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sorry double post di.
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Nice Story..just completed reading 1st 7parts...keep going 😃
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snigs what surprise 😃😃😃
where have you been miss you lots 😭

thanks for the comments you already caught up that was fast 😆




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Nice Story..just completed reading 1st 7parts...keep going 😃

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thanks everyone for the comments they inspire to cont this os 😉

Part 18


"That was Krishna?" said her mum. Pratigya nodded in in dark red shirt, black leggings and matching red flats "Yeah that was him" Shraddha got up from her seat, "how dare he come into your life and do this, he is nothing, he is not coming anywhere near you or Krish. Pratigya didn't like the way her mum was bad mouthing Krishna. "Such a loser, never let him come near you or him uh his family your papa told me everything and " Pratigya rolled her eyes. "mum just stop!" she said getting up from her seat. "I can't do this I have to tell Anant" Her mum got up " don't be silly Pratigya you can't jeopardize what you have with Anant for a summer fling. Pratigya was getting further frustrated she hated that her mum always referred to her relationship with Krishna as a fling that summer was the best time of her life, she met the love of her life and her mum never understood that. "Surely you can't be stupid enough to get back with him he will ruin Krish's life"

"You love Krish so much?" her mother nodded "of course I do"

"Really well I remember different, you wanted me to get rid of him remember?"

"Didi?" said Vidya coming into the conversation.

"Masi" said Pratigya running to her like a little child.

"Vidya talk some sense into this silly girl she wants to get back together with Krishna and end this engagement with Anant" Pratigya shook her head. "No masi that's not true , I do want Krish to know his daddy its only fair right?" Vidya nodded.

"Didi, its his biological father he should know him"

"Vidya your siding with Pratigya ? what's wrong with you? ,she is still a kid but we are older and can't allow this"

"I am not a kid, I know my feelings, and..

"Didi, she isn't saying to get back with Krishna, She wants to co-parent that's it"

"exactly, but I should tell Anant, Krish's dad is alive and all its only fair "

"I disagree Pratigya don't tell him anything it will ruin everything" Pratigya didn't know what to say. "why not I don't have anything to hide.. I need air" she said leaving from there.

"Vidya what are we going to do, Anant is such a great match, I wish Krishna never came back" Vidya walked up to her sister.

"Di don't worry I will talk to her" Shraddha nodded. "thanks" Vidya went up and found Pratigya on the terrace. "Hi beta" she said putting her hand on her niece's.

"I don't know why mum has to be like that"

"don't take her wrong she just loves you so much she doesn't want you to get hurt"

"she doesn't listen to me, I'm an adult now I have all right to make my decisions"

" I agree, so beta come with me, lets talk" she walked with her. "how has it really affected you seeing him again?"

"I just want to co-parent that's it" she said.

"but..?"

"but something did happen I can't tell mum anything she won't understand"

"ok.. well you can tell me I won't judge I promise"

"well there are two things, one I've left Krish with him right now and two we kissed it just happened but I made it clear to him that it was a mistake and he understood so its dealt with"

"ok.., well like I said I won't judge you, talk to Anant and tell him what is going on he is a very understanding boy" Pratigya nodded.

"I know I just hope he will understands me" Her masi nodded.

"He will but just leave the kiss part out" Pratigya nodded. "Yeah"

Meanwhile Krishna was putting Krish to sleep "someone's at the door who is it shall we see?" he said taking him with Krishna saw who it was, but he on purpose didn't recognise him.

"Hello, may I help you?"

"you came to the party right?, its me Anant,

"oh yeah I'm guessing your here to see Pratigya but you've just missed her I'm babysitting can I pass on a message?"

"um sure.. I didn't know you guys were good friends, she doesn't just let anyone babysit her son." Krishna chuckled.

"that's true but me and her go way back, I'll tell her you came by I would invite you but I need to put my son to bed,bye" he shut the door. Anant ears got a shock did he just say his son? No I must be hearing things'

*

The park

"Hi Anant thanks for meeting me"

"I went by the house, that guy you won the case for was looking after Krish I didn't even know you both were close"

"where not.. but we are?"

"what?"

"Anant something you should know, he is not a case I'm working on he is Krish's papa. Krishna" Anant couldn't believe his ears. Pratigya filled him in on everything.

"but how could he stay away from you for two years that long from someone like you, I know I wouldn't be able to" Pratigya looked at him. "really?" he nodded. Yeah I would find a way to get to you"

"that's sweet Anant but Krish he didn't have a nice childhood like me and you, he's had it very tough"

"still its no excuse, anyways I'm happy for Krish that he has his real dad in his life"

"really you don't mind, I mean I thought maybe with Krishna being back you might feel..

