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Posted: 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Really emotional update..

Hope Armaan monify Shilpa soon..
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ILuvKaran

wow

its an emotional update dear
arsh understand eachother
shona was the shows topper of this part
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sammy4u

nice part

mujhe toh laga tha sab fire escape k yahan sab sun ke khade the
armaan yaar jaldi manalo ab shilpa ko



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yup jaldi mana lega armaan aakhir hero he
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read the parts..
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MAHE JAAN

PART 18

They thought shilpa to unse pehle nikali thi but uski car abhi bhi parking me he so they all return to samjeevani's gate n inform others n thought to wait for shilpa but shilpa andhi ki tarah aati he n toofan ki tarah chali jati he but no one miss the pool of tears in her eyes n get worried for her.

Sid : ab bohot hua pata karna hi padega ki kya chal raha he shilpa ki zindagi me or ye sab kon kar raha he agar koi use tang kar raha he to use to me nahi chodunga"said very angrily"

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Rahul : sirf tu nahi sid humme se koi nahi chodega

All guys nod their head over this

Mayank : kuch bhi karne se pehle hume shilpa se baat kar leni chahiye"said thoughtfully"

Dev : kya baat kar leni chahiye kitni sad lag rahi thi wo tune dekha nahi

Gunjan : har bar jo hum dekhe jo soche wahi sahi nahi hota dev

Dev : tum kehna kya chahti ho

Mayank : wo thik keh rahi he uska matlab he kal ki party yaad nahi kya hua tha waha

Sab ek dam chup ho jate he

Or soch me padte he

Abhi : matlab ye sab dr . armaan ne

Nikki : ho bhi sakta he

Dev or riddhima to jealous ho rahe he with capital J

Dev : no esa nahi ho sakta dekha nahi aap logo ne shilpa ne to dekha bhi nahi ek bar dr. armaan ko no it can't be true"hyperly"

Samrat : dev dev calm down

Dev : calm down how can I kal jo hua wo ek galat fehmi bhi to ho sakti he or how can u think that shilpa dr. armaan se pyaar karti hogi dono me zameen aasmaan ka fark he

Atul : hum sab ye to jante he na ki shilpa kisise pyaar karti h.."but uski baat khatam bhi nahi hoti n dev intrupt him"

Dev : ha pyaar karti he or wo use chod kar chala gaya he ditched her damit or shilpa wahi khadi he mujhe ek mouka bhi nahi dena chahti wo ladka to khush hoga apni zindagi me or shilpa..

Abhi : ye tum kese keh sakte ho ki wo ladka khush hoga

Ab sab abhi taraf dekhte he

Sid : bhai aap kehna kya chahte ho

Abhi : agar wo ladka dr. armaan hi he to kya pichle 6 saalo me humne unhe happy dekha haa wo hum logo ke saath tha par humare saath ho kar bhi nahi tha ye baat koi deny nahi kar sakta

Rahul : he is right guys uske is behaiour ka reason ye ho sakta he

Anjali : khudki asumtion lagane se better he ki kal hum unmese kisise baat kare

Nikki : I think hume shilpa se hi baat karni chahiye agar wo armaan na hua or hum usse is bare me questions karenge to wo thik nahi hoga

All decide to ask this to shilpa tomorrow n left towards their own houses

Here armaan was steel in fire ecape

Armaan : no shona tum apne armaan se jyada der gussa nahi reh sakti janta hu mujhe lekar ye sirf tumhari fikra he tumhara pyaar,narazgi nahi he ye pyaar he chinta he or ab me ye sab dur kar dunga me tumhari har narazgi dur kar dunga bohot tadpe he hum ab ye kuch kadam ki duri tumhare or mere bich mujhse bardash nahi ho rahi shona nahi ho rahi or me janta hu tumse bhi nahi I know u shona more then u know urself tum bhi taras rahi ho mere liye par ziddi hona isliye maan nahi rahi meri ziddi kiddo I will bring u back shona I know u r hard nut to crack jaan but m armaan malik baby"there are many expression on his face from pain,helplessness,yearning,determination n at last smirk"

Armaan : so get ready sweety tum jitna dur jane ki koshish karogi ab me tumhe uthne hi apne paas le aaunga u know me jaanu u know me"he grin"

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N went from there

Shilpa reaches her home n went to check if her masi sleep on not

To her relief her masi is not awake

Dhire dhire karke wo sare gifts apne room me le jaati he

She get freshen up n sit on her bed while seeing every gifts every card every chit again n again

