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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally got caught up with the updates.

The updates were fantasticšŸ‘ā­ļø

Loving the bond between father and son.ā¤ļø

Slowly K is breaking the wall that P has put up.

I don't think she will be able to stop her love for him from coming out. 😳

They both have been thru so much but their love is so powerful that hopefully they will get back together.

Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update Soon,Jaan !I'm waiting ;) :) :P
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Part 16

"He's what?" said both women.

"Krishna's father is alive, Vidya and Shraddha couldn't believe their ears.

"that's good" said vidya

That's bad said Shraddha.

"Didi, its good Krishna's daddy is alive, there is no really love than a real parent's

"really masi?" Vidya nodded.

"Absolutely not!" said her mum. "don't be silly you can't think of ruining your life and Krish's with this, your father told her he is a drug dealer.

"Mum, he was trapped, he isn't bad, masi tell her please"

"Shraddha"

"I'm not listening, Pratigya you can't let Krishna meet.. wait, that's it he already, has the other day remember he kept saying big Krishna, already"

"I don't have to listen to this, I'm an adult, I have been taking care of Krish on my own for long I know whats right for him, and Krishna is his dad, he has all right to be part of his life"

"and Anant, how will he feel?"

"about what?, me and Krishna are just Krish's parents, we don't have feelings for each other, its what is best for Krish that's it"

"Well I still don't trust him but what can I say.." said her mum.

"I will explain to Anant after the party I'm sure he will understand"

"yes, Anant is a decent guy Pratigya don't worry" Vidya masi reassured her.

*

"You going to the party?" Krishna nodded.

"She wanted me to be there, so I guess I should make an appearance" he said straightened his shirt collar.

"Sorry I would come but Lucy and the kids miss me"

"Ian go be with your wife and kids, I'll be ok now, and I will see you soon" they both smiled. "Let's go" said Krishna. "I'll be back day after tomorrow" replied Ian.

Pratigya, finished tucking in her pleats. Then she remembered his words, "you look stunning in a saree" she smiled to herself, as she looked at herself in the mirror. "No this is Krish's birthday party, and if Krishna comes then fine if not then it's up to him, I don't like him like that, I don't!" she scolded herself. "Pratigya, come the hair and makeup lady is here" said her mum, "yeah mum I'm coming" she said coming out of the room. She got her make up done, nicely, dark eyes, rosy cheeks and a maroon shade lipstick. Her hair she kept it out with soft curls added. Shortly she wore her gold set and gold bangles. Her masi and mum had their hair up in a bun.

"Its almost 2pm, said her mum. "Maybe you should wake Krish from his nap and get him dressed. "Yeah he's a sleep on the sofa with Anant. She walked over. "Its time to dress him" she whispered. "Your hair looks really nice" he commented.

"thanks" she replied. "Krishu" she tried to lift him up. "Look its time to get ready" he stirred and fell asleep again resting his cheek on her shoulder. "do you want me to try?" said Anant getting up. She was about to give him the nod, until he spotted his brother. "Varun just the man. she raced over to him. "Hey dude, he doesn't want to wake up for his party"

"oh don't worry sis give him here" she handed him to her brother. Krish look its Varu mama" she said in a soft tone, as she sweeped his hair across his little forehead. He opened his eyes slowly. "Varu mama?" he nodded. "Hey birthday boy" he said looking at him, and Krish hugged him. Pratigya smiled she loved the bond her brother shared with her son. "Mama" he repeated. "Shall we go upstairs with mama and changed you" she said as she walked ahead and then took him back as the three of them climbed the stairs. Pratigya managed to dress him up with the help of her bro.

*

"Here we are all ready" she said as she came down with him attached to her hip. "Wow don't you look handsome" said her mum which he smiled at. "Let everyone have a proper look" she said and placed him down. He stood with a big grin on his face.