"Threatened? No way, he is your past and we are the future" She smiled at his words

"Masi is right you truly are a gem" she smiled. "I better get back to Krish"

"can I come?" she wasn't sure if that was a good idea..

"next time, right now I need to let him understand Krishna is his dad, you understand right?" he nodded."of course"

she smiled "thanks" and got up from the bench.

*

Krishna heard the keys rattling. "Mummy's home lets go say hi"

"Hi" he said.

"Hi my bacha" she said taking Krish. "Did you speak to him, how did he take it?"

"Very understanding" she replied.

"Really?" he commented.

"Uh hmm, you sound surprised" she said putting Krish on the ground.

"think what you like"

"are you jealous?"

"please.. this isn't high school" he said ignoring her comment.

"If that idiot Anant is.."

"if your not jealous then why are you calling him names?" Krishna looked at her, with a smirk..

"stop being childish and while we are on the topic why are.. hey hey" he said getting distracted towards Krish who was circling around him.

"are you thirsty mummy will get you some water" she said and went to the kitchen, she filled up the little cup.

"do you want me?"

"w-what?" she said finding herself locked between him, his hands holding either side of the sink and pressing close to her.

"to be jealous?" he said softly in her ear, she went quiet.

"you know I think that.."

"Mummy?" said the little one who had made his way it into the kitchen. Krishna quickly raced over to pick him up. "ok little guy I'll see you"

"your going?" she said taking the water and giving it to Krish.

"Yeah Ian rang he needs to talk about something"

"ok well I was going to give him a bath, thought maybe you wanted to help me?" Krishna wanted to be with his son as much as he could. "yeah of course I'll tell Ian I'll be alittle late. "ok" she replied. "once your done with your call come upstairs" he nodded to her. Krishna spoke to Ian and shortly went upstairs, they both co-parented giving Krish a bath, Krishna held him still whilst Pratigya washed his hair. "This is nice I've never had anyone help with him like this" she said looking at him.

"Krish" said Pratigya, once he splashed water up and made her shirt wet. "Krish" said Krishna and his mischievous actions got Krishna wet too. "Krish!" said Pratigya. "look what you did beta you made us wet" she said.. "naughty boy" but Krish just giggled and seeing him giggle made Krishna laugh.

"Krishna don't encourage that" she said trying to hold her own laughter back.

"what everyone loves a little water" he said playfully. She smiled and mirrored a cheeky look. "oh yeah?" she winked to her son.."Like this" she splashed Krishna in the face. "Hey" he said and Krish and Pratigya laughed at him. "ok enough now, on a serious note bachu bath time is over. She stood him up in the tub "your drenched your going to catch a cold if you don't dry your hair" he said seeing her. "Its ok,I'm use to it" she replied and began to dry krish's hair. A few seconds later. She felt her own hair being dried. Krishna gently dried her wet hair. "I don't want you to fall ill" She looked at him. "thanks" she gave him a subtle smile. He smiled back. "It should be fine now" she replied. "you can take him to his room, I'll just drain the tub. Krishna nodded and carried him up, he was all nicely wrapped in the towel. Shortly Pratigya came into the room and Krish was all ready for bed. "Good job papa" she said seeing him all nicely dressed and Krishna was combing his hair in a side parting. He turned around to her. "you think" she nodded. "of course, I can see that he adores you already" she smiled. "I'll just quickly dry his hair, its just like your nice and thick".

"Like father like son" he said. Pratigya carried him up and plugged in the hair dryer. "Can I do it?"

"sure" she replied taking him on her lap and Krishna dried his hair, by the end of it Krish was so relaxed in fell asleep in her arms. "He's asleep" Krishna looked down. "Seems the little dude got very relaxed" he picked him up and placed him down in his crib. "thanks" she touched his back. "oh your back is really wet" she turned him around. "and your hair, you're going to catch a cold If you don't take.. come out of these wet clothes. "come with me I will dry your hair" she held his hand and took him into her room. "Seriously its ok"

"Sit!" she insisted. He smiled it was nice seeing her caring nature again, She took a towel stood behind him and began to dry his hair, but she wasn't managing properly so she climbed onto the bed and kneeled behind him. "So what did Ian want" she said as she started to dry his hair. "I'm not sure but I will leave soon to meet him" she nodded. "it's done" she got off the bed. "thanks I'll leave now" he got up. "have you seen your shirt how wet it is let me just pop it in the dryer it will" he got up from the bed. "it's not necessary it will dry don't worry"

"fine then atleast remove it so you can wear something else.." he sighed "ok fine" he began to unbutton it. She walked forward and opened the cupboard, she said she will give him something but what she didn't have a supply of mens clothing in her home. Krishna saw her from the back she was taking some time.

