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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update Kroopa👏⭐️

Was sad to hear about K's death, then when you mentioned about a twist. I thought she might be pregnant and she turned out to be. I was glad she kept the baby.

And at the very end someone is talking to Krishna about the birth of his baby was confused but then I thought maybe he is in a witness protection program so maybe the staged his death don't know just a thought.🤔

So two years have passed hope you get Kriya to meet soon. Want to see them with their little boy.
Edited by rekrn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Precap:
He heard a little giggle as he got closer and there he was a cute little boy, in blue shorts, and a white t-shirt, wearing a cap, giggling away as he kicked the ball. "my boy" just then the boy dropped his cap and Krishna got a full glimpse of his smiling face.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read both parts ... and what a twist krishna is alive and baby boy is born ..wow ..waiting for kriya meeting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh My God... My Jaannn !!
This is a brilliant piece of work... and I am in LOVE withhh itt... and i wanna read more n more of it !!
Such a suspense drama it has been till now... and i love ittr...
Wow KriYa has a baby Boy... And clues to Krishna being alive... I lovee it... Pls update soon jaan... wanna read moree... :* :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Nechu 😃😃😃
so nice to see you here, 🤗
thanks for the comments dear. I will update this ff regularly as i can 😉

Originally posted by: ArjaAddict

Oh My God... My Jaannn !!

This is a brilliant piece of work... and I am in LOVE withhh itt... and i wanna read more n more of it !!
Such a suspense drama it has been till now... and i love ittr...
Wow KriYa has a baby Boy... And clues to Krishna being alive... I lovee it... Pls update soon jaan... wanna read moree... :* :*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks everyone for the comments, they make me to continue this ff 😉 here is the next part.

Part 12

"wow I'm a dad, this is huge and Pratigya is she ok?"

"yep mother and baby are doing just fine. now you don't have to hide, go be with your girl and son"

"I wish I could Ian but I have some unfinished business, untill I'm not certain that they are safe I can't take that risk untill then I have to stay dead"

*

Anant came to see Pratigya at the hospital he was her masi's best friend's son. Once Pratigya came to stay in Arizona, they both became good friends, she told him all about her and Krishna, he didn't judge her or anything he became her good supporting friend.

"such a cute baby" he said whilst holding him, and stumbled a little.

"be careful don't drop my baby"

"yeah I think I should give him back, but I did get him something, and for you too." Once she saw the giant teddy bear she smiled.

"aww that's so sweet"

"yes he is sweet like me"

"whatever you think" she replied.

"ok beta she needs her rest, see you tomorrow?" Masi escorted him out of the room. Pratigya laughed.

"its nice to see that?"

"what?"

"you smiling again" Pratigya nodded and looked down, she felt guilty to smile when he wasn't around anymore. "I wish Krishna was here, he would've been so happy to see him"

"He is perfect" said her masi. "Yeah he is" she smiled down at him, resting in her arms.

"you thought of any names?" she nodded. "yes"

"Vidya masi meet baby Krishna" she smiled. Looking at him. "your so beautiful" she kissed his forehead.

"why Krishna?"

"It was his daddy's name its only right that our son lives by this name"

"you still think about him a lot?"

"I don't think I ever will stop thinking about him, he was the love of my life I'll always love him"

"It does get easier"

"we were going to get married, it wasn't supposed to be this way." She could feel the tears come.

"hey, hey its ok, shall I take him for a little while, you take some rest" she nodded, giving him to her.

Two years passed

Pratigya successfully finished her last year at law school, and was now a hot shot lawyer in NYC. She was finally getting her life back together. . Her mother came over to her place to help with Krish when she could but Pratigya did most of the upbringing. She stood in her living room on the phone




"3rd yes that's a Saturday around 2pm? great see you then" she smiled as she turned around and her little boy ran up to her. "Mummy, mummy my birthday coming?" she scooped him up in her arms. "yes it is baby, is my Krishna excited for his party?" she kissed his cheek and saw a cheeky grin on his face "uh oh careful don't put chocolate on mummy's suit jacket, do you want some juice?" he nodded. "yeah let's get you some juice and then take a nap. She kissed his forehead and headed to the kitchen. She placed him on the breakfast bar, and handed him a little glass of orange juice. She looked as her little boy drank. he is the copy of his dad she thought' and that made her smile and sad at the same time. "All done" he said with a smile. She walked over pressed him close to her chest. "Mummy's good boy" she placed her cheek on his soft hair, then kissed his head and carried him, the little cutie wrapped his legs around his mums waist. She sat down on the sofa and rocked him to sleep., also dosing off herself.

