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Mirabell

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Posted: 9 years ago

#631

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Dearest Jigs

True revelations, that is what this update was about - seeped in between their confessions and declarations. You hid them well. J

It began with silence (my absolute favorite) and where words failed, tears set them free. Her pain set him free to declare. And like the two souls in love, they found their connections through pains and tears. His tears set her free to affirm their love. You have shown these through her acceptance of her home, through her ability to let go, lose control and accept her own self and in the process accept them as one unit.

This transformation you show here, is not possible if they did not realize their own selves within, made peace with it... or at least come to terms with it. He, with his father's betrayal and she, with her mother's. But more than that, to me, it was their acceptance of their insufficiencies that set these revelations in motion.

But Albert Camus says it best:

In the midst of hate, I found there was, within me, an invincible love.

In the midst of tears, I found there was, within me, an invincible smile.

In the midst of chaos, I found there was, within me, an invincible calm.

I realized, through it all, that...

In the midst of winter, I found there was, within me, an invincible summer.

And that makes me happy. For it says that no matter how hard the world pushes against me, within me, there's something stronger - something better, pushing right back.

Bridges to that safe space they shared in their past, they rebuilt, alongside their passions and desires through lambent fires that roared in their veins next to their fire places. J You are indeed the best when it comes to writing intimacy. There is grace in your erotica that I seldom find, and a raw honesty that is quite rare. The combination is simply poetry!

This update, to me, was love through and through in its most inexplicable, enigmatic best and who am I to object! "Nothing is mysterious, no human relation. Except love." - Susan Santog.

👏 Take a bow dearest Writerji. You made me think today.

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#632

My dear friend Jigs, this update was par excellence.

Talk - so true just a four letter word, can be easily done by all most all the people at all the time, yet when the real need arises, talking just becomes too complex and we take the shelter of silence conveniently.

Arnav and Khushi too for years together have taken the convenient path of the ever friendly silence.

If for a clap, two hands are required, then for a marriage to make or break too two people are required.

Jigs, how beautifully you brought out the emotions of both Arnav and Khushi today to tell us that talking is easier said than done.

Talking means letting our guards down, talking means show casing our weaknesses, talking means sharing our innermost fears and insecurities and yet today they talked.

They talked not caring that the other person can see their vulnerabilities, they talked because the loneliness which silence brought in their lives was literally killing them in every possible way, they talked because they loved each other way too much and they talked for saving their marriage and the beautiful soulful connection they share from dying.

And thus words brought them much closer to each other, words bridged the gap time had created between them and words promised them a better tomorrow irrespective of whether it was filled with a mix of joy and sorrow.

Arnav recreating the same setting like 10 years ago with the wine and the burning fireplace was just magical. Arnav made sure that it was indeed a new beginning and though there might be still a lot of issues to be worked about, yet they both vowed to make their marriage work promising each other there will not be any more walls of silence which will be built around them.

And their love making was just beautiful. It was written beautifully and aesthetically and was very sensuous. It was not just the coming together of two bodies, but it was the coming together of two hearts, two souls who were craving for each other's love and today it felt like the love was finally reciprocated in every way.

And it surely made me grab a glass of cold water Jigs, no doubt about that.

Finally the dawn of the morning welcomed the new dawn in their lives paving way for a future filled with happiness and love.

But the elephant in the room is still very much present Jigs, the issue of not having a child, how will this couple deal with this issue is something to be seen in the upcoming updates.

Nevertheless this was an amazingly written update.

Revealed - a story which told us how revelations of our innermost feelings affect and change the relationships we share and how as each layer gets revealed, not only the other person, even the person who is revealing his or her feelings, gets to understand himself or herself much better than earlier.

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

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Posted: 9 years ago

#633

That's Jigs for us! I don't know how you manage to raise our expectations so high and still beat it by a big margin.

After honing their skills in the process of conquering the west coast demons, it was just the right time for Arshi to put those skills to the ultimate test and face each other's ultimate fear. And boy did they nail this one👍🏼.

The sorrow was out, the blame was inwards, honesty was all around and finally the flaws were flayed. Maybe it is one of those natures law where the number of flaws flayed is directly proportional to the amount of honesty you took along with you. I guess sometimes being honest to the level of brutal is the only way to go.

