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Clara20

@Clara20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

awesome start dear...

loved it,,,waiting for next part

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Hey your PM has made me happy at once like a child got a candy and also lil scared too LOL...coz ur stories have great depth of emotions flooding through out & also moves one heart & mind disturbing them in making one think so much and feel alot abt the characters and story...dont knoiw abt any but its the case of me girl...😆😆

And presently busy with exams and i cant take that risk

from ur last story "Behinds the scenes of life" I have become ur fan of ur writings...

THanks for starting another new SS firstly 😃

And coming to the Prologue...

Mature,dark and rough type of love stories I'm always interested to read and love them...

Here Madhu's yearning to have a glance of her daughter was expressed very greatly 👏...and u r an excellent writer to express feelings in depth and there's no need of mention how u have portrayed her feelings...😃

About Rishabh i feel may be he had got misguided by any third person in Madhu's matter so may be it wud be the reason of his hatred and wrath on madhu...😕

seems here madhu has to fight alot for herself...in this story

The prologue is so intriguing and it made me attached to the storyline...

looking forward eagerly to read the story and thank u for the PM dear 😊

( Though il be late to comment and short in comments

dont mind me as i cant give a long comment till 2months more until exams finish LOL)😆 Keep me updated too 😊

Edited by Nithunavi - 10 years ago

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Interesting prologue why rk hate madhu so much? Pls cont waiting

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

wow this was just fabulous swags⭐️ Prologue and the ss concept is simply brilliant very interesting !! 👏 The moment when madhu saw her daughter her heart was in so much pain her soul was crying for her she really was missing her daughter so much and her past must be very heartbreaking that now she mean nothing to her own daughter and husband !! Really felt bad for her hope she gets her happiness back !! But Rk gosh looks like he dont trust or dont want to love Madhu anymore moreover he must be unaware that what must have madhu suffered !!

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Thanks for writing new RM story and pm 🤗

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Kawan

@Kawan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

interesting it is..

I'm in to read this..

madhu is no longer have any place in her family life.

and have to come like thief to see her daughter..

loved it

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silverfire

@silverfire

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

A dark story for mature readers. I'm game for it.

Love the prologue.

Very intriguing...

Madhu is forbidden inside her own house. She has to sneak in to see her daughter on her birthday.

What happened?😲

Waiting to read the story.😛

Congrats for the new story.👏

Thanks for the PM.

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ashitha235

@ashitha235

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Hey thanks for giving another story😊 It was very touching... Seeing her only daughter drifting away from her is not easy to handle for any mother... also to know it is done by her own husband... RK is drinking even on his daughter's birthday shows he is not happy... interesting prologue... pls continue soon...

Thanks for the pm😊