FF: RAJVEER AND NAINA : THE MYSTERY BEGINS updated Pg159

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cSaiP

@cSaiP

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#561

I just love the way...story is proceeding..😳

Awesome writer u are dear👏

The way they talk without uttrng words...those little glowing sparks of love...both share up😳😳😳 so beautiful 😳😳😳

Raj though clearly aware of how shy naina feels n blushes on his sweet doings...still continues...alwas a step ahead in it...😆😆

Great going gal😳😳

Sorry ...commenting after so long...actually busy with family n colg...but hatsoff gal...u know very well how to keep the readers hooked ...

Even if I am not able to read the chapter... As n on update...still later I continue all the chapters in flow...just love it 😳

Thanks a lot 4 pm...continue soon..😊😊😊

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani
Wow amazing update. raj is soo cute naina being innocent. Lovely update. Update soon

Thank you 😊

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: cSaiP
I just love the way...story is proceeding..😳
Awesome writer u are dear👏
The way they talk without uttrng words...those little glowing sparks of love...both share up😳😳😳 so beautiful 😳😳😳
Raj though clearly aware of how shy naina feels n blushes on his sweet doings...still continues...alwas a step ahead in it...😆😆
Great going gal😳😳
Sorry ...commenting after so long...actually busy with family n colg...but hatsoff gal...u know very well how to keep the readers hooked ...
Even if I am not able to read the chapter... As n on update...still later I continue all the chapters in flow...just love it 😳
Thanks a lot 4 pm...continue soon..😊😊😊

--->Glad you are liking the story.

--->Oh thank you so much for the compliment. 😳

--->Haha! That I guess is the most romantic time they share.

--->Yes he has to be a step ahead or else how will he show his domination 😉😆

--->Thank you so much sweety! 😳😳

--->No problem about late comments. Feel free to comment whenever you get time. 😊

--->I guess that's what is the job of a writer to keep his/her reader hooked isn't it? 😊 I am glad I am able to keep your interest till today, hope I'll be able to maintain your interest throughout. 😊

---> Thank you for maintaining the flow. Late doesn't matter flow of story is what needed 😊

---> No problem about the PM. Will continue soon. 😳

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Sanchari

@BedouinMe

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#564

Bhai, is baar KMA waale kaafi sudhre huye nikle.. Atleast Raj Naina ko romance karne itni phursat toh de di.. Lagta baki saare "after party" syndrome se guzar raha hai.. ;) Ok, now when aap ne apne iraado ki bhanak de hi di hai, I really can't wait.. ;) Update soon !

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: BedouinMe
Bhai, is baar KMA waale kaafi sudhre huye nikle.. Atleast Raj Naina ko romance karne itni phursat toh de di.. Lagta baki saare "after party" syndrome se guzar raha hai.. ;) Ok, now when aap ne apne iraado ki bhanak de hi di hai, I really can't wait.. ;) Update soon !

Oh god 'irradon ki bhanak' 😆😆😆 You are impossible 😆😆😆

Alright KMA waley nahi bhagwan ki kripa baras rahi hai saath saath Dr.Mishra ki bhi 😆😉 Will update soon. 😉

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m.bahety

@m.bahety

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#566

Aww that was so cute yaar!! I love you so much for the fic yaar...maja aa Gaya yaar...and ye Naina bhi na budhu hai Puri...ek to Rajveer ke sath akele time spend krne ko mauka Mila and Vo hai Ki KMA ko yaad kar rahi hai 😡 hadd hoti hai ye to...bichara Raj kya karega, room se bahar jaane ke alava...

Plz update soon!!!

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0913155

@0913155

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#567

Naina is sooo budhu yaar😃😆😉loving this ff sooo much😛😆😃superb plz continue soon thanks for pm😉😛😆

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: m.bahety
Aww that was so cute yaar!! I love you so much for the fic yaar...maja aa Gaya yaar...and ye Naina bhi na budhu hai Puri...ek to Rajveer ke sath akele time spend krne ko mauka Mila and Vo hai Ki KMA ko yaad kar rahi hai 😡 hadd hoti hai ye to...bichara Raj kya karega, room se bahar jaane ke alava...

Plz update soon!!!

Hahaha Thank you for liking it 😳 love you tooo 😳❤️ hahaha wo buddhu nahi, nervous hai 😉 nervousness mein KMA ki yaad aa rahi hai 😆😆 ohho tension not ab manayegi bhi Naina hi 😳❤️

Will update soon! 😳