What followed was the most rewarding piece of reading I have done in a while. The way you sprinkled your magic all over them and the way you have made that house into a warm and inviting home, was just marvelous. Even more rewarding was how we finally found our joyous couple that were missing for almost a year. You definitely deserve the reward for finally bringing down that "Missing joyous Arshi" poster down😉.

And for the ice cube moments - enlightenment was in the air for whoever thought ice cubes are frozen for the only purpose of melting in some strange drink🤔. I consider that their time was well served knowing that they helped them reunite as one😊.

Looking forward to your one month move ahead chapter next. But, knowing me, I am already ready for the nine month move ahead where the frozen ice cubes of today melted away into a warm and snuggly pari bear.

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#634

Their conversation was beautiful not necessarily because of the conversation itself- because of all the moments that lead up to this one. What made this chapter beautiful is your dedication to giving us a story that builds over time. You built everything they would need to have this conversation step by step- and we didn't even realize it fully, not until now. It's like when you look back on a hike and realize how far you've come since the moment you began, and it just hits you.

Having a conversation then would not have been as poignant as this one was- simply because they didn't have the ingredients to do it yet. They needed to go to the grocery store (or in Arnav's case, get on their laptops 😆) and prepare them before they could be ready to make their pizza. You gave them time to let the dough rise, roll it out, make the pizzas and then wait (im)patiently for it to be ready- that is what makes a good pizza. And as ridiculous as it sounds to compare a relationship to pizza- it's what makes a good relationship too. They needed that waiting period, the time to just let it all sink in, to accept it and then move forward.

I remember at the beginning that we all chided them for how their communication skills had deteriorated- and this chapter proved that talking about things, and perhaps just as important, listening to the other person is what makes all the difference.

It was like I let out a deep breath that I'd been holding for so long- that burn you feel eases, softens until you breathe normally again and that's what happened with them. The warmth between them has crept back, seeping slowly through the chapter until it was burning. I loved how seamless it felt, how utterly natural- and yet there was something more to it. Their intimacy was so beautifully written. It gave me goosebumps with how tender it was, and it was melting slowly with the ice.

So, so, so well written. You deserve this for this chapter:

Love hamesha,

Your Choti.

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 9 years ago

#635

Jigs,

Another amazing and emotional update. Arnav and Kushi broke all the walls of silence and once again welcomed sweet sounds of laughter and happiness into their life with rejuvenated spirits. Arnav and Kushi apologies (tears), acceptance (hugs) and promises (kisses) everything is very heartwarming.

"We need to talk" the most powerful four words in Arnav and Kushi life after years of melancholy, loneliness and self-wallowing. These simple four words that mended their relationship for eternity that was on the threshold of break up. Communication always does wonders isn't it?, be it is between parent-child, siblings, friends or husband and wife.

Just like that domesticity returned in no time to Mr & Mrs Raizada sweet home. Arnav made such a cute planning to rekindle their first night with a new beginning and executed it so well including ordering groceries from a man called Aman to spend his precious time just with Kushi.

Finally the most awaited passionate love making happened rising the temperatures of the planet and melting the glaciers to puddles.

Sending beautiful arrangement of romantic Gardenia flowers conveying you are lovely- what a loving way to wish his bellisma and start their dream future once again 👏.

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bhavis

@bhavis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#636

Its a proven fact that Silence speaks volume. But at times it becomes a burden and that is what happened to these two. Its so easy to be silent when you can avoid all the heart breaks and confrontation that may occur due to speaking up and that is what this journey is all about. 👏

Why is that words leave us during the time when its most needed. Why is it that the care for others let us do things that we don't intend to do? Jigs take a bow - REVEALED is all about that and much more.

It was wonderful to see these two communicate at the human level. Arnav's apology was heart felt. Its not easy for a man to put things in words the way he did but he did it proving that this relation is much more precious than his fears, his own shortcomings. 👏 👏. He did not just apologize by words but that was followed by his actions too. The domesticity was just enough for Khushi to make her fall in love with his man yet again. Yet in midst of all you brought his not liking of grocery shopping and the convo of online shopping making it so realistic⭐️

Khushi on other hand is just done with fighting. Fighting her own self, her own desires, her own faith and finally fighting her own demons. The reminiscing of the vow coupled with the apology let her arms down and she was ready to fight yet again but for them as a couple. The couple who were madly in love with each other before all the misunderstandings. Like Arnav I think most of the readers are glad to have this smiling Khushi or rather say Mrs Raizada back 😃

And finally the act of unison where they just did not unite physically but emotionally aswell. The act without Raja and phones burnt the screen on fire. It was artistic and moreso I can blame it to your words for the warming up not just my office but temp as well. 😆 Officially the temp rose from 1 degrees in AM to 10 degrees😃

Out and out a very beautiful chapter with the emotions on the ride; desires up high and was soulful.

