FF: RAJVEER AND NAINA : THE MYSTERY BEGINS updated Pg159 - Page 56

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

Ohhh my my !!! Its sooo sooo GOOD ! Thats all I can say right now.. Continue soon ! :)


hahaha alryt I got that 😉thankuuu 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome awesome awesome update loved it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mujhe bhi ice cream khaani hai Rajveer ke hatho se!!! Plz kuch karo Ria!!! Aww kya update tha...each dialogue was filled with romance...you the best part of ur fic is each scene has such intensity of love Ki readers ko bhi Vo emotions mehsus hote hai...what eyelocks...!! The staring of Raina...and sabse badhke your use of RN tune!! You know what jaha tum likhti Ho Ki RN tune playing, Mein actually uss tune to bajte hue mehsus krti Hu..paagal Hu na Mein thodi...hehehe...

Plz update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 0913155

Awesome awesome awesome update loved it😃


Lolz... thank you thank you thank you 😆😉
Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: m.bahety

Mujhe bhi ice cream khaani hai Rajveer ke hatho se!!! Plz kuch karo Ria!!! Aww kya update tha...each dialogue was filled with romance...you the best part of ur fic is each scene has such intensity of love Ki readers ko bhi Vo emotions mehsus hote hai...what eyelocks...!! The staring of Raina...and sabse badhke your use of RN tune!! You know what jaha tum likhti Ho Ki RN tune playing, Mein actually uss tune to bajte hue mehsus krti Hu..paagal Hu na Mein thodi...hehehe...

Plz update soon..


Awww... 😳😛 Kya gadbad ghotala ho raha hai Megha, ice-cream an all haan 😉 ye lo <!@ ice-cream wo bhi RED, pyar se bhara hua upar tak 😛😉
Glad you liked it! 😳 Thank you. That's what I want, readers to feel the intensity of love. ❤️😳❤️ Thank you ki tum such mein uss tune ko yaad karti ho, feel karti ho. Because that's exactly what I want my readers to do. That's exactly what I do when I read a fanfic. If ever I read, because I don't get much time to read. 😕 Nahi yaar trust me pagalpanti nahi hai, this is your true dedication towards Rajveer-Naina 😳 I love you for that. 😳❤️
Will update soon! 😳👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aalina.

Kya baat.. Kya baat...u have chosen on of my Fav song. U remember I have posted few lines of this song..when they were talking n assuring each other with their eyes😆😆.

Naina,seriously,u r so unromantic🥺...Rajveer has planed all this and uuff..spoiled the entire mood of my hero😔..poor Rajveer...then this small questioner 😕😕..

Finally u have updated their dancing scene..beautifuly..waiting for so long. Love the entire sequence..


Hey Aalina I was going through the comments n realized I missed replying to your comment here. First of all I m really sorry for replying late. 😕 Thank u so much for liking the update. 😊 That's great, I m happy I chose your favorite song, unconsciously though 😉 yes now that you have written I remember you did mention it in a comment 😊

Well Naina is not unromantic she is just confused and scared to take the next step. Koi na spoil kar dia to, aide badey badey academies mein aisi choti choti batein hoti rhti hain 😉 aisi baaton we hi to pyar badhta hai 😛
Yes finally you all get the dance sequence. Sorry for keeping you all wait for so long. But I hope the wait was worth it thank you sooo much ! Sorry again for the late reply! 😳
Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cadet Naina 'ah' Singh ke dimaag mein chal kya raha hai ? Ladki kaafi 'bigad' gayi hai ;) What kind of a next step does she want her Rajveer sir to take ? Hmmm... Lagta hai kaafi kuchh pak raha hai madam ke dilo-dimaag mein... The last portion was quite naughty ! Rajveer's, "Ab so jayein?" at the end just cracked me up ! Bichaari Cadet Naina singh ! :( It seems she'll have to take the "first step" herself ! Bcoz yeh Rajveer toh kuchh karne se raha ! ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

Cadet Naina 'ah' Singh ke dimaag mein chal kya raha hai ? Ladki kaafi 'bigad' gayi hai ;) What kind of a next step does she want her Rajveer sir to take ? Hmmm... Lagta hai kaafi kuchh pak raha hai madam ke dilo-dimaag mein... The last portion was quite naughty ! Rajveer's, "Ab so jayein?" at the end just cracked me up ! Bichaari Cadet Naina singh ! :( It seems she'll have to take the "first step" herself ! Bcoz yeh Rajveer toh kuchh karne se raha ! ;)