Shilpa smiles at this childish acts of her armaan n shook her head

Shilpa : uff kitni mehnat kar rahe he aap mujhe manane ki I know aapne kuch bhi jan bujhkar nahi kiya shayad me bhi kuch jyada hi naraz ho gayi

While munching her favourite chocolates given by armaan

Shilpa : ummm its so tasty love so much armaan wow this teddy is so cute this cards this chits hayye mere armaan kitni fikra he unhe meri mujhe pacify karne ke liye kya kya kar rahe he

Tab uski nazar un red roses par padti he n she giggle seeing them

Shilpa : uff pura din pareshan kiya mujhe roses bhigwa bhigwa kar aapko ye sari harkate kese sujhti he armaan but its cute"n she starts to laugh"

But use samjh aata he ki wo kya kar rahi he itni zor se hasegi to masi jag jaengi or yaha aagayi to ye sab dekh liya to

So she cover her mouth with her hands n laugh silently

Shilpa : armaan armaan armaan bohot tang kiya na mene aapko ekto aapko kitti sari lag gayi upar se me m sorry jaan but aapko kuch bhi hota he to meri saanse atak jati he me aapse ab or dur nahi reh sakti janti hu aap bhi nahi reh sakte humare bich ye chand kadam ki duri ab mujhe gawara nahi isliye isliye mene decide kiya he me aapko maaf kar rahi hu sun rahe he aap m forgiving u mr. armaan malik

Said as if he was listening her then giggle at her childish acts

Shilpa : hehehehehe me fir se wahi pagli shilpa banne lagi hu jo 6 saal pehle hua karti thi jo apne me hi muskurati thi khudse hi baate karti thi muhaaa love armaan aap ke saath saath me khudse bhi mil gayi aaj ab ye duri I can't bear it fire ecape me to khub gussa dikha diya but ab bardash nahi ho raha hum kitne kareeb the waha"n blush remembering their proximaty"

Shilpa : oh god tu kitna blush kar rahi he shilpa ye kya ho raha he tujhe agar armaan mujhe is tarah dekh le to kehte "OYE HOYE"

She hide her face in her both palms jese ki armaan samne hi ho

Shilpa : I love u armaan

Voice : I love u too jaan

Shilpa ka face abhi bhi uske haatho me chupa hua he

Shilpa : ufff ab mujhe unki awaz bhi sunai dene lagi me pagal ho gayi hu kuch bhi sochti hu kuch bhi sunti hu wo yaha kese ho sakte he wo sad honge na is waqt mene unhe bohot kuch keh diya na aaj

Voice : he deserve it tumhara dil jo dukhaya usne

Shilpa ek dam se apne haath hatati he apne face se n look in the direction of voice

She was freaked out seeing the view he was there leaning against the window panel n smiling at her

Shilpa shocked ho kar uski taraf dekh rahi he

Fir dhire se smile karti he n says

Shilpa : uff tune pagalpan ki sari stages par kardi shilpa pehle unke bare me soch soch kar smile or blush kar rahi thi fir unki aawaz bhi sunai dene lagi tujhe n now u r hallucinating him wow just wow kya me sach me pagal ho gayi hu"getting worried now"

Shilpa : armaan dekhiye me pagal ho gayi aapke pyar me

N armaan he shook his head in disbelief

Shilpa moves closer to armaan n try to feel him

She touch his cheeks n cares it

Armaan immediately closed his eyes feeling her soft touch but his sweet moment break from shilpa's laughter

Armaan uski taraf confusingly dekhta he

Shilpa says while laughing

Shilpa : u completely lost it shilpa ab to tu puri ki puri pagal ho gayi unhe chub hi pa rahi he apni illusion me u become mad seriously"laughing comtinuously"

But she instantly stop n look intensly towards armaan

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Shilpa move towards her him n put her head on his shoulder

Shilpa : I know mene apko bohot chot pahuchai m sorry par me kya karu aap par ek kharoch bhi me bardash nahi kar sakti ye jo gussa hena ye aapke liye nahi mere liye he mujh par he becoz I know aapka accident meri wajah se hua he kyuki aap mere bare me hi soch rahe hoge us waqt hena

N look towards his face seeking for answer with tears in her eyes

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Armaan just smile lightly n shilpa get her answer

Shilpa : me aapke khushi ki wajah banna chahti hu par aapke dard ki wajah ban gayi m sorry me aapse bohot pyaar karti hu armaan bohot jitna kabhi kisise nahi kiya mujhe maaf kar dijiye janti hu is waqt aapko meri jarurat he par me...

