ArSh FF 'Mahe Jaan' Part 22 Page 45 25/09/17

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ArshAriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey guys I know meri
ek story abhi start hi hui he or me dusri bhi start kar rahi hu but what to do
mind me ek thought aaya n couldn't help it but to pen down it so here is the
prologue tell me how was it feel free to tell me..

MAHE JAAN (ArSh FF)

Prologue

Girl : Kya bas itna hi
pyar tha aapka mujh par bas haar man gae aap kya ghutne tek diye he humari
mohabbat ne boliye"wid tears running down her eyes"

Boy : Bohat pyar karta
hu me tumse itna pyar jitna kisine kisise nhi kiya ho pagalo deewano ki tarah
chahne laga hu me tumhe par jo me karne ja raha hu wo karna zaruri he hume ye
karna hoga"the girl try to intrupt him but he didn't give her a chance"

Boy : Humara pyar paak
he jaan, koi khot nhi he isme par is waqt mujhe mat roko me sab kuch seh sakta
hu jo mujh par ilzam lage he me wo sab bardash kar lunga par apni mohabbat ko
badnaam hote nhi dekh paunga"he also have tears in his eyes"

The girl just hugged
him tightly n cry on his shoulder n he kissed her hair lightly

Girl : Kya ye karna
zaruri he hum koi or..."still holding him she was saying but boy intrupt her"

Boy : Hmmm bohot
zaruri he aaj humari mohabbat ko galat naam diya gaya he,galat nazaro se dekha
gaya he,kya tumhe bhi ye lagta he ki humne mohabbat nhi gunah kiya he?

The girl immediately replys

Girl : Nahi humne koi
gunah nhi kiya humne mohabbat ki he humara pyar sacha he kya aap..."she stopped
in a mid but he understand what she wants to say"

Boy : Me bhi yahi
manta hu isliye me sabko dikha dena chahta hu ki humne koi jurm nhi kiya pyar kiya he gunah nhi me zamane ko dikhana chahta hu ki hum galat nhi.Kya tum
mera saath dogi "he was looking towards her wid hopeful eyes"

N the girl no voice
come out from her mouth wid teary eyes she just nod her head as if saying him that
I m wid u in ur each n every decision n he, he understand her unsaid wordsn
take her in a bone crush hug they remain in same position for sometime then
they parted away from eachother n he cupped her face in his hand n she hold his
hands they were gazing at each other for sometime after that

Boy : Ab mujhe jana
hoga take care love

Girl : Aap bhi meri
jaan ka khayal rakhiyega"while crying so hard n he just nod his head"

N then he left her n
she collapse on the floor n cryed so hard...

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THIS IS THE TALE OF
LOVE, PAIN, HURT, SEPARATION, JEALOUSY, HARDSHIP, DESTINY... N LOTS OF MUSIC...

So guys plzzz tell me
how was it should I start or not m waiting for ur response...

INDEX 

PART 1 # Page 1

PART 2 # Page 2

PART 3 # Page 3

PART 4 # Page 4 

PART 5 # Page 4 

PART 6 # Page 6

PART 7 # Page 6

PART 8 # Page 7

PART 9 A # Page 8

TEASER
PART 10 # Page 11

PART
9 B # Page 11

PART
9 C # Page 12

PART 10 # Page 13

PART 11 # Page 14

PART 12 # Page 16

PART 13 # Page 17

PART 14 # Page 18

PART 15 # Page 20

PART 16 # Page 22

PART 17 # Page 26

PART 18 # Page 28

PART 19 # Page 31

PART 20 # Page 33

PART 21A # Page 38

PART 21B # Page 42

PART 22 # Page 45

Edited by arsh4heaven - 7 years ago

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow...

A new story on arsh...

Yayyy...

Awesome concept...

Feeling bad for both girl and boy...

Do continue soon...

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sreelekshmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

superbb...kya hua tha un donon ki beech...kuch samajh nahi aa rahi haI..CONTUINUE SOON...

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rahul_coolaz

@rahul_coolaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Prologue seems interesting.
What is the reason behind their separation?
Continue soon and thanks for the pm

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princess369

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Posted: 10 years ago

really nice concept update soon

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Shubh

@ILuvKaran

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Posted: 10 years ago

hmmm interesting prologue

feeling sad for both of them

do continue soon

n do pm me

all the best👍🏼

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ArshAriya

@ArshAriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

MAHE JAAN

PART 1

Girl : Kya bas itna hi pyar tha aapka mujh par bas haar man gae aap kya ghutne tek diye he humari mohabbat ne boliye"wid tears running down her eyes"

Boy : Bohat pyar karta hu me tumse itna pyar jitna kisine kisise nhi kiya ho pagalo deewano ki tarah chahne laga hu me tumhe par jo me karne ja raha hu wo karna zaruri he hume ye karna hoga"the girl try to intrupt him but he don't give her a chance"