*

"Pratigya!" she turned around. " shh mum he just nodded off"

"oh sorry listen beta I need to ask you something" Pratigya nodded. "Ill just place him in his crib and be back." She carried him and placed him down. She went to her room and got changed out of her work clothes.

(P's room)



Even after 2 years she kept a photo of her and Krishna on her night stand the same photo she kept in Krishna's nursery when he was a baby she often showed the photo of her and her and his dad. When he turned 2 years she stopped. mum's right If he asked where his daddy is what would I tell him. She sat down and took the frame in her hand. "but I will always remember him" she smiled and kissed his face and placed it back.

*

All clean shaven, wearing jeans and a blue t-shirt, his hair nicely washed. He walked forward with his hand in his pocket.

"did you find the address for me?" asked Krishna

"yes I did" he handed it to him, "I was right she's back in NYC. " I'll book tickets, let's fly out today, I will see my son and my Pratigya again. He grinned.

"I'm so glad you have it all sorted and now you don't have to run away from anything"

"me too, now I just want my family" he said smiling to his best friend Ian.

"how will you explain things, you ve been believed dead for 2 years now, that's a long time man"

"I'll have to explain to Pratigya what happened I'm confident she will believe me"

"Listen I don't want to put a damper on your plans, but..

"but what?"

"um... nothing, its cool, I'm sure things will be fine." Krishna smiled

"Ian thanks for everything you truly are a real friend, you really helped me, your like the brother I wish I had" Ian smiled.

"dude its cool, now your making me all emotional man, so stop with all the praises, lets go get some dinner, Krishna nodded. "Sounds good man"

*

"Be careful baby, mummy is just coming in a minute" she yelled into the garden. "how is he?"

"he's fine mum, he's just kicking his little ball around"

"Vidya told me about Anant"

"hmm, I don't know I don't know If I see him that way"

"from what I've heard he is really good with Krishna and he wants to marry you ,and beta life goes on you have to move forward for Krishna's sake he needs a father figure in his life too." She rolled her eyes and moved to the counter her mum went on..

"I know! She banged the bowl a little hard. "sorry mum, its just.. I guess your right, Anant is good with him and I guess I like him a little but I didn't want to say it out loud, I just feel guilty, if I like someone else that means I'm forgetting Krishna, and I don't want to.

"beta, listen it doesn't mean you are forgetting him, it just means your coping without him and that's good, and there is nothing wrong with being happy. Think what would Krishna want you to do, he'd want you to move on and be happy, you said he had a heart of gold" she nodded. "He did" she sniffed . Her mother put a supporting arm on her.

"and I have to think of my son's future so tell Vidya masi yes"

"really wow beta that is great news I will do that right away" Pratigya tried to smile but she wasn't completely sure. She looked down at her chain which had her engagement ring on it, she wore it ever since. "Krishna I will always love you, but I need to move on for our son's sake, I'm sorry." She went to remove the chain but she just couldn't bring herself to do it. "I'll do it in the evening"

*

"It's here are you sure?"

"Yes Krishna, I'm sure, they have a huge backyard maybe you can catch a glimpse. "ok you wait here and I'll go see" his friend nodded and Krishna left the car.


He heard a little giggle as he got closer and there he was a cute little boy, in blue shorts, and a white t-shirt, wearing a cap, giggling away as he kicked the ball. "my boy" just then the boy dropped his cap and Krishna got a full glimpse of his smiling face.


"He's mine" he smiled it was the most amazing feeling seeing him in the flesh.

precap 1

"this week itself I will tell Pratigya" but when he saw it was not what he hoped for at all. "Who's lap is my kid sitting on?"

"its really cute you have to hear him say that nursery rhyme, say it beta?" Krishna was burning inside seeing his Pratigya and this guy laughing and acting friendly. He couldn't believe how much changed in 2 years!!


precap 2

"I will have a long soak" she thought. Just then the bell rang. "Its mum she always forgets something.

"What did you forget this time?" Pratigya went to opened the door, and she couldn't believe her eyes.

tbc



Edited by Khushi96 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mind blowing updte
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful Update👏

Little Krishna is so adorable.

Kriya's love is so strong that P wasn't interested in anyone else he was her true love.😳 But because of her baby she is trying to move on.

Don't know how K is going to deal with P engaged to someone else or how P is going feel when she finds out K is alive. Hope it is K at the door in the second precap.

