a certain situation or help each other in a certain way.

The two people connected by the red thread are destined lovers, regardless of place, time, or circumstances. This magical cord may stretch or tangle, but never break.


This story will take place after the kidnapping track. When Khushi fell off the cliff, someone saw her hurt and called an ambulance before Arnav could get to her. She was taken to the hospital where she awoke with no memory of who or where she was. Because they couldn't get a name, no one came to get her. One of the doctors fell for her charming ways and decided to take her in as part of his family.

"Khushi" now is known by the name Kanushi. She never remembered anything and has been living abroad with her family for three years.

When she travels back to India how will she react to meeting a handsome stranger who claims to know her? He even claims to love her, but Kanushi tells him he has the wrong person.

Arnav has been counting the days since his Khushi left him. His happiness was tied to her, without her he has lived a life lying in wait for her to come back to him.

THIS IS LOOSELY BASED ON THE THAI LAKORN 'GAME RAK GAME RAI'


If three people comment and tell me they're interested I'll continue and post the preface tonight!

check out my other on-going FF: losing your memories


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting plot.. do continue soon.. best wishes and happy writing String of Fate 😃


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String of fate has already managed to starting me along for the journey. Please continue love to see a more confident and mature khushi
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Brilliant concept . Please continue
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Itss interesting..
Loved it..
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good one ..continue soon
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Prologue



The world felt cold and dark before she opened her eyes. When her eyes fluttered opened she almost wished the world would go back to being dark and cold; now the world was too bright and screeching with noises. Her head felt as if someone had hit her with a bat.

"Miss?" A man in a white coat called

"Where am I?" She rubbed her temple

"You're in the hospital." The man answered

"How did I get here? What happened to me?" She asked in confusion

"All I know is that you fell off a cliff."

"What?" She was confused about the answer he gave

"Let me give you a quick examination before we start the questions." The doctor said

He shined lights in her eyes, looked in her sinus cavities and checked her heart.

"Physically you looking good but I need to ask you a few questions."

She nodded her head urging him to go on

"What's your name, miss? You had no identification on you when you came in."

"K---, K... I'm sorry I can't. I don't know." Her eyes filled with tears

"Is there anything you remember?" He asked placing a comforting hand on her shoulder

She tried to think. She searched her mind to remember, but nothing happened. She kept drawling blanks.

"I'm sorry... I just can't remember." She cried

"That's ok! If you can't remember anything we should give you a name till you remember!"

She actually smiled at the idea

"Thank you." She said to the kind Doctor

"You said K-- when I asked so let's go through some K names."

"Kanitha?"

She shook her head

"Kanisa?"

Again she shook her head

"Kanushi?"

When said that name she gave him a huge smile.

"I like that name, it's pretty!" She grabbed his hand and squeezed as a gesture of thanks for giving her a name

"My pleasure Kanushi!" The doctor smiled at her

"My name is Dr. Siam so if you need anything call for me."

Three months went by and no one came to get her.

During those months Dr. Siam ate lunch with her everyday and the two became close. Kanushi began to see him as a father figure.

"Kanushi, I'm leaving for Thailand tomorrow."

"No, Dr. Siam you can't go!" She cried

"Kanushi, listen to me." He stroked her hair

"I have a daughter about your age and she's always wanted a sister. She wants to meet you, and my wife would love to have another child. So I guess what I'm asking is; Kanushi would you like to be part of my family?" He held his breath waiting for an answer

"You want to be my dad?" She smiled

"If you want me to." He said

"What should I call you?"

"In Thailand they call their fathers, Khun pa."

"Khun pa?" She had tears of joy in her eyes. Finally she had a family, people who wanted her!

"I have a friend in Thailand that specializes in memory, so we'll get you treatment there."

"Khun pa, thank you for wanting me to be your family." She embraced her new family member in a hug

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Arnav sat at the computer looking at the new designs for the fall line. Really all he was thinking of was Khushi. He'd checked with every hospital and none of them had any record of her. He was frustrated and he couldn't believe that he'd lost her.

"Arnav?" Anjali called

"Are you ok?" Akash trailed behind her

"No, I'm not ok! I lost her!" He screamed

"I lost my wife!" He knocked everything off the table

"I lost her!" He cried

Anjali gathered her brother in her arms and comforted him the best she could. The only person who could console him wasn't here. They had no idea where Khushi was. Arnav wouldn't give up the search though, ever.




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I'm sorry this part is kinda lame but i swear it will get much better when i write the next chapter!!!


IF YOU WANT TO BE NOTIFIED OF UPDATES YOU MUST BUDDY ME!!!

Edited by Yadech - 9 years ago
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Also if you guys have any constructive criticism about my writing feel free to tell me or pm me. I want to write something that you will actually enjoy
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Awesome..
Did feel bad for arnav..
Loved it..
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Great update
Pls cont soon
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