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Sadh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#637

All thanks to my internals, I was the last unres previous time..so this time I decided to hurry before others. So, I guess I am the first unres, or at least I hope so! 😆

I am clearing my throat Jigs. I mean should I censor my comments? I am young and "legally" not so adult! Khushi, being a lawyer it does frighten the hell out of me that she might charge me with accusations! I hope that you will shield me from her.. I can't afford to lose my life in jail and force to miss the future updates. So let me be my age or at least if I exceed, I just hope, you will save me, for I don't think you would afford to lose your "youngest" reader.

The beginning made me an emotional wreck. I was wondering who's side I would take and blame the other..I came to the conclusion that it is hypothetical and I better not think about sides. But yes as you had said, they had to talk and I am mighty glad they did. It was a day of "revelations" for them. I guess with every word both of them discovered their own self once again. I think this will strengthen their bond. Every relation that is based on truth and love, survives the hardest and the toughest storm. I know for sure that these two will wade through the glitches or rather take the hurdles under their wing and remain the other's strength.

I love your Khushi, jigs..she has a very unique tone and flavour to her character. You have given her many shades and with every update we are knowing the color of those shades. I liked it that she didn't like his tears and how she decided that both were to blamed. She was rational, though I wouldn't have blamed her, had she blamed Arnav completely..she has shown companionship, hasn't she? I guess today they have very successfully fulfilled their marital vows! The very same, they took at the start of their new life and the same, they have taken before the start of their new phase.

Ah and we drift into lighter moments just before you take the plunge and decide to drench us in your heat! I was wondering as I started reading, did Jigs melt the ice with the fire and forget to give us the heat? But yeah I am proven wrong and rightly so. You did manage to raise our temperatures and drop it to freaking low. Just like Khushi. And yum.. even I would love to have a Pizza. Just when I was going to sleep, I feel tempted. Or that was, until I delved further into your update.

And there is this unleash of pent up desires which suddenly burst into the forefront after days of suppression and ignorance. I liked it that Arnav decided to recreate the magic of their first night. It shows that the sparks are as volatile as then. I think it only took a matchstick or rather smoke to burn the place down. It had very easily downed them in their passion of love. Ah I don't think I will elaborate further on this. My "legal" issues prove to be a barrier for a month.

Ah and they proceed into their development process. Oh and what a way to start! That letter just made me smile, though it did make Khushi cry. After All these days or rather months of gloominess, this was definitely deserved. I am happy for Mia girl and Jigs with happiness, you did mention Lavu and Aman (though earlier). I loved it how you very skillfully incorporate them into the story.

I just wish these two sail together forever and I can't help but ask, is a Pari due Jigs? I know that is the most frequently asked and debated topic. Still my treacherous heart refuses to stay in peace without an answer to this question.

Waiting to enter into the new phase,

$@dh

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cherrybloom1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#638

So I'm kind of speechless right now, but I'm going to try my level best to express myself without making a fool of myself. Please forgive me if I end up not making sense because my thoughts are all muddled up.

At this moment, in my head, all I'm saying is "Awww" but that would sound too immature and girl-ish (as most people like to call it) so I'm going to try and convert what the Aww really stands for. Adorable. Sexy. Hot. Cute. Amazing. Out of this world. Fabulous. Liberating. And many more things. But I believe you got a gist of what I was trying to say. Basically, this chapter was a mixture of everything. It had the hot smokiness of the couple, and it had the emotional factor. It had the cuteness of the couple as well as the maturity of two individuals.