Everyone smiled and said aww seeing him. The bell rang and Pratigya's heartbeat quickened. "I'll get it" she yelled. She attended to the door. Hi Mr and Mrs Harris come in" she smiled. The Party is outside, she said. Many guest started to arrive, and were having their starters. 45 minutes passed Pratigya didn't know why she was feeling this way but she was annoyed that he hadn't made an appearance so far. didn't he care enough not too?" she questioned. Luckily she was distracted by her friends arrival. 10 minutes later he arrived. He could hear the noise. He walked into the garden there were tables set up. Not many people were there so he went into the living room. There he saw Pratigya with Krish on her lap opening gifts . "This is from Vidya nani, oh wow look at that" she said looking at him. Krishna saw her looking absolutely beautiful his Pratigya was in a saree

(p's saree)


he couldn't quite see her full outfit but from what he saw, and then her smiling and laughing was enough to send him to heaven. She looked amazing. Then he saw Anant come sit next to her, jealousy kicked in but he kept it under control. He saw a few more gifts being open and then dinner being served shortly got announced. Everyone started to make their way out. Pratigya placed Krish on the ground she got up, Krishna saw his son he so badly want to pick him up and give him cuddles. He made his way there and bumped into someone. "sorry, your Pratigya's guest?" he just nodded "I guess you can say that"

"Anant who you talking to?" she said. "someone you know?" he asked and moved out of the way. Pratigya saw him in a lovely shirt. "y-yeah hi" she replied. Anant can you do me a favour" she said asking him something he nodded and left. "Hi" she said again. "wow you look" he looked at her from head to toe. "Gorgeous I just want to" him making such comments she felt hot all over and he himself looked handsome in his outfit she too couldn't quite keep her eyes off him.

(k's outfit)


"you too look..

"Pratigya" her masi called. "Oh no, masi is coming"

"so?" he replied.

"so?, she's the only one who knows what you look like, mum and Anant I have never shown anyone else your photo so they won't recognise you but masi will, can you just go in the other room for a minute" he didn't move. "please?" she pleaded.

"ok,ok" he replied.

"thanks" she nodded. "Pratigya there you are, don't you want to eat any food?

"yes,I'm just coming I just have to go upstairs for a minute, but you go and enjoy I'll just back in five minutes" her masi left with a smile.

"Coast is clear" she called. Krishna came out of the room.

"you look beautiful in this saree" he said smiling at her

she didn't know what to say but being alone with him was not a good idea.. "This is for Krish" he handed her a bag. "that's sweet you can come give it to him outside come" he nodded.

"all your guest got one?" she was lost what was he saying.

"got what?"

"a hug, where's mine?" he said coming close to her. its just a hug, do it Pratigya your over him remember if you don't then you are not' he mind reflected. She took a step close.

"sorry its just been a crazy morning" she replied, "thank you for making it" she put her arm around his neck, old habits die hard, she unintentionally inhaled him. He smiled making his grip tighter. "Mmm" escaped his mouth. She closed her eyes, now completely leaning on him she always felt this comfort in his hugs, they were little pieces of heaven. "you smell wow" he replied. He slowly made to look at her, his cheek slightly brushing hers, Her hair came on her eyes, There eyes locked, his fingers slowly brushed the strands away from her eyes. "You look beautiful, then again you always did" he said, slowly leaning in, she felt herself move in too.' What am I doing..' "stop" she took a step back. "um, you got your hug" she quickly walked off. He smiled trailing behind her. Once they were in the garden, she turned around to see him, he gave her sweet smile. Ahead Krish was with Anant. "come you can give him his gift" he nodded.

"Hey my bacha" she kissed his cheek. "It's a gift for you" she said.

"Hi Krish" said Krishna. "this is for you" but Krish wasn't in a good mood and pushed the bag back to him. Pratigya looked to Krishna then to Krish, "beta that's not nice look he bought you nice gift see" but Krish was being grumpy. "Its ok he's tired aren't you beta, hmm" Anant took him away. Pratigya looked to Krishna holding the bag. "I'm so sorry he doesn't usually do that, are you ok?" she asked, she could tell it hurt him. "Hmm why would he want to come to me, he knows me what 2 days maximum 3 and Anant he must've been there since a long time he knows him better."