"sorry I thought I might have something but.." she said turning around and seeing his shirt buttons open.

"have your seen your own shirt its wet too you should change too" she looked down then back at him. "although the wet look suits you" he said with a smirk. "Krishna" she said turning her back to him, holding the edge of the bed. "It really does" he replied. She felt her cheeks blush.

Krishna walked and stood behind her. "it really,really does" he whispered further. he pushed her hair to the side "what are you.." shhh.. he replied. Moving her hair out of the way. He angled his face, and her breathing quickened. She closed her eyes, once she felt his mouth on her neck.

"Krishna.." he buried his lips in her delectable side of the neck, The kiss turned into a suckle. Her hand slowly gripped on top of his. Krishna we can't.." she said taking a step back turning away from him, but he knew she just needed a little persuading.

"ok fine" she opened her eyes, couldn't help but miss the contact. "sorry" she sat down on the bed. "I don't know what to do" she was confused.. He sat down next to her.

"Its easy just follow your heart, look at me" he gently turned her face to face him, both their hair damp. Their eyes met..

"stop over thinking so much this is right" he pushed a strand of hair of her face, " I've missed you so much" he held her neck gently. "haven't you missed me?" he said tracing her bottom lip which was moist from the water droplets off his hair, she nodded. "of course I have" she leaned forward and their lips met in a slow kiss, but suddenly it turned passionate. She pushed his already open shirt off him. Following her heart, she let them crash on the bed, he was on top of her, just missing all the yearning of 2 years of being apart,. Their lips, were glued to each other's the whole time, their tongues devoted to each others, he opened all her shirt buttons and pulled it off her, his mouth explored her neck and chest. She caressed his nape as his mouth worked around her net bra, then trailed light kisses all the way down, stopping at belly, daring to go further down or not. He played with the elastic in her leggings. Then he came back up and kissed her forehead. "I love you" her eyes opened to his. She traced her thumb along his lower lip. "I love you too, always have" she swallowed hard. He got off her. "so call it off with Anant its obvious you don't feel for him" he said buttoning up his shirt and passing her own one back to her. "I will try but it won't be easy when all are involved." she said sitting up. He turned around to her. "Make it that easy"

"why did you stop?.. I mean I didn't say no.." she said hugging him from the back, resting her cheek on it. When she behaved like this it was hard for him to push her away but he needed to make his stand. He held her hands and turned around. "Pratig.." she silenced his mouth with hers, he got swept away in her kiss. "As much as I want to do this" he said in between kisses "I need to know its just me in your life. He took a step back, her eyes flew open. " because I can't handle in fact thinking about you and Anant makes my blood boil, only I want to be close to you, so do what I ask and we can be together again or it's the end final end" he quickly left from there. Pratigya pressed her lips together. "I have to end it with Anant"



tbc


Edited by Khushi96 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushi96


<font color="#3300ff">snigs what surprise😃😃😃</font>
<font color="#3300ff">where have you been miss you lots😭</font>

<font color="#3300ff">thanks for the comments you already caught up that was fast😆</font>





I do come n read whenever i get time dear :-) vacation is on d way...I will be regular reader soon 😛 miss you too..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for the delay been very busy lately.

It was a beautiful romantic update, 😳P finally admitted she still has feelings for K. K is right before they move forward she needs to break it off with Anant, don't know how he will take that.

Wonder what Ian wants to talk to K about.


Update soon.😃
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caught up atlast with all the earlier parts ... Superb updates krupa 👏
P seems helluva confused ... hope kriya will be happy
Edited by dhakarn - 9 years ago
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its getting interesting di... and hope krish will accept krishna soon and kriya will unite 😊
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Part 19


"I came as soon as I could did you break it off with Anant?" she looked down. "come in and I will explain"

"ok?" he said following her in.

She turned to him "If me and you got together then.. what I mean is what will happen next" "can you guarantee me a secure future with you?"

"I love you , you know that" he replied.

"I know and if it was just us two then fine but I can't risk Krish's life, look at your past, when, tell me when were we ever solid enough to make it work? From what I remember you didn't let me in I found about you from a friend"

"Things will be different you have to trust me this time"

She sniffed. "I trusted you last time and look what happened, I won't let anyone do that to Krish, If your past follows us into our future then"

"how Shakti is dead and..