Armaan keep his finger on her mouth n shhh her

Armaan : shhh... tum mere dard ki nahi khushiyo ki wajah ho jaan

Shilpa try to intrupt him but

Armaan : shhh me sach keh raha hu tumse hi meri khushiya judi he shona ye dard ye dard tumne nahi diye mujhe ha me us waqt tumhare bare me soch raha tha kya karta me shona tumhare liye mera pyaar badhte badhte deewangi ki sari hade par kar chukka he har pal har ghadi sirf tumhara khayal rehta he tum kesi ho mere bina kese reh rahi hogi mujhe yaad karti ho mujhse pyaar karti itne sawal the par jawab ek bhi nahi din bhar to hospital me kaam kar leta tha us waqt bhi tum har pal saath hoti thi but jab akela hota tumhari yaade or satati mujhe or me kab unme kho jata tha mujhe bhi nahi pata us din bhi yahi hua or wo accident ho gaya tum khudko mere dard ki wajah bata rahi ho par ye sach nahi jaan kyuki tum mere jine ki wajah ho aaj me zinda hu to tumhari wajah se tum janti ho shona wo accident bohot bura tha bohot bada doctor ka kehna tha inte bade accident se mera bacha hi miracle he sirf thori chot aayi shone ye fracture n all warna kuch bhi so sakta tha I was lucky ab tum hi batao me thik thak 1 piece me khada hu yaha tumhare samne sirf tumhare pyaar tumhari prayers ki wajah se ki thi na tumne mere liye prarthana

Shilpa just nod her head with tears

Armaan wipe her tears n takes her in his armaans

Shilpa : I love u

Armaan while kissing her forehead

Armaan : I love u too jaan

Shilpa immediately armaan se dur jati he n doubtfully looking at him

Armaan : kya hua shona abhi bhi naraz ho"confusingly"

Shilpa : R U REAL"confused,hesitate,doubtful"

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Armaan look at her in utter disbelief

Armaan : r u real shona seriously"ask her back with disbelief"

Shilpa : this means m not dreaming

Armaan nod his head in no

Shilpa : this means m not listening things

Again armaan nod his head in no

Shilpa : this means m not hallucinating

Again no

Shilpa : this means m not mad

Again no

Shilpa : this means...

But armaan intrupt her

Armaan : this means I love u so much

N takes her lips in a sweet n small kiss

After few seconds he left her n says

Armaan : ab yakeen hua ki m real with u standing,talking,holding n kissing u"said naughtily"

Shilpa turns tomato red n still in daze over the sudden kiss...

So here is the update hope pasand aaye plzz give ur valuable feedbacks m waiting


love u all

ramya <3

Edited by arsh4heaven - 9 years ago
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Awsommmiiieee!! So the gang is having another panchayat meeting over seeing Shilpa running out crying. Well few were ready to fight and few thought it has something to do with Armaan and that got Dev all jealous and worked up. Well I think this Riddhimma and Dev are kumbh-ke-mele-mein-beechre-bhai-behan, they both are such jealous stubborn stuck ups. Dev needs to learn that when a girl says a no then accept it and step back, not try forcing yourself on her. Actually they all need to learn others privacy, Shilpa isn't a kid agar usse batana hai toh bata degi. But since when they consider this... they are so nosey by god!


Well I like Armaan-Shilpa patch up... Armaan knows she isn't angry but its her love for him makes her so concerned for him. And Shilpa did actually laugh over Armaan's all day antics and tactics he did to pacify her and definitely loved all the gifts he had given her. Oh it was so funny that she thought real Armaan as dream and went on blabbering in front of him... I swear they're so cute. So I hope they have patched up because if they keep fighting anymore would be unnecessary dragging out things... ab bas khatam yaha fight. I'm so waiting to see next day how everyone would react if they saw Armaan walking in with holding Shilpa's hand and they both laughing with each other or doing something cute... it would be so fun to see and that is what I'm waiting for...


Update next chap sooon!! And I'm hoping for some action to happen between Armaan-Shilpa with the nosey gang... maybe Dev in his jealousy says harsh words to Armaan about how he had ditched Shilpa and isn't worthy of her and should leave her alone. Then Shilpa gears up in lioness mode to defend her lion...that would be so fun to see actually, don't you think..?




#P.S.: By the way when are you updating your other ARSH SS 'Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi...' and ARIYA SS 'Mahe Jaan'... right those two stories are on high point for me and I want updates of them SUPER ASAP!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow sissy
awesome update
arsh ka patch up ho gaya
that was so sweet
shilpa thought its not real hehehehe
that was amazing
so gang ki apni alag hi meeting chal rahi he
that dev n riddhima urggg... i hate them
ab aage kya hoga
m so eager
plzzz sissy update soon
n thanks 4 pm

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