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Nitya

@nik1310

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Posted: 9 years ago

#641

I will take this spot...

Unreserving

Right from the beginning of the 'Revealed' journey It has been obvious that the only problem Arshi faced was of 'communicating' and with ten years of marriage behind, this happens in most relationships. Though it is natural for this to happen how one handles this phase is crucial...make or break just like Arshi. In this case, the deep love and respect Arnav & Khushi shared for each other has been very obviously visible right throughout; hence it was just a matter of time that they talked' and got back as to why they got together in the first place. I recall in one of the earlier chapters Aman looks at the couple and feels their "Love should be enough to see them through"..

Jigs, It was interesting for me see how you 'straddled' the Talk and the Passion. I did not want one to overshadow the other ...no surprises as to which part I did not want to be overshadowed' 😉. Perfect as you start with the words not coming out, really what can one say that the hearts are already not saying to one another...so i was waiting as to what words you would chose. You did a great job with the talk I must say Chose Just the Right words; nothing more nothing less. Arnav expressed himself so brilliantly, yes he has been feeling about his neglect' & walking away' right from the start but by owning it aloud he cleared the path for Khushi also to say her piece and when she says I felt as if I betrayed my respect for you'... I was floored👍🏼.

Well, the time you post I might have mentioned before, IST mein dinner times..busy time, cannot sit with my smartphone and read such much awaited 'hotness' incorporated updates around chaos on the table/couch...so I had to take my time to read it alone much later again...I was so thirsty for a drink after reading the update honestly & had some ice cold water looking out from my balcony..😳 I am a member of the #shameless whatever gang here so I would have loved it more if a para had been dedicated to the second round in the bedroom too 😉 (do not recognize myself I assure you 😆)

The Gardenias and Arnav's note summed it all...what lovely words !

Waiting to see Arshi enjoy their domestic bliss along with some more 'mirch masala'...😛

Edited by nik1310 - 9 years ago

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#642

I won't res. It's proven unlucky for my unres'ing so far 😆

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#643

RES

Jigsss muahhh what an update Jigs Ji...dil khush ho gaya..

I had Khushi ke aansu hearing them confession...so emotional .. superb and loved it like anything...

and then came the HOT HOT jalebi se bhi jyada meeta update...fire place and ice..what an combination yaar...yummylicious ;-) now that they have no tension between them and no pressure of getting pregnant, she will eventually become pregnant I guess..

2005 wine and the same atmosphere as their first night in their house...hope their life goes back to how it was 10 years earlier..

I love the bromance between Arnav and Mathur.. Arnav even knows the details about La - Aman romance and Aman knows his issues...awesome friendship

superb update Jigs.. my most fav update till now of Revealed for sure...but I guess Italy second honeymoon might beat this one ;-)

on a serious note, I loved this update bcos of their heart to heart conversation..loved the way they opened up to each other..

thxxx a lot for making my mood better..now I can travel to India aaram se

Edited by sman - 9 years ago

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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#644

Yay!!

What a beautiful chapter! It touched me and made me think at the same time. We talk nonstop about inconsequential things all day long, day after day but when it comes to serious issues or problems we clam up. It's the easy way out to escape, pretend the problem is not there and hoping it will eventually go way. I'm guilty of this thought process myself. I know how difficult it is to talk and face our insecurities and our failings and even more difficult is showing our vulnerabilities. You need tremendous trust to do that and lots of courage. Easier said than done and so is apologizing. We say sorry so many times at a store outside to people we barely know - it comes out so easily and naturally but when it matters it is so difficult to take the first step and say sorry. Those 5 letters suddenly take on a whole new meaning. Even kids instinctively realize it. You teach them to say sorry they repeat after you like parrots, but try making them say it when it counts and then you will see how difficult it is to make them say it.

You portrayed all these so seamlessly and beautifully and finally they took a step towards healing and re building their life together. It was such a pivotal point in their lives and it was beautiful sensuous heartwarming and touching chapter. Thank you for this wonderful chapter Jignasha, you are a writer par excellence.

Edited by shyamidutt - 9 years ago

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Mayvs2013

@Mayvs2013

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#645

ye Bandhan chute na sari jindagi...trully beautiful

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#646

UnRes :-)

The first thing that came to my mind after reading this update is, this is like jigs trademark update.. kuch katta aur kuch meetha..

It was wonderful to see both of them having a talk, where they have confessed all the mistakes they did, and promised each other that they are going to be there for each other , no matter what happens... they atlast understood the need of each other for their survival... and how much they mean to eachother.. so many things we take it for granted in our daily life jigs.. we realise the importance of it only when we are at the verge of loosing it.. same thing happened here.. until the divorce topic has come up, both of them didn't realise, what life is without the other person. . Very well written dear..

And of course the next part was like too hot and you made me run for the cold shower ;-)

Thank you so much for this love filled update jigs and thanks for the pm :D

Ps: very very sorry for the late unres jigs..

Edited by pravallika - 9 years ago

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vinovember

@vinovember

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Posted: 9 years ago

#647

An amazing update once again jigs! The confrontation finally!! We need to talk is actually rather said than done! Arnav and khushi both pouring their heart outs! You've described it so poignantly! Like the way arnav says khushi... I'm sorry!! 👏 it is easy to blame others but ten fold more difficult to accept ones own mistake!! And they have crossed that milestone!! 👏 finally a closure they deserved!!
Now to the new beginnings!! I liked how khushi voices to arnav that she is ready to move forward emotionally and physically!! The homely environment is back, just with the return of the warmth in their relation!! The scene after khushi takes bath, and is taking in her house which is just the same but yet different!! It's just swells my heart with happiness!! The failed grocery shopping 😆 The hot hot scene 😳 arnav recreating their first night in the house 😃
This chapter had everything according to me! A perfect mixture of emotion, fun,passion, love !! Just loved the update!! Sorry for the late reply, my university exams are on, sneaking out time to read and comment!!

Edited by vinovember - 9 years ago

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@mu12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#648

its beautiful
perfect
when we admit our mistakes on a relationship ..it become more transparent and the light of happiness only passes @ that time only .blaming would not lead us to anywhere . finally they are back in their relationship. the love was always there ,,,loved the chapter ..blushing ,,,😳
waiting for next chapter