Arhi FF 'Celestial Moon' Ch 18 updated on 31 May 2016

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shafqee80

@shafqee80

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Nyc intro to arshi characters ...so her mother is disabled dats why its shashi "the woman of d house "

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roseycheek

@roseycheek

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

i have read all your work in one day :) I can't wait to read where this story goes..captivating plot..

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Nice update...Now they are friends...Khushi's reaction to the dogs was just like me...me too scared of them...I hope Durga will never wanted to change her neighborhood after meeting Arnav.

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@Naina7

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Paaayyyaaal !? Like reallyyy? I can't believe this n hard to digest it... 😳

Kiss btw ASR & Payal.. Oh nooo. Naahiii !!!

I have to wait for a min to erase the feeling of him kissing his Bhabhi n resume reading as his GF. But, this is surely a twist. But more than a kiss.. !? Ouch..

Looks like Khushi will get inspired with Arnav's love story with his GF or so.

n now Shyam.. So with this u wanna play around with the characters in the show. I get it.. By next chapter, i'll get used to this... 😆 😆

R u hinting that there will be 3 women in Arnav's life? Commitment phobic being his GF n show meaning of true love by Khushi... !!??

Uff, thank god Shyam isn't her type in this story.

Overall.. it's interesting.. Indeed, very interesting plot. Lets see how things turn around.

Edited by -NainaS- - 10 years ago

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manugan

@manugan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

such an interestingplot..payal-arnav-now khushi...in pic...

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256748

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Payal and Arnav really!!!!!

Nice update

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sheen.sk

@sheen.sk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

i know you have already mentioned that Arnav is in love with someone & i was ready but when i read their part & all their cozy moment, cant help but feel unhappy about.. & you know the reason why..
but other side i really loved Khushi & Shyam's bonding & their friendship..
waiting for nxt..

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Darling, sweetheart what are you doing? Playing with us.😆

Payal and arnav really? I know that in this story he is committed with Payal but still it hurt seeing him taking Payal in his bedroom and not Khushi. It will take time to digest all this. But still you nailed it.

And that touch of story of nisha and three man is awesome.

So if I have to connect dots you are hinting then arnav is nisha. Aman is first man who is humiliating him, Payal is one whom he thinks he love and Khushi will be the one who will teach him meaning of true love.

This is second story in which I found Shyam interesting first one is addicted to you.

He seems to be fun loving guy.

I am so looking forward to this story and I like getting addicted to it. And don't you dare leave it incomplete 😉. I will die.

Thanks for brilliant update.

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sweety421

@sweety421

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

I love the way u twist around with characters dear...payal-arnav-khushi... Amazing!!
Arnav and payal truely seems to be love...!!!
But there is a big undercurrent between Arnav and khushi as well...!!
His story will inspire khushi in the future I guess...
Shyam looks an amazing person...
With this update u have made me rilli curious to know how will this turn up in the end...!!??
Very intresting this is going dear...
One heck of an interesting mind u have I must say...!!!!!
Plz plz continue soon

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#120

ok so arnav and payal r together as girlfriend boyfriend..its really painful to see so much love between them...sorry all due to our love for arshi...but i guess will be use to it some how :(...:)

very interesting story khushi is writing...and shyam her bestie thats cool..so their balconies r attached ...thats very nice and romantic...great going :)