Update soon.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushi96

Nechu 😃😃😃
so nice to see you here, 🤗
thanks for the comments dear. I will update this ff regularly as i can 😉


Yea pls try to update it regularly... as I'm in love with this ... i just love it...
Just read the last part now... Such an interesting part... Eagerly waiting for the next one to see Ks reaction to Ps marriage... and Ps reaction to Ks truth... Really wanna see how Pratigya woukd behave... and how K would convince Pratigya ... I'm waiting waiting waiting... Update soon Jaan :* :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 13

"hey baby" Pratigya went and carried her son. Krishna's face lit up seeing her again, she still looked as beautiful as she always did her hair open it had grown quite long since the last time, she was wearing sandals and a summer dress , "my Pratigya" he said to himself. He saw as she threw the little one in the air and catched him, he was giggling so much and seeing him she did too "mwah, is my Krishna going to eat some lunch?" he playfully shook his head. "Krishna she named our son Krishna" he said alittle loud. Suddenly Pratigya looked around and he quickly hid to the side. She shrugged her shoulders "Let's go inside mummy wants to tell you something special". She said as she was carrying him to the front. She walked inside and closed the garden door. Krishna looked ahead and now found an empty garden. "I will come another time" he smiled happily it was great to see his family. He went and sat back in the car,"He's so cute , you should've seen him Ian, my little boy I just wanted to go and meet him."

"All in good time my friend, so what's the plan?" he asked.

*

"Vidya Masi!" exclaimed Pratigya. She hugged her. "hello beta, how are you and how is little Krishna?" she said seeing the little boy carried on the side of his mummy's hip. "He is great, aren't you, how is everything?" she spoke with her masi as they walked to the sofas "I'm fine how are you?" "how was your flight, just a minute, Varun Masi is here" she called. Varun came, he hugged his masi , "help her with her bags na" he nodded. "do want any tea or coffee?"

"Rose, make 3 cups of tea and bring them outside we can have them on the veranda we will drink there" she said with a smile. Pratigya's house maid/ child minder went right away to make the teas. "How is Shraddha?"

"Mum will be coming in around 10 minutes just before you came she had called. "Great"

"Krishna its me come here beta, do you know when you were little I played with you" Krishna seemed disinterested.

"mummy" he whinged pulling her hair a little.

"your tired aren't you"? he's getting cranky I'll just put him down for a little while, he will be in a better mood later. Vidya laughed as she stroked his cheek "that's ok beta"

"we will see you in a bit, come on you lets go upstairs" she kissed his forehead. As she came up the stairs, she passed her brother, "Varun go sit with masi she's on her own, I'll just place him down and come too. "Varu Mama" called Krishna..

"Yes mama is here, but you need to sleep I know your tired, we will play with Varu mama later, she leaned slightly to her brother and whispered. " quickly go before he sees you properly then he won't sleep and he will be moody all day." Varun nodded and left before his nephew saw him properly. Shortly Pratgiya mum came over to collect her sister to stay at her place. All 3 ladies enjoyed tea and biscuits.

"I told Anant he was very happy to hear your decision" Pratigya took a sip of her tea "yeah I spoke to him briefly this morning"

"I think we should do your engagement soon"

"um, ok what ever you feel is best.

"I have a surprise for you?" said Masi. "what you know I love surprises."

"tomorrow morning I will bring it" she smiled and winked at her sister. Shortly Krishna woke up. "Look who's awake" said Vidya Masi.

"He is in a better mood," look its masi." She said bringing him to her like an aeroplane. "whoosh, here you go"

"Hello Krishna" she said a in a baby voice and stroked his head, but he wanted to go back to his mum, "beta that's not nice"

"Krishu come to nani" he went to his grandma. "and you know this is nani's sister, see don't we look alike, after a few minutes he became familiar with Vidya and behaved well.

The next morning Pratigya opened the front door.

"Anant?"

"hi, surprised?"

"yeah" she smiled "um come in, so this must be masi's surprise" she commented.

"how are you?"

"great, I got time off work so I can come spend some time with you"

"oh ok "

"sorry is it too soon?" she was quiet at his question.

"hmm, no its fine, would like a drink?"

"yeah that would be good, wow is this your place" she nodded. "yup come I'll give you a tour"

*

"Just another glimpse of my kid, then this week itself I will tell Pratigya" Ian nodded. Krishna walked over, the day was nice someone must be in the garden he thought, but when he saw it was not what he hoped for at all. "Who's lap is my kid sitting on?" Then Pratigya came out. "how is he" she bent down to his level. "it's really cute you have to hear him say that nursery rhyme, say it beta?"

"tinkle tinkle li sta aaa" Pratigya busted out laughing at his extension on the letter a'. Whilst she did she placed her hand on Anant's shoulder. "My bacha" she squeezed his cheeks and kissed him. "by the way mum's calling you to have dinner. He nodded. "let's go little dude" he placed him over his shoulder. Krishna was burning inside seeing his Pratigya and this guy laughing and acting friendly, the garden door closed. He opened the car door and shut it, he didn't utter a word.