Hahaha ab bhai jab samne itne s... insaan ho to kya chal sakta hai aur dimag mein 😉 Ladke ki sangati aur harkaton ka nateeja hai warna to sudhri hui hi thi 😆 Well a 'kiss' at least 😉 ab itna to banta hai yaar! 😆 Rajveer ke dilo-dimag mein tak pak bhi gaya hai CT (whistle) bajne ki der hai 😉 ohhh God yes hahaha! 😆😛 To Rajveer ko aisa nai karna chahiye tha feelings ki band baja di 😉😆 Haan purey Season 1 Rajveer kahan le paya first step 😉😡 hunn seriously! Kisi kaam ka nhi hai Rajveer 😉😛
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Disappointed by the fact that he didn't ask her to feed him with ice-cream, she creases her brows. Getting bold, she fills the same spoon with ice-cream and holds it in front of his mouth, waiting for him to have it. He keeps looking into her eyes and slowly, holding her hand he puts the spoon into his mouth, not breaking the eye contact. At last Naina lowers her eyes.

They sit on the couch next to each other. "Main apse ek baat puchun?" "Pucho!" He faces her, folding his left leg and right foot on the floor "Aap mujhey kyun force karte hain iss tarah dekhne ko?" "Kis tarah?" he dares her to answer. They keep staring each other (fast Rajveer-Naina tune begins). A smile comes on Rajveer's lips, seeing her getting nervous and feeling shy at the same time. Naina lowers her eyes. Taking a deep breath , Rajveer asks "kya tumhe pasand nahi hai ye?" Her cheeks go red out of shyness, Rajveer notices that and smiles.

"Hum yahan se kab jayenge?" she asks, trying to ignore his question. "Kyun? Tumhe yahan acha nahi lag raha?" "Mujhey KMA ki yaad aa rahi hai" Creasing his brows, getting angry but keeping a check on his voice, he just simply says "hmm..." and gets up to leave. "Mera matlab..." she starts to explain but he cuts her "rehne do Naina! I can understand. Main aata hun bahar ghoom kar", he leaves shutting the door too hard.

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Dr. Shalini and Yudi share the same room. "Ma'am I think Brigadier Chandok ne ye bohot acha kia""Kya acha kia Cadet Yudi?" asks Dr. Shalini, removing her eye make up with the help of cotton, sitting in front of mirror. "Yahi ki har room mein ek ladka aur ek ladki ko rehne ko bola". Holding the cotton in front of her, staring at Yudi through the mirror, Dr. Shalini bashes her eyelashes several times, before she says, smiling forcefully, "And why is it that Cadet?" "Nahi, like raat ko agar koi problem hui, you should always have a gentleman beside you, you know" "Really Cadet Yudi? Wow! That's really a great thought". Suddenly a paper lying on the floor flies and touches his feet. Unable to understand that it's just a piece of paper, Yudi shouts "Chuha! Chuha!".He goes to Dr. Shalini, frightened and holds her tightly by her shoulders and looks behind him to notice what exactly is it. Dr. Shalini looks through the mirror that it's just a piece of paper, she looks heavenwards, a smile on her face. She pats his hand holding her shoulder and says, "it's okay Cadet that was only a paper. Don't worry" Realizing that it is indeed just a paper, Yudi sighs and a smile comes on his lips automatically. "Chalo Cadet, I am very tired. Need rest now" smiling they greet each other 'good night' and sleep.

Huda and Dr. Mishra share the same room. Habitual to praying before sleeping and performing few bed time yoga, Dr. Mishra was engrossed in doing so, sitting on a mat, on the floor of her room. Suddenly Huda enters the room, not anticipating that he'll find Dr. Mishra performing yoga, he utters, getting surprised and scared at the same time "O teri!" In her red night dress, Dr. Mishra looks sizzling. "Yaar Huda agar ye sotey waqt bhi itni katilana dikhegi, to tujhey raat ko neend kaise ayegi?" Huda whispers to himself. "I am trying to concentrate Cadet Huda. Kya aap apni faltu baatein band karenge?" asks Dr. Mishra, still maintaining the same position, her eyes closed. "Sorry Ma'am! Par apko kaise pata chala ki main hun?" "Cadet Huda concentrate karne ka yahi maza hai, humein shant mahol chahiye hota hai concentrate karne ke liye. Agar thoda sa bhi disturbance hua to concentration break ho sakta hai. Aur aap jab samne ho to concentrate kar kaise sakta hai koi?" "Kyun main kya itna handsome hun kya?" asks Huda in a naughty way. "Handsome nahi distracting". Then she adds, before he could comment, "in a negative way!"

