Arhi FF 'Celestial Moon' Ch 18 updated on 31 May 2016

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Payal and Arnav really😲...and that to in LOVE...I mean really interesting plot dear.

I love the friendship bonding between Shyam and Khushi.

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Alone111

@Alone111

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Eeerrrmmm payal !!??
Nd their kiss !!! Argh a big no fr me...

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

You know its will be a shocking news for all arshi fan,,right??😉 ars & payal..kissing & so much in love😔 but our khushi is here😃

love khushi & shyam friendship...(actually im loving shyam in your another story)

Are you sending pm??

Bring next update soon

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ranogill

@ranogill

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

every body with every one ..but instead khushi is alone..shyam with sheetal i can digest that..payal's akash kab ayega

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just_juhi

@just_juhi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Found this fic by accident... Sometimes the best things are found that way. 😊

Anyways, this is a great fic you've started and can't wait to read more of it. I'm assuming you've got to introduce all the characters and their various relationships which probably is why there is no Arshi action yet.

So at this point all I have to say is:OMG... Payal & Arnav... Really?!? Totally didn't see that coming! To be honest, it's kinda making me squeamish, especially after what a couple of sentences implied. You probably have your reasons though so I'm not gonna make a huge outcry over it other than to say that I hope they break up soon. 😉 LoL!

Looking forward to more great updates!

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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

You know Vannu, the fact that Arnav and Payal love each other and seem to have chemistry between them sexually too, I keep wondering is it fair to bring Khushi inbetween them?

As much as this is an Arshi story, still I do not want Arnav and Khushi to come together just because this is an Arshi story.

But having said that I trust you. There must be a valid reason why you have put this story under Arshi FF.

Shyam, what kind of low ideologies he has regarding women, is he really telling the truth???

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shafqee80

@shafqee80

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Wow yar payal .arnavs girlfriend ...and shyam khushis best friend ...this is jusT AWESOME

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Payal and Arnav.. Interesting combination... Waiting to how this goes..

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Upon reading some remarks - I do have to wonder

A- what's in name

B - Consenting adults - who are in love can do what they please..

Who are we to decide whom the heart falls in love with... I look forward to reading more.. Payal does seem a little insecure .

Upon spending more time with Khushi , may lead Arnav to realize what Aman sees is lacking in his relationship with Payal.

Shyam I will reserve judgment for now but he seems like a good friend for Khushi ..

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Poju

@Poju

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Aaahhh... Now we know who arnav is dating payal.. Dat is lil unexpected.. Hehehe..

Then again Shyam n khushi being best friends.. Loved this angle..

Arnav n Payal they both seem to be in love.. N they both are equally in this.. N payal seems to be good..But I don understand how arnav n khushi going to get together..

U have no idea how curious n impatient I m to no how how how.. 😛