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Mints23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1011

I missed out on the last two chapters and now I see that the story has moved rapidly into greener pastures. You write Arnav and Khushi's physical intimacy so artfully... nothing sleazy or overboard. Just perfect synchronization of two bodies, to souls. Not only these two have overcome the physical barrier... their conversations are back, finally making them understand what the other actually expects out of life. Arnav's guilt to have left Khushi alone for so long, seems to have changed him for the better. He now does not want to take any chance and make her his priority. Whereas Khushi has become much more comfortable in their current situation. Bearing her heart out to him has made all of her burdens vanish into thin air, filling her up with hope and happiness. I love how you write about children in this story. It is so sweet to see Khushi and Arnav respectively spending time with Aman and Lavanya's kids. Their friendship is so strong and relationship so thick... I am sure Aman and Lavanya's wishes would come true soon. Now that Khushi has finally admitted to wanting a baby, I can only imagine Arnav's relief and happiness. She could lie to the whole world but how long would she lie to herself. A want, a wish, a craving to have your own baby is not something you could ever get over with. I am happy for them, that soon they will have a baby Khushi or a chotu Arnav of their own... 😳

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1012

awesome update.. loved it 😊

glad for arnav and khushi's decision about the baby

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sk2405

@sk2405

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1013

This page of the book was such a pleasant read.

I love the initiative of bringing the kids to work concept and what I am more glad about is the fact that it's being taken up not just as a mere formality but as an important responsibility. There's a need in all 4 of them to see the next generation evolve as successfully as them.

I loved the way little Akki and Akash were dressed up. The site of the kids dressed up as their favourite men was a delight to read. That little part wherein Arnav proposes to retire from the job alongwith Akash was hands down my favourite part.

Arnav and Khushi have worked hard to bring back the lost equilibrium in their relationship. Their desire to be with each other speaks volumes about how beautifully they have healed the wounds caused by their dispassionate ignorance. They have finally understood the need to stay together and resolve through the issues. The comfort and ease of communication which had faded with time seems to be back because discussing about Krabs, especially after that night, wouldn't have been so effortlessly easy. Also, talking about kids would have been taxing otherwise.

Their yearning for a child of their own is unmistakable and I am glad they have decided to adopt a baby and give themselves a chance at tasting the forbidden fruit.

Dr.Roshni seems to be a person helping them with the process, an angel in disguise sorts.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

P.s : Will it be foolish to expect them to have a kid of their own? I am l, undoubtedly, happy with the adoption but then there is this selfish me who would want to see them go through every phase of becoming parents right from the conceiving phase. I believe, these two especially, deserve it.

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1014

Words can't explain how much I love this update, finally after all the agony and tears there is love and happiness for them. Finally I can breathe that there is still hopes alive for my arshi :)
Great update :)