"Ma'am Huda jahan hai ladkiyan khud hi distract ho jaati hain, ab iss mein Huda ki kya galti hai? Waise maine sunna hai yoga subah uth kar kia jaata hai!" Getting up, Dr. Mishra says, "Cadet Huda, yoga kabhi bhi kia ja sakta hai. Par, har time ke liye alag-alag yoga allotted hai. We just have to follow that". "Waise Ma'am agar main apke saath rahun, to bohot kuch seekh sakta hun" "Yes, Huda. But I wonder agar main apke saath zada time tak rahi to main jo janti hun wo bhi na bhul jaun". Laughing Huda says "Madam ji aap bhi na, mazak acha karti ho".

Alekh shares the room with Neelu. Neelu puts her hands around his neck and says "kya baat hai beedu, aaj to bada rapchik lag raha hai". Looking anywhere but at her out of irritation he says, "apun bhi kahan aakar fass gya. Issey acha to hota apun KMA mein hi rehta". Pulling his hair from back, with a slight jerk Neelu scolds "zada na shanapanti mat dikha samjhana?" Then tracing the right side of his face from his forehead to his chin, she says "chor rahin hun aaj tujhey kyunki aaj tu itna handsome lag raha hai na, boley to insaan lag raha hai, to mann nahi kara raha tujhse pange lene ka". "Tujhe kab se mujh par daya aane lagi?" asks Alekh, looking at his left, to ignore eye contact with her. "Mujhey to..." as she starts to speak her right foot slips, Alekh holds her tightly by her waist before she falls.Holding him tightly by his coat, she laughs and says, "dekha tujhey bhi meri fikr hai". "Apun ko teri nahi, apni fikr hai" replies Alekh, looking into her eyes. Unable to understand what he meant, she asks "matlab?" "Agar apun ke yahan hotey hue tujhey kuch ho gaya, to tera bhai apun ko nahi chorega. Darta nahi hai apun ussey, par apun ko zada tension nahi pasand. Bus isliye apun sambhal raha hai tujhey. Tu zada soch mat, tere ghutno mein dard ho jayega" teases Alekh. Getting away from her, he says "apun bahar ja raha hai" "kyun?" "apun ka mann nahi lag raha yahan" "itne mushkil se hum dono ko waqt mila hai ek saath rehne ka, aur tujhey bahar jaane ki padi hai?" Then again embracing him by his neck, she says "chal na kuch romantic baatein karte hain" "apun se nahi hota ye romance-shomance. Ye sub tum ameeron ke chochley hain. Apun ko inn subse durr hi rakh tu" "Tu kuch din mere saath reh le tujhey ye sub pasand aane lagega". "Tu kuch din ki baat kar rahi hai, saala yahan ek raat nahi guzarr rahi hai" "Tu kya ek pal ke liye pyar se baat nahi kar sakta Alekh?" disappointed, she goes away from him. Realizing that he shouldn't have spoiled her mood, Alekh smiles a little, then says "Acha na, tu ye baat apun ko aisi bhi to bol sakti thi na! Apun se durr janey ki kya zarurat thi?" Listening him speaking so dearly to her for the first time, melts her heart and brings a smile in her lips. "To chalna!" says Neelu, coming closer to him again. "Kahan?" "Kuch karein!" "Kya karein?" asks Alekh, unable to understand what is she asking. "Ab ye bhi tujhey main bataun?" replies Neelu, and hugs him tightly. Smiling, Alekh hugs her back.

****

Getting into the girl's room, Rajveer switches on the light. Finding her sleeping peacefully, Rajveer pulls the quilt on her. Still sleeping soundly, she tries to brush her hair off her face, but fails to do so. Noticing that she is facing problem in brushing off the hair, Rajveer brushes off her hair himself. As soon as he does that, she grabs his hand and turns to her right, without waking. Rajveer tries to pull his hand away, but fails. Then at last he succeeds in doing so. Going away from her quietly, he gets out of the room and closes the door.

