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Sanavi

@Sanavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#661

Wow... the update is really good.

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aaliya dev raichand

@rarshiaaliyak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#662

OMG...

i cried,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,😭

i laughed...😆

i blushed...☺️

and i totally loved it...❤️

i was fracking awesome...😊

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#663

yahooo!!! i am so happy for them!

happy days are here again! :)

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#664

Wonderful update
Loved it
Beautifully written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#665

This chapter defines the importance of communication,,,, they truly knew they were the only ones for each other.. their fears were born of fatigue and loneliness amidst times of desolation and they did what most of us may do at one or more time in our lives.. built up walls to encase their grief..

The changes are already there.. Khushi reacquainting her self with their home.. not worried about a mess- letting it go.. a relaxed mind, a relaxed body - I can hear those little "swimmers" yelling for joy as they race each other ; -) .. their love making was delightfully written.. (reaches for cold water!)

"It's beautiful when you find someone that is in love with your mind. Someone that wants to undress your conscience and make love to your thoughts. Someone that wants to watch you slowly take down all the walls you've built up around your mind and let them inside. " ... (auth. unknown)

A very wise and good friend (Arshi67 ) thank you ! - stated that the quote above defines our writer ji's style of writing, this is her interpretation - - " The feeling of it always being beyond the physical, the conviction that it's janam janam ke liye. A true meeting of souls "

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#666

that was awesomely amazing. ...best update of urs...
loved it...can't wait to read more...

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#667

Being able to get every remorse, pain and guilt which has been gnawing them, eating them up inside, off their chests helped them to have a closure from their suffering for the last few years. It must be very painful to listen to the loved one's pain from her/his own mouth and seeing that she/he was putting all the blame on herself/himself for every problem occurred in their married life. But this kind of closure was so necessary to start a new by leaving every bad thing behind.

Even in this emotional state, they could managed to bring smile to each other's faces. And that was the secret that makes their life perfect even in imperfect circumstances. And they moved on in their daily routine by having dinner, drinking wine, by having no desire to shop for groceries but having ultimate energy to make love twice in a row. This update contained many emotions, from remorse to humour, from hunger to hotness.

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Param

@pup03

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#668

Awesome part.. everything was really amazing.. Arnav's heartfelt apologies, Khushi not letting her dear husband to take all the blame, Arnav opening about losing his mother and daughter and the way he closed himself to see that he can't give only one thing which Khushi have asked BABY.. was very disheartening to see so much in love couple losing out to each other.. however their desperation to connect physically and emotionally was superb.. loved the passionate, hot, sensuous love making of our dear ARSHI who are here to go ahead with their journey with a new start and most important part of this journey was the love which they shared for each other.. Arnav's Khushi, Khushi's Arnav.. love them and their love.. looking forward to cute romance of this beautiful couple... loved the amazing update..

thanks for pm 😊

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deblina

@maitydeblina

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#669

Wow the most awaited update:)
It made my day,after stalking this thread finally result was fruitful:)
That was a fabulous update:)
First part was little intense,opening up and accepting thhe flaws most toughest work
u v described beautifully both arshi's outbburst... great job:)
Next part no words ..u keep up with the teasers...very sensuous update:)
Last part was so sweet,arnav sent khushi flowers..:)
Let see how it goes... eagerly waiting for nnext update:)
Thanks for the update:)
Update soon:)
PS: fire and ice peerfect,u truly justified what u v writte
too hot to handle in thst case ice neautralize the temperature;)')

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#670

❤️ 😃

Those are all the feelings that I had as I read and when done with reading your fantastic ,hot,important update...

For a man, to communicate and articulate in a way that one's heart wants to jump out of its crevice with brimming overwhelming love ,,,is rare...very rare... Words are important ..Expression is important... Communication is absolutely important... And how well he does it...not just says but feels and does... So ,I have to say this fictional Arnav might be the perfect person that I keep falling in love ( too bad:)) again and again...His guilt, confession, regret just pours out in abundance almost making one want to just erase any bad memory that makes him feel that way... I almost wanted to hold and sooth him( too bad I can't :))... His genuineness shines through ..His sincerity is heartwarming...His openness is endearing..His charm is addictive...His romance is dreamy ...His passion is all consuming... His want and need to make everything alright for his girl is just charming...not to mention his blue eyes that keep turning dark grey from passion... Now how in the world would Khushi stand a chance to resist him:)!!! .. And so she did the right thing .. Made him hers all over again..And he reciprocated hundred times more... What a beautiful communication leading to passion and bright future update this was!! I love how you have written Khushi with layers.. Shades..Real and all woman...

One smashing update... Kudos girl...Take a bow..You rock...Am reaching for some burgundy drink myself 😊

Edited by Serene77 - 9 years ago