"but your step mum isn't she's in prison how do you know she doesn't have people on the outside"

"Pratigya stop with the excuses and get to the point what are you trying to say and..

"I'm getting engaged on Saturday"

"this saturday?" he couldn't believe his ears.

Yeah and married the day after then me and Krish are leaving NYC..but you can still..

"you don't even love him then how.."

"no that's true but once we are married I guess my feelings will grow and I will learn to love him, you did say that night that you wanted me to be happy and fall in love again"

"that was before.. you remember what happened that night" she was quiet. "because I do"

"Krishna stop there" he took a step forward.

"we made love ,we made Krish," he came close to her. "stop, stop it please!

"don't you want that, imagine how happy Krish will feel when he knows his mummy and daddy are together and happy"

"It's in the past now and we don't have a future! But I won't keep you away from Krish he is your son you can be there for him but us.." He was shocked by her reaction. He left without saying anything. She raced after him. "Krishna, Krishna?. She caught him just before he left, he turned around to her at the front door frame.

"what's left.. he shook his head, she could see his eyes well up as he walked away. She closed the door and couldn't control her own tears.

*

Pratigya wore her ear-ring, then began to put on her saree, she pleated it and tucked it in, she put on her blouse which had heavy embroidery work, it was sleeveless and quite backless, she managed to tie the top string but couldn't quite tie the bottom one. "Let me help you" she turned around and saw Krishna without a word she turned around for him. His fingers brushed against her naked flesh. She inhaled. "Are you sure you want to do this?"

"I have to" she replied.

"no you don't its your life, do what.. he untied her blouse. "you want to" he pushed her blouse semi down. she could feel her shoulders go bare. She closed her eyes letting him kiss the side of her neck, her lips parte at his actions. "don't marry him" he whispered in her ear and tied up her blouse. She opened her eyes. "what?" she asked, "hmm" he nodded throwing her pallu over her shoulder.. " look at you in this saree you look gorgeous and I know you still love me" he carried her up in his arms, she looped his neck. He walked over with her towards the bed. Their eyes locked. He placed her down and buried his face in her neck. She couldn't help but enjoy their closeness, "Tell me when you want me to stop" he said now completely on top of her kissing her all over her again on her bare shoulders, and near her cleavage.. "never" she replied gripping his face and captured his lips. .

"Pratigya!?" her mum called and her eyes snapped open. "Come on get ready it's a big day today, your getting engaged. Her mum said excitedly. She looked around. "It was just a dream, what a dream it felt so real" she panted. She got out of bed and looked at her phone, no call from Krishna she couldn't help but feel sad. why would he call you Pratigya after all you did break his heart' Ever since she told him the news, he hadn't called and he didn't pick up her calls. Her thoughts got interrupted and her mum came and told her to quickly have a bath and get ready, the hair and makeup women are on their ways.

*

"So that's it?" Krishna nodded to Ian when he sat next to him in his hotel room

"Yep, I tried believe me I did but she's stubborn like me that's one of the reasons I fell in love with her"He smirked. "Life's a really bitch sometimes and well lets say mine has been since the day I was born"

"Oh dude I feel so bad, maybe I can talk to her, you know tell her exactly what happened how I found you, in what state..

"No Ian buddy I don't want sympathy and besides its done, she's moved on it's about time I do the same and let her go, my flight leaves midnight"

"wait, wait and your kid your going to leave him too?."

"Ian, he's what 3yrs, he doesn't even know me not really , yeah he's my flesh and blood but I haven't been there for him as a daddy not once, I love him I want to get to know him, but Pratigya she's getting married to someone else I can't be around that it would kill me. Maybe when Krish is a little older and if he wants to get in touch then maybe later that can happen" Ian was lost for words he didn't know what more he could say.

"I wish I never left for those 2 years. Biggest mistake of my life" he said shaking his head as he got up to continue his packing.

Pratigya got ready she was in her full outfit, her hair half up and down she looked beautiful"

p's outfit




Her mum and masi walked into her room "Anant is going to die when he sees you " said Vidya. Pratigya smiled but it didn't hit her full beam one. Her mum told her to hurry they were leaving in half hour. "ok I'm just coming I just need to do something" both ladies smiled and left her to it.

"come, come on Krishna pick up your phone" she said as it rang.

*

"Krishna looked at his phone, and then put it back on the nightstand" Ian looked to him.

"Aren't you going to answer that?" he shook his head.

"No, leave it I know who it is let it ring.." Ian raced over.

"Its her, dude then you should answer it she might've changed her mind" Krishna chuckled.. "this isn't a movie Ian there is no happily ever after in real life especially mine I just don't deserve one it seems" He went off to grab something from the bathroom. The phone stopped ringing. "No buddy you deserve a happy ending and that's what your going to get" he said taking his phone.