"Look he didn't mean it, did you have anything to eat, let me prepare a plate for you"

"no leave it, I'm not hungry I'll just have some juice or something" He slowly left. "Krishna wait" she called, she wanted to go after him but her mum came. "beta eat some food" here she handed her a plate. " and then we are cutting the cake" she nodded "ok mum" she quickly took the plate and had a little to eat. She spotted Anant with Krish. "My baby" she picked him up. "I'm just going to feed him" She took him. She got two plates prepared. Krishna was sat a table on his lonesome

"Here please eat something" she said giving him the plate. He hesitantly took it. She sat down in an empty chair next to him. "So Ian he didn't come?" he shook his head. "no, he's busy his gone to spend time with his wife and kids"

"oh.. she replied. "well can I get you anything else?" he shook his head. "anyway I'm going to head in a bit"

"Atleast wait for the cake cutting, I'll just be back" she walked over to the table. "Pratigya he's eaten nicely, get his hands washed and in 20 minutes we will cut the cake. "ok, come here beta" she picked him up. Krishna was looking at his and Krish's photo he took the other day on his phone "

"Hey, can we join you?" she said sitting down with him on her lap. Krishna's face lit up seeing him. "Mummy big Krishna" he said with smile. "Yeah he's nice na?" the little one nodded. "Don't take what he says to heart, he doesn't mean it. "Will he take the gift now?" she nodded. "yeah"

"Look Krish, its for you" he said. Pratigya helped him take the bag. "Look shall we see what he got for you?" he nodded. "Oh wow it's a car" she said getting excited for him.

"wow" he replied.

"say thank you"

"tha ku" he replied. She got up with him. "Here spend some time with him" she smiled handed him over. "Hey" he said looking at his son as he stood on his knees. "How are you buddy" he held his little waist and then kissed his cheek.

Pratigya watched them and smiled, she felt better Krish was spending time with him. Now she could enjoy the party. Time was flying and her mum gathered everyone inside for the cake cutting. Pratigya went over to Krishna, but Anant beat her to it. "Time for the cake cutting" he put his arms out to little Krish. "Anant" he said as he lifted him out of Krishna's arms. Pratigya looked over to Krishna she felt so bad. "There you are come" said Anant taking her along. Pratigya took Krish and went to the table where there was a cake, she saw Krishna standing with his hands in his pocket. "Come on hurry he will start to get cranky after " said her mum. Pratigya's attention got diverted as she stood Krish on the chair, and he blew the candles, then they cut the cake together. Everyone cheered and clapped, she gave him a bit of cake in his mouth. Then the photographer was clicking pictures. "Where is Anant " her mum called. "Mum its fine" said Pratigya. "don't be silly" she called Anant to get in the photo, "smile everyone" Pratigya carried Krish and Anant stood next her, he put a hand on her shoulder. "Lovely" he said as he clicked. Krish was being fidgety he wanted to go Anant "dada" said Krish. Pratigya eyes widened. Krishna felt like his world just came to a stop. "No,no Krish he's not.. she tried to correct him. Anant was grinning.

"Well he will be soon, this is the perfect opportunity." Said her mum. "what for?" asked Pratigya.

"Attention everyone I'm very happy to introduce to you all Anant, Pratigya's fianc. Everyone cheered. Pratigya was lost for words, as everyone started to congratulate her, once their attention diverted to Krish she looked ahead and couldn't see Krishna. "Oh my god, why did mum do that" she raced out to find him.

precap

"I should go now"

"already?.um actually can you help me with clearing up in the garden, just some of the table and chairs?"

"sure" he replied..

*

She sighed deeply, and her hands cupped his face and kissed him again


Tbc

Edited by Khushi96 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful UpdatešŸ‘

I don't know why but not getting a good feeling about Anant. P's mom doesn't like K which I can understand, but her telling everyone that P and Anant are engaged without first consulting P didn't care that she did that.

Precap looks promising update soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry for late reply di.. i read all updates that i missed and story is getting interesting and lovely update..waiting for next. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 17

"Wait" she called.

"what for?" he said in a flat tone

"please I just.. I can't talk just yet I have to see the guests off, but please just wait till everyone goes home wait in the other room for me?"

"I don't think I can do that"

"Look" she took a deep breath and held his hand. "just wait in that room, once everyone leaves I'll come there"

"fine?" he went in to room and slammed the door hard. She rolled her eyes and walked into the room shutting behind her.

"Mum shouldn't have done that?"

"you think?"

"Look I'm sorry I didn't know.." He cut her off.

"you know how much I controlled my moods today, that idiot Anant he is not my Krish's dad, I am!"

"Keep your voice down ,people will hear you down the hall"

"I don't care, because the way I'm feeling right now I want to whole world to know that Krish is our son"

"Please" she covered his mouth with her palm. He was no mood to play, he removed her hand .

"Pratigya how would you feel if Krish called someone else's his mummy?, you'd hate it right, 3 times today I felt like I lost him. He thinks Anant is his dad, you have no idea how much that hurt." She was quiet, then took a step forward.