Boy : Humara pyar paak he jaan, koi khot nhi he isme par is waqt mujhe mat roko me sab kuch seh sakta hu jo mujh par ilzam lage he me wo sab bardash kar lunga par apni mohabbat ko badnaam hote nhi dekh paunga"he also have tears in his eyes"

The girl just hugged him tightly n cry on his shoulder n he kissed her hair lightly

Girl : Kya ye karna zaruri he hum koi or..."still holding him she was saying but boy intrupt her"

Boy : Hmmm bohot zaruri he aaj humari mohabbat ko galat naam diya gaya he,galat nazaro se dekha gaya he,kya tumhe bhi ye lagta he ki humne mohabbat nhi gunah kiya he?

The girl immediately replys

Girl : Nahi humne koi gunah nhi kiya humne mohabbat ki he humara pyar sacha he kya aap..."she stopped in a mid but he understand what she wants to say"

Boy : Me bhi yahi manta hu isliye me sabko dikha dena chahta hu ki humne koi jurm nhi kiya pyar kiya he gunah nhi me zamane ko dikhana chahta hu ki hum galat nhi he.Kya tum mera saath dogi "he was looking towards her wid hopeful eyes"

N the girl no voice come out from her mouth wid teary eyes she just nod her head as if saying him that I m wid u in ur each n every decision n he, he understand her unsaid words n take her in a bone crush hug they remain in same position for sometime then they parted away from each other n he cupped her face in his hand n she hold his hands they were gazing at each other for sometime after that

Boy : Ab mujhe jana hoga take care love

Girl : Aap bhi meri jaan ka khayal rakhiyega"while crying so hard n he just nod his head"

N then he left her n she collapse on the floor n cried so hard...

The girl wake up with the haste she was sweating badly n tears in her eyes.She look everywhere n sees light in whole room which means its morning.She move her hand towards side stand n took the alarm clock n switch it off.And wid the other hand she wipe the sweat from her face n then she left the bed n move towards window n see the breathtaking few of morning sun rising in the sky n think to her self. 6 saal... pure 6 saal bit gaye me aaj bhi wahi khadi hu,har din wahi ek khawab"she was occupied in her thoughts when her thoughts was broken by the constant ringing of her mobile phone she takes the phone n see caller id wid smiling face she pick the call"

Phone convo:

Girl : Hello

Other side : Kab se tumhe phone kar raha hu tum ab tak so rahi thi.Hello shilpa u there beta??"yes guys she's none other then our heroine our shone uppss sry armaan's shone hehhehehehe"

Shilpa : Dad I m sry I was looking at the breathtaking view of nature.Its so beautiful so pure..."in lost voice"

Shilpa's dad : Shilpa agar or kuch der isi tarah tum nature ki beauty ko enjoy karti rahi to tumhare pass tumhari puri zindagi hogi ye enjoy karne ke liye tab sun rise hi kyu sun set, summer, winter , rainy season tum sab widout any disturbance enjoy kar paogi freely"shilpa was getting confused by his this talks"

Shilpa : dad m not getting it what u r trying to say

Shilpa's dad : its simple dear tumhari job jo nhi rahegi to tum freely sab seasons enjoy kar paogi na"now its click in her mind "

Shilpa : oh my god oh my god dad aap kitna baat karte he aaj mera first day he internship ka oh god me apne first day hi late no ways now u cut the call I have to get ready.

N her dad cut the call while laughing at his daughters behavior.

Shilpa : damn shilpa tu pehle din hi late uff kanha ji plzzz help me k sab thik ho waha sab ache se ho jae plzzz"n she get ready"

After getting ready she wents towards kitchen n find something to eat she pour milk in a bowl wid cornflakes n starts to eat it hurrily.After eating she went infront of her kanha ji n pray

Shilpa : kanha ji aaj mera first day he internship ka plzzz sab kuch thik kar dijiyega ha ha me janti hu aap kya soch rahe he ki ye mera pehla din kese hua me to internship ke 2^nd year me huna wo ese kanha ji sanjeevani me mera pehla din he as an intern yes mene internship start shimla me ki thi ek saal tak but ab to me Mumbai me hu na nayi jagah naye log sab pehle din ki hi feeling de rahha he isliye its my first day."she starts to leave but again turn n says to her kanha ji"

Shilpa : aap to jante he na sab kuch plzzz be wid him always plzzz k now bye sham ko milti hu love u muah..."she give flying kiss to god n left towards her destiny towards sanjeevani"

So here is the first part plzzz tell me how was it m waiting for ur feedback finger crossed n thanks for bearing my non sence 😆

Edited by arsh4heaven - 9 years ago