I've been waiting for "the talk" a very very long time. And to finally have it delivered, with such sheer brilliance, if I must say is something that is so satisfying. The maturity that the two of the have shown has absolutely left me awed. Just today, I was watching a show on the tv where a couple literally solved all their problems in 30 minutes after having filed a divorce and for the first time, I really realized how difficult it really is in real life, unlike what they show on tv. To work on an almost broken relationship and to finally have a start isn't easy. The amount of guts you need to be able to face each other and actually begin that conversation must be the most difficult thing to do. Because I suddenly realize how difficult it is even for me to forgive my best friend and actually have a conversation with her to understand where we both went wrong. It isn't easy and I know that. I've been telling myself for almost a year that I may have issues to deal with, but speaking to her and trying to sort things out, isn't an option for me. It may be my ego or my self respect, but to open yourself bare in front of anyone, whether he/she is your friend or your spouse, isn't an easy task.

I feel like a proud mother right now. For Arnav and Khushi to finally be able to take a step forward in their relationship is HUGE. To be able to say "Okay, that is it. We need to move forward and make a life together" after everything is so mature of them. They show so much more maturity than they are expected to show, it makes me want to cry.

That witty mouth of theirs needs to be put to better use and I'm glad it was. 😉 Such hotness. I'm glad the air conditioner in my room was at the lowest temperature. It really helped but I still need to take a sip or 2 every minute or so while I write this. 😆

The domesticity of the house is slowly returning. Home Sweet Home. Don't we all feel it when we return from a long holiday? Infact, I say it everyday as I return from school. There is no place like home. No matter where you are, the feeling of being home is absolute bliss. Their little nok-jhok about grocery shopping that Arnav decided to hand over to Aman. His "Baby..." was something I can still imagine in my head. It is pure bliss, Jigs and anyone coming from a loving home will realize the value of these small things of daily life.

Waking up to the person you love, I may not know the feeling, but I know how blissful it is when I used to wake up next to my father as a kid. Being in his embrace every morning and being woken up to a quick kiss on the cheek was a perfect way to start a day. And I can't imagine how exquiste it must be for Khushi to finally wake up next to her Arnav after waiting for him for so long.

That card, though. I'm totally fangirling about it. It was so cute. This is where I find my #RelationshipGoals. It was absolutely adorable of Khushi's sexy rugged husband to send that little card to his Dearest Wife.

Jigs, you have done an absolutely mindblowing job with this update. The 2 weeks wait was so damn Meetha (that now I missed Stripped 😭). I can't wait to see what the month long leap does to their relationship. The domesticity, their little fights and the snippets from their vacation. ❤️

Please don't make us wait for so long again, Jigs! It breaks our hearts to not have something to read every tuesday. 💔

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Dhruvi Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#639

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OHMFG.. I am speechless jigs, the way things turn out is just so sooo awesome..:) your teaser increase the heat on this thread but your update just give wild flames to the smoke 😳 i cant tell you how happy i am feeling after reading this update :)

Sometimes it feels so difficult to form words so that you can tell your feelings to the other person.. Things happens but you dont know how to face them, rather than facing the situation, one takes other option, to run away from it..!! But it leaves harsh bruises on your loved ones heart:/

Maybe thats what happen with them but i am so happy that they spoke their heart out and give their life a chance.. Love to bloom merrily :) this is the way to sort this out.. Very well said jigs that things will take time to be like before, but atleast they are now together, till eternity :)

After their conversation, their smoking hot love making session makes my heart goes dhak dhak so loud 😳 infact i lost count of it 😆 their closeness brings immense joy not only to me, but each n every reader here, m very sure of it 😛 Jigs, you not only make me reach for cold glass of water but much more.. Lol

Beautiful gesture by arnav sending flowers and a love note attached to it but more than that i love the way khushi asked mia to call her mrs raizada instead of mam :) pure bliss to read my favourite couple once again reaching their desired destination.. Destination of "LOVE"

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sweety421

@sweety421

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Posted: 9 years ago

#640

Wow di... This was one of the best update in this story...
A much needed conversation finally took place... It was hard to read u know...them excepting their mistakes... The hidden sorrow...pain... everything juz came out...It was painful... but yet their was a serene calmness that took over them after their confession...as if this is what they needed at the end...
few words of love to heal...!!!
Finally they came out of their dark time...And now Itz juz love and hapiness around them...!!!
Their love making was one of the best I have ever read... them reliving their first night...
Two parched lovers basking in the love of their mate...After a long time of loneliness...It was juz simply beautiful...!!!
Very very wonderful update di...
Again u have created magic here...!!!
No words can be enough to praise you..
eagerly waiting to read the next phase of this story... plz continue soon...lodz of love...mwah..

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