"He's too young he doesn't understand but when.."

"but you do, why didn't you correct him, tell him the truth?" she sighed not knowing what to say.

"Krish is mine, he is my baby, I feel really hurt today by your actions, I feel like you just made me stick around so you could stick the knife in deeper"

"No, I would never do that, please Krishna I had no idea about the engagement announcement or any of this."

"Anant and you, are in a serious relationship then..

"its not, where not, its nothing like that I don't even feel close to him"

"stop with the lies, I can't take anymore heartache" Hearing that she seriously unintentionally hurt him, hurt her deeply. "Listen, I'm just coming back ok promise me you won't leave?" he didn't say a word.

"promise me" she closed the door gently. She stopped her tears from coming and sorted her hair alittle.

"Wow Pratigya Krish called me daddy" said Anant when he saw her coming. "Yeah he was confused he didn't mean that" Anant face dropped. "oh but I thought"

"Actually I'm a little busy have you seen mum?" she said.. "mum where is Krish?"

"Pratigya what is going why can't I be Krish's dad?"

"because he already has a daddy" she blurted.

"what?" Pratigya bit her tongue what is she saying she didn't even realise. Her mum heard everything. "Anant beta, of course he does but in theory, now you will be his dad, Pratigya is tired she doesn't know what she is saying, right beta?" Pratigya nodded. "exactly sorry Anant my head has been all over the place" Anant bought her excuse "oh ok anyways I have to go I will call you later?" she nodded trying to put on a smile. "yeah sure" Pratigya went to say bye to everyone. Krishna was just pacing the room, and slowly losing patience. "Finally alone at last" she said walking into the room with Krish. "everyone's gone?" she nodded. "yep, even mum everyone, so its just us 3, come out in the hall"

"why"

"please?" she said and he nodded "here you can take him" he held Krish and kissed his cheek. They followed her out to the living room, on the table there was another cake with a candle on it.

"whats this?"

"well I know how much he means to you, so I thought we can have a private celebration just us and our son" he smiled at her words. "now I don't know how he will feel to eat more cake, but we can try" she said sitting down on the sofa.

"Look Krish because your so special" she took him on to her lap to pacify him. "we are doing another cake cutting" he smiled. "Let's blow on 3 ok? 1, 2 ,3" Krishna took a snap of both of them on his phone. "Happy birthday to you" they both sang to him. "Lets cut a little piece" she said pressing her cheek to his cheek, then looked up at Krishna. "come" he put his hand on hers and they cut the cake together. "Yay" she said like a little kid. He smiled admiring her cute quality, he missed this so much, "you can feed him some" Krishna took a little piece and gave it to him and he took it. "Now mummy's turn, he moved his face away. "oh you don't want from mummy but happily took from your daddy" she deliberately let that slip. She looked to Krishna and then she turned to the little one. "Krish look at me, this is your daddy?" he rubbed his eye sleepily. "Look here" she turned him in her lap."This is your papa beta" Krish had a confused expression on his face " no he's big Krishna" he replied. "No he isn't he is your..

"Pratigya its ok, he's tired and like you said he's too young" she looked up at him feeling bad, if only she had done this in the first place on their first meet..

"sorry i.." he shook his head. "Don't apologise its ok" he gave her a soft smile he could see her genuine efforts. "Poor little dude he is exhausted" he said seeing his sleepy face. She looked to the clock ahead. "It's already 7:30pm time is flying today and time for this little guy to be in his bed"

She said as she was about to get up with him. "Can I carry him up?. "Of course here" she held him in front of her and Krishna picked him up and carried him over his shoulder. "Let's go my boy" he said, Pratigya followed them too. He gently placed him on his crib.

"kids are cute, but I have to say we have made the cutest little boy in the world" she said admiring his sleeping form. Krishna looked over to her. "we sure have" there was silence, their eyes slowly locking "uh ahem we should let him rest hmm?" she said, making some distance he nodded, she left the room and he followed after gently closing the door. They came back downstairs.

"I should go now"

"already, um actually can you help me with clearing up in the garden, just some of the table and chairs?"

"sure" he replied.. "thanks" she said they both headed into the garden. There was a cool breeze in the air. Once they got outside the tables and chairs had already been stacked up.

