Arhi FF 'Celestial Moon' Ch 18 updated on 31 May 2016

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Payal is arnav's girlfriend n she is n arnav both are seems in love so how khusi n he will have a scope so lets see how this happens

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

I don't believe it! Payal and Arnav...!

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Omggg!!! Its payal with arnav... unbelievable. .

Can't imagine that kiss and after that with payal.. i guess this is the first story i read on the forum, payal paired with arnav. .

Is kushi's story a hint to the future track? ??

Very interesting twist dear..

can't wait for the next update. ..

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

WOW...Vani..., You are great... I was thinking on the lines of Sheetal for Arnav's girlfried...but Payal...seriously.. But you did bring up Sheetal ...as Shyam's current GF.. I am happy though with the way Arnav, Khushi and Shyam unhesitantly talk about their sex life..But considering their age around 30's its only natural.

I am loving this Shyam.

So, as Khushi is in with her story, so are you...only thing is Vanhi, hiope you are not going to face writers block or dilemma to whether pr not get Arnav and Payal apart and get Arnav and Khushi together.. Now how is Khushi going to proceed with the plot..more importantly, what will get Payal and Arnav apart... Arnav is very level headed and controlledwith his emotions..very mature. Payal seems docile enough and very much in love with Arnav..I can't wait to read more...

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Jay

@jduke

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Payal as Arnav's girlfriend really???😆...nice twist. Is there any validation or just his instincts for Aman to think Arnav and Payal won't be together for long?

Kushi novel Nishi-Amit is interesting. Are we heading in inception direction 😉? Three women in novel do they have any significance in Arnav's life too?

I think may be Kushi will start discussing her novel plot with Arnav?😛

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Ohkayyy... Payal and Arnav ... Kissing and much more in the bedroom ... Hard to digest for me ... But I'm all ears .. I just simply love to read what you write ... And I am a curious to know how this Arnav and Khushi are going to come together ... I am with Aman with this one ... But it's hard cuz Arnav and payal are in love here ...

Nice story .. I loved the update

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Apeter

@Apeter

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Vahni Arnav and Payal together.. Nooo it's hard to believe I can't wait for this story to take more turns . Amazing update..

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Read all 4 chapters. Loved it. Very interesting plot. All characters are well placed in their supposed relationship status, now how you are going to twist the plot and leads us to an inevitable Arshi story will be an intriguing read. I eagerly lookforward to read further.

Edited by sslmay11 - 10 years ago