Okay Di I just opened IF and saw your story pm . Actually I had seen you requesting banner in creative shop for this story and I from that time was very interested in .
I love the title Gunaahon ka devta as I loved the show with same name . And now I love your story .
I had read the sneak peak back then but could not reply .
I really liked the prologue . Yes like no where in the world marriage has an extra ordinary definition in our Indian society . And it's just so sad that Khushi has to face all these .
Her mother I found her just like every serial 's mother . And her father đ€ą I hate him . He seems like a person of Crime petrol and Savadhaan India .
But I love the way how Khushi questions her mother , her questions are the questions of many girls of Indian which are left unanswered .
You know I m just loving this story Di .
And Khushi is already married ? đ„± But with Arnav yeah ! And I hundred and one know that he will do something . Till then I want Khushi to fight back .
This Rahul is giving me weird chills . I m totally imaging Arnav giving him an Dushasan death by tearing his chest đđ
Khushi worries for Arnav is totally justified . I remembered this dialogue from Hamari Adhuri Kahani of Vidhya Balan where she says that she loves him so much that just to decorate her heaven she can not push him to her hell forever . I feel Khushi feels the same .
Really addicted to this story . And this is going to be special for me . I m gonna buddy that account and please update regular . Really love this story .
Ps when are you going to update the ArDi ff ? đ And loved your Siggy
Love
Sam
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