"oh its done" she said, "but these party streamers can come down." she grabbed one and pulled it. Krishna saw her elegant figure sway in the most sensuous way. He walked up behind her. "stop " he said and turned her around to him. "you seriously look breath taking in this saree its so sexy tell me did you wear it for me?" she swallowed hard seeing his expression, his eyes darkened with desire for her. "do you think I did, you know where it just for you?" she flirted. "yeah I believe so" he said taking a step closer. "Maybe I did.." she said a smile began to play on both their faces, "But we Mr have work to do" she said turning away from him, afraid from her own actions. He chuckled. "sure" he pulled down some balloons. Even though they weren't talking she could feel hot all of a sudden, and his gaze on her, she felt a delightful chill run up her spine. "Done" she said as she got up, her eyes met his. "I know you've moved on from me, with Anant, its serious right otherwise why you be getting engaged?" she was quiet.

"Sorry not my place to ask those questions" he said feeling like he said the wrong thing

"no its ok it's a reasonable question.. he's a nice person really great with Krish, but I don't love him" she said walking away. He smirked.

"Really.. why might that be?" she froze in her steps at his comments. He walked up to her.

"because.."

"Because?" he echoed her words and put his arms around her waist. "hmm" he touched his forehead to hers for a split second, then looked at her again "you can tell me" he said. Her eyes were locked with his "no" she replied softly. He moved closer into her. "Tell me" he whispered on her lips, she closed her eyes feeling his hot breath fanning her lips. Her lips parted. "no" she replied slowly closing her eyes, Feeling his lips on hers again, after so long, all her feelings came rushing back to her. She opened her eyes, and looked at his face. "Krishna" she said in an emotional tone like she was seeing him for the first time all over again. She sighed deeply, and her hands cupped his face and kissed him again, and again. His hands roamed all over her lower back and nape.

Their heads twisted and turned in different ways as they couldn't get enough of each other. Her hands moved from his face to his lower back and caressing of his nape. Krishna was so happy a smile played on his face as they kissed. Having her in his arms again this way was just beyond heartfelt. Then he felt his cheek moist and he broke the kiss. "Hey, hey baby" he whispered as he saw all the tear droplets. She looked at him and went into his loving embrace. "why you crying?" he asked as he stroked her hair and comforted her. She sniffed. "I can't believe this is real" she hugged him tightly. "I keep thinking I'm going to wake up and this will all have been a dream" he chuckled. "Listen" he said her look at him. "Look at me" he took her hand. "does this sound like a dream" she touched his chest and heard his beating heart. She smiled and shook her head. "and does this feel fake? he took her bottom lip into his mouth. He then looked at her. "no that felt pretty real" she smiled. "Let's go inside" she said taking his hand. He nodded. Once they reached inside, her phone rang. "Just one sec, Anant Hi, yeah listen can I call you back I'm just a little busy" she cut the line. She looked to Krishna. He came close to her feeling threatened by that call.. "Come here"

"No we can't" she pulled back.

"Wait, what are you saying?" he asked confused.

"I can't do this, I'm spoken for.. this is all wrong" she said running away from him. Krishna sighed

" but you don't love him" she turned around. " so its ok then that I cheat on him?." Krishna looked at her face, she was all consumed with guilt.

"wow you really have changed, I mean this is the same girl who wanted me to play along with a fake relationship to get back at her dad" She remembered there time in Malibu when she wanted her dad to catch her and Krishna together but it backfired.

"I guess a lot has changed since then, I do care about peoples feelings, especially Anant he doesn't deserve this"

" but I do?"

"I'm sorry I let the old feelings get to me, listen its getting late I'll call you tomorrow ok?" he didn't give into her words he gave the silent treatment and left. "What is wrong with me?" she questioned. "Why did I give into him?"

Tbc

Edited by Khushi96 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful updatešŸ‘

So their love for each other is re-surfacing, don't know how long P will be able to stop herself from getting back together with K.😳

Looking forward to the next update😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update
Loved it

Excited for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
I just love this update Jaan...
What is P doing ? Why is she so confused ?
It's getting interesting and i love it. .. Just waiting to see How long P hold back her feelings and for the moment krish will Call K,dad !
Update soon Jaan :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry di.. i m late becaz i didnt open IF from long time .. and may be i will be busy later too ..bt i will read whenever i get time di..
and ur update is awesum and story is getting more and more interesting now...

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