SS: Make Me Yours|Sneak Peek of Part 6|12/1 - Page 19

superb update yagya...
well written...
nice words by khushi to shyam...
hope he doesnt succeed.. & arnav cums in on time...
continue soon..
thnks 4 dpm..

awesome updt
waiting for next part

Fantastic update

Ooo no more mu between Arnav and khushi

The prologue cracked me up 😆 This is a very very different Arnav who is really funny and is worried about his izzat! Lol xD nicely written and im surprised you have handled comedy well 👏

Originally posted by: Rish_Rubles

The prologue cracked me up 😆 This is a very very different Arnav who is really funny and is worried about his izzat! Lol xD nicely written and im surprised you have handled comedy well 👏

Part 1 was equally fabulous! Khushi is saved by him and finally they are friends but that Sheetal here too 😡 I hate her. What a pain in the ass. She is just one irritating personality everywhere. Showing too much of PDA agh.

Lol khushiz brain is awesome. Just by her one sentence she made her detach from Arnav and run away from there like a headless animal 😆 Good one!

Now that she had invited him to her party, khushi is with him. Arnav shouldnt have left Khushi all alone with Shyam! He should have known if sheetal is like that shyam will be the same idiot too. But good that he is now there in the room on time before Shyam can fully force himself upon her :)

But will Khushi be okay? Will she be angry on Arnav for bringing her to such people and such party. Will she blame him or instead beautiful love will bloom between them.

Jo bhi ho Arnav sheetal story is off since he wouldnt want to see her face even after what Shyam did to Khushi

Good one, update soon, waiting

I repeat, I am known to be one of the most hilarious persons in my group and Mally also feels that, isn't it Mally? But I cannot WRITE comedy because my hilariousness comes from voice modulation and expressions which I cannot do here.

But this was something I will be proud of. Ab Aage Kya Hoga Yeh Tho Main Bol Nahi Sakti! Thank you so much for your lovely comments.

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.

I repeat, I am known to be one of the most hilarious persons in my group and Mally also feels that, isn't it Mally? But I cannot WRITE comedy because my hilariousness comes from voice modulation and expressions which I cannot do here.

But this was something I will be proud of. Ab Aage Kya Hoga Yeh Tho Main Bol Nahi Sakti! Thank you so much for your lovely comments.

Six months since you posted this story, right? 😳
So sorry for being SO late. But don't worry, I'm catching up with everything.
Now, to the story. The concept's very cute! Loved how Khushi mistook her room and caught Arnav in a, umm, very compromising position in the prologue! 😆
Arnav's teasing ventures through the chapters were all so cool and funny! Also, it was admirable how they both developed an easy camaraderie over the trip and Sheetal's advances!
Oh how I wish all annoying people were high on make-up so that we could use this ingenious trick that Khushi tried with Sheetal!
It was so nice of Arnav to take her to the party and it was just so super-cool of him to introduce her as his date!
But, the main thing is that why do guys like Shyam mind so much? Khushi had just set free a poor pigeon, right? So why the drama in the room aside?
I'm seriously confused with the ways of life. 😳
Hope Arnav would come out of his anger-trance soon and teach Shyam a lesson worth remembrance!

Nice updates loved it