As soon as the door closes, she gets up and sits straight, smiling she pushes away the quilt off her. Grabbing the mobile phone from the bedside, she calls someone and says "Hello, maine apna kaam shuru kar dia hai. Ab bus tum koi rasta nikalo ye pata lagane ka ki wo konsa raaz hai jo Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat sub se chupa raha hai. Aur wo raaz humein humare maksad tak pohnchne mein kaise madad karega! Theek hai tum fikr mat karo", saying this she ends the call. "Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat. Ab jo main tumhari life mein aa gayi hun, to aasani se to peecha chorne nahi wali", smiles Natasha.

Naveen's voice over -

Ye duniya bhi kitni ajeeb hai jissey hum apna subse acha dost mante hain, aksar wohi humara dushman bann jata hai. Aur jissey hum sochte hain ki humein bach kar rehna chahiye, aksar wohi humara dost bann jata hai. (Smiling) Aur kabhi kabar dost se badh kar bhi!
Naina ke samne ab KMA ke mushkil tasks ko pura karne ke alawa bhi ek important kaam aa gaya hai, KMA ko inn traitors se bachane ka. Ab dekhna ye hai ki Naina kis tarah se apne dono motives ko successfully pura karegi.

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Naina waits for sometime for Rajveer to return back. Suddenly she hears the sound of lightning and she gets scared, not for her own well being, but for Rajveer's. Pulling the door by it's handle, she gets out of the room to search him, as she crosses an area which is like a balcony, she finds Rajveer standing there, resting his back against the wall, his arms crossed, serious and looking outside the shower of rain. Seeing him, at last, fine, Naina breaths a sigh of relief. Seeing him serious, contracts her heart. She runs to him, pulls him back by his arm, to look at her. "Aap kahan the? Jante hain main kitni pareshan ho gayi thi? Waise hi aap gussey mein gaye the mujhey darr tha ki kahin main Bhaiya ki tarah apko bhi..." Listening to her words makes him angry, he shouts at her "kuch nahi hua hai Naveen ko"! His words makes her to shiver. She keeps staring at him and asks, almost like a whisper, in utter surprise "Kya matlab?"

Turning back, to avoid looking into his eyes, he says "mera matlab, tum kyun humesha Naveen ke barey mein sochti rehti ho Naina? Please kabhi to apne barey mein soch lia karo. You know what mujhey tumse baat hi nahi karni, so jatey hain", saying this he picks up the pillow from the bed, placing it on the hand of the sofa, he rests his head on the pillow, crossing his arms, he stares at the ceiling and starts thinking.

Seeing him sleeping like that, she goes to him and holds his pillow to pull it. Opening his eyes, he looks at her, giving a quick look to him she again shifts her vision to the pillow and tries to pull it again. Smiling a little, and continuing his stare, he presses his weight of head on the pillow to make it difficult for her to pull it free. (Rajveer-Naina tune starts). She continues with her effort. Failing at last, she sits besides him on the floor, on her knees. "Main apko yahan nhi soney dungi" she declares, looking into his eyes. He keeps staring her, his arms crossed, "to aap iss waqt mujhey iss room se nikalne ke barey mein soch rahi hain?" teases Rajveer. "Mera matlab..." blushes Naina. "Please aap bed pe so jaiye, main yahan so jaungi". Turning towards her, he says "What about hum dono bed pe so jayein?" This makes her to lower her eyes out of shyness. Then he continues, "beech mein pillow rahenge, don't worry", smiles Rajveer, as they stare each other. Both of them smile.

He waits for her to answer. "I think humein aise nahi sona chahiye" "Kyun tumhe mujh par bharosa nahi?" he asks casually. Looking at him, she says "nahi aisi koi baat nahi, mujhey aap par pura bharosa hai". As soon as Naina says this, Rajveer's smile fades, remembering Naveen's words "Mujhey tujh par pura bharosa hai Raj, main janta hun ki main iss mission ke barey mein jo bhi baat tujhse share karta hun, wo bus hum dono ke beech mein hi rahengi". A smile, which is a mixture of happiness and sadness, again comes on his lips, after thinking about his best friend Naveen. Looking heavenwards, he closes his eyes, as if he is trying to hide his pain. As if he is afraid, Naina would succeed in reading him clearly. Then Rajveer gets up and both of them head towards the bed and sleep.

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow amazing update. raj is soo cute naina being innocent. Lovely update. Update soon

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