Arshi TS Possessed Kushi LAST Chapter Pg15 DEC 22 (COMPLETED) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Awesome update 👏
Loved it to the core.Arshi swinging in love
Iloved sheeta's l reaction .Loved family's reaction seeing ARSHI together.


Now Arnav's brin is cooking something mischievous 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
What an OS yaar! 😃 i love mature content by the way! ☺️😉
And i just loved seeing a possessed side of khushi in yours! She gave him a sensual mouth massage, and asking him all that time that is she the only one who had touched him! I was blushing all the while yaar, even i couldn't write it like that! ☺️😉

The way Arnav consoled her than they made love, hae he is so possessive of his Khushi! That damned Sheetal, well she deserves to burn and burn she did in part B when she saw them in their bed in the morning. T

he scene made me choke with laughter where the whole family became the peeping tom! And that line where NK was going to shout Nannav and Akash stopped him. I could only imagine what would have happened if he had been succeeded in waking them up! 😆😉 I just love those type of family scenes. And after reading your story it was as if i was watching a drama enfolding before my eyes, so good are you at creating those scenarios! 😳

The last part where Khushi decided to continue her massage, this time hand massage, it was very good and reading Sheetal burning gave me a sadistic satisfaction! 😉 Waiting for Sheetal's punishment now with bated breath! 😈😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
amazing update dear... loved the family's reaction... khushi is such a tease... 😉
now no one can save Sheetal from Arnav... waiting dear... continue soon ❤️
Edited by christi002 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

What an OS yaar! 😃 i love mature content by the way! ☺️😉

And i just loved seeing a possessed side of khushi in yours! She gave him a sensual mouth massage, and asking him all that time that is she the only one who had touched him! I was blushing all the while yaar, even i couldn't write it like that! ☺️😉

The way Arnav consoled her than they made love, hae he is so possessive of his Khushi! That damned Sheetal, well she deserves to burn and burn she did in part B when she saw them in their bed in the morning. T

he scene made me choke with laughter where the whole family became the peeping tom! And that line where NK was going to shout Nannav and Akash stopped him. I could only imagine what would have happened if he had been succeeded in waking them up! 😆😉 I just love those type of family scenes. And after reading your story it was as if i was watching a drama enfolding before my eyes, so good are you at creating those scenarios! 😳

The last part where Khushi decided to continue her massage, this time hand massage, it was very good and reading Sheetal burning gave me a sadistic satisfaction! 😉 Waiting for Sheetal's punishment now with bated breath! 😈😉


THANK YOU SO MUCH DEAR,
I'm really overleamed after reading your comments.

There was only one line in my mind when I started to write this OS. But even I don't know how I wrote this.. 😉

I'm really happy when the reader understand what we try to say. Just you had written everything without missing anything.

I had no idea how to continue it, but when many of the reader asked to continue it so just thought to write.

I need to write without making the reader disappointed and same time I don't want to give the effect of part A. But I'm really happy you all liked it.

I need to give a best punishment to Sheetal so I'm thinking and thinking..

When my mind come with some weird idea I'll update.
But thank you so much

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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Awesome update 👏
Loved it to the core.Arshi swinging in love
Iloved sheeta's l reaction .Loved family's reaction seeing ARSHI together.


Now Arnav's brin is cooking something mischievous 😳


Thank you so much for your comments dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: christi002

amazing update dear... loved the family's reaction... khushi is such a tease... 😉
now no one can save Sheetal from Arnav... waiting dear... continue soon ❤️


Thank you so much dear.
Don't know when I'll update but I'll not make you wait more
mahirmukhtar thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: akai


THANK YOU SO MUCH DEAR,
I'm really overleamed after reading your comments.

There was only one line in my mind when I started to write this OS. But even I don't know how I wrote this.. 😉
Same here, i thinks it often happens to the writer! 😉 I start with one idea but it just evolve into something else by the the time i reach the end of the story and i still don't know myself that what i have written! 😆😉 Just like that comedy stuff, i just went on and one, transforming my silly thoughts into writing! 😆😉

I'm really happy when the reader understand what we try to say. Just you had written everything without missing anything.
When i read i want to share all my experience with the writer! 😉 And also because my hands talks too much, they just go on writing! 😆😉

I believe that the writer does so much hard thinking & hard work so she /he should be appreciated as well! I know even the longest comment would fall short in appreciation to the writer's hard work, but still a reader must know that it's all for her/him! 😉

I had no idea how to continue it, but when many of the reader asked to continue it so just thought to write.

I need to write without making the reader disappointed and same time I don't want to give the effect of part A. But I'm really happy you all liked it.

I need to give a best punishment to Sheetal so I'm thinking and thinking..
Yeah sure dear take your time, but please do continue. I want her spanked! 😈😉

When my mind come with some weird idea I'll update.
But thank you so much
Sure! 😉 Welcome yaar, it feels good chatting to you! 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Awesome update...Yeh Dil maange more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Nice story...thanks for the PM

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