"Enough, just I've had enough maybe this is it, maybe this is my destiny I won't get my happy ending" She switched her phone to silent as she left the room sad and frustrated, not that anyone noticed they were all too busy taking things in the car for the engagement. Her Krish was all nicely dressed in a suit and handed to her. She kissed him on the cheek then she handed him to her mum. She took her phone out but no call of any sort, that dream had really messed with her head. She placed her son in the car seat as she was fastening it her mind kept reflecting. you call Krishna but for what, why? here you are getting engaged to someone else who isn't Krishna. "that's it he's not Krishna" Shortly they arrived at the venue, things were moving quickly. Anant was already there but her mind was elsewhere, she wanted her phone, when she got a minute to herself, she quickly got it just then there was an incoming call. "Krishna, I called you many times"

"Its not Krishna its his friend Ian, look I know its your engagement today but he is a real mess over you"

"I know I didn't mean for this to happen I want to speak to him once I come back home"

"No he won't be there"

"what?"

"he's leaving NYC tonight he said he's done, and that he doesn't deserve a happy ending."

"going when, for how long?"

"for good he's never coming back he loves you so much, when we were in that place it's all he spoke about when I first found him, you're the first name that came on his lips. Pratigya felt her stomach knot, hearing that he was leaving for good made her feel restless

"I can't let him go, can I speak to him?"

"he's just gone to fill gas where not far from the airport"

"Ian please, tell me what airport will he be at" she nodded to his conversation then cut the line. "I have to do something, somehow I have to sneak out here.

*

Krishna sat as he wait for his flight number to be called. He didn't even look at his phone he did check his watch and sighed as he reflected she must be engaged by now. Pratigya ran into the airport in her outfit, holding up her skirt so she could run fast. "Wait, wait where is your ticket?"

"what?.. I listen I need to go through" she said trying to pass security "no one can go through without a ticket you have to buy one"

"what.. I just want to talk to someone who is boarding the plane" and then she heard the announcement.. "I need a ticket to India now!" she said raising her voice. "sorry but its emergency" the woman looked through "there is a flight later..

"no the one boarding now I need to be on that plane" a man came and spoke to the woman . the man looked at her "is it a relative or something?"

"yeah, yeah my husband" she lied.

"ok fine she can board but you still have to buy a ticket." She quickly paid with her card.

"Let her through" she ran through the gates fast towards boarded the plane. She was let on after explaining her situation "Krishna, Krishna?" she called to see where he was. "Krishna?" people were looking around but she didn't care. Krishna looked around he thought he heard his name. "Excuse me, do you know where Krishna.. she asked and the lady nodded and took her ahead. Krishna's eyes tricked him he thought he saw Pratigya, he blinked and there she was he got up from his seat. "Pratigya?"

"is this your wife?" the lady asked. Pratigya gave him a look to play along.. "y-yes this is my beautiful wife"

"ok well if you can both be seated the plane will take off in a few minutes.

"no where not boarding where leaving" she replied. He was confused. "we are?.. why what's changed?" he asked her. "come with me and I will tell you" she held her hand out to him" He immediately took her left hand and saw it had no ring. "your not?" he asked. She shook her head.

"We will be right back" he said. Pratigya held his hand as they went through the tunnel and came out of the gate. "what's going on?" he asked.

"I didn't get engaged, i left that's why I'm still in the same outfit and I bought I ticket so I can stop you from leaving"

"so you stopped your engagement, bought a ticket that your not even planning to use just to stop me?" she nodded. "yeah I'm a drama queen right I guess some things haven't changed" he chuckled at her comment.

"I'm still your girl" she said in a cute tone.

"come here" he sighed smiling and she threw her arms around him, hugging him tightly. They just stayed in each other's arms for a good few seconds. "I love you so much" she said looking at his face, her eyes expressive. "I never stopped Krishna" he cupped her chin, she held his wrists. Her tears came "no more tears my love" he wiped them away and kissed her forehead. They hugged again. She just felt so safe in his arms again.

precap:

"good, because you haven't really showed me how much you missed me" he said pulling her by the waist. She smiled. "you have to be patient" she giggled pushing him away as she ran away from him.

Tbc

Edited by Khushi96 - 9 years ago
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What a lovely romantic update😳

Ian is such a good friend to K. Glad P didn't get engaged to Anant.

Loved how P ran after K on the plane to stop him from leaving😳❤️

What a romantic precap😳

Update soon😊

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