"Did you see him?" he nodded.

"Who was I kidding, so much has changed in 2 years, she's moved on and I'm a distant memory"

"what happened?"

"I don't want to talk about it, let's go" Ian didn't want to push him. When they got back to the hotel he told Ian what happened. Two days later Ian drove him back there.

"ok well she thinks your dead, that doesn't mean she's forgotten you, buddy she has no idea what's happened in your life, come on you've come this far are you not going to fight to see your kid?"

"no, what's the point, I'm done fighting I've done it all my life, I've got nothing but heart break from it I don't want to see my Pratigya and this guy together again I can't handle it"

"No don't do this, your son needs you, at least find out where you stand" Krishna finally decided to do so. He walked over to the garden and saw no one. He decided to sneak up to the front door instead. The door opened, Pratigya was in a gown waving to her son, as her mum took him for the night. She blew a fly kiss to him and closed the front door. She looked around, she missed her little boy already, but it was nice to relax. "I will have a long soak and then pamper myself, a girly night, just me and the TV" she thought. Just then the bell rang. She sighed getting off the sofa "Mum what did you forget this time. she said looking to the floor as she attended to the door.

"tell me?" she said as she opened the door, she couldn't believe her eyes, was this real. She blinked.

"oh my god, w-what, h-how?"

"Pratigya its me" he said looking at her she saw him speak, her mind couldn't take the shock, she began to feel dizzy. "this is.. I.. have.. she felt the ground moving as she passed out.

"Pratigya" he caught her just in time" sagging to the ground, he cradled her head in his lap. he lightly tapped her cheek. "hey wake up" he then noticed her chain my nani's ring she kept it after all this time' once he touched it she stirred. Her eyes opened. "oh my god, this can't be happening" she moved away from his lap. She ran away from him and ran into the kitchen, she splashed cold water, surely she's dreaming. "My darling" he called and she turned around and saw him standing in front of her "K-Krishna?" she said with a confused expression and tone. "surprise" what a stupid thing to say he thought once the words were out. "No I can't do this, you are not real" she walked into the living room. "I am Pratigya" he inhaled hard. Both were back in the sofa area, she slowly turned around "it's really you?" she was a little spooked she took a step back. "are you a ghost?" he took a step forward. "take my hand" she was hesitant. "no.."

"Pratigya trust me" he took a step forward. She moved her trembling hand to his, he pulled her gently by the fingers. "oh.." she responded once she felt the connection it was real indeed. Their eyes met, he pulled her forward straight into his arms. "I've missed you so much Pratigya" he sobbed. She half hugged him, her hand froze midway, what was happening, but then slowly she felt him caress her shoulder through her gown it was real her mind registered, she closed her eyes and reciprocated the hug. "oh my god Krishna, its really you " she felt the tears flow. Her hand caressed his nape and the hug got tighter, she gently gripped his hair. Wow that familiar touch of her hand on his hair felt so sweet. They both exhaled at the same time, just enjoying the hug. "Wait how is this even possible" she looked at him "I went to your funeral" they broke the hug. "I had to do this"

"do what?" he was quiet.

"no" she said taking a step back when she realised what.

"it was the only way"

"are you serious, we were a team, I.. I mourned you.. she sat down on the sofa, trying to process everything. He hesitantly took a seat next to her.

"so for 2 years you've been alive and you didn't even tell me once, I can't believe you let me go through this, I needed you , so badly especially when I had our."

"My friend Ian he helped me a lot and its because of him I am here today, listen I know your hurting,"

"do you, do you!"

"it was the only way I could keep you guys save" she turned to him.

"you guys? Wait so you know about our baby?" he nodded "of course baby boy, 8 pounds, born at 5am"

"who are you?, you knew everything and you stayed away from us, you didn't come to meet us once, or to tell me you were alive.

she got off the sofa pacing the room. "you know everyday I showed our son, your photo telling him his dad is somewhere in the stars watching him grew when this whole time he.." he got up and turned her around.

"Pratigya, you have to let me explain what happened if you could"

"I don't have to listen to this, you know what I can't, I can't deal with this right now, I want you to leave right now"

"what?"

"now Krishna, I can't believe I fell for your act pretending you loved me"

"I do love you, Pratigya just let me explain once then..

"no, no I can't deal with this tonight please just go" she sobbed. She couldn't handle any of this. "GO!" she screamed. Krishna saw what a state his appearance had put her in, he felt so bad, he left without another word, but then turned around.

"When I was away there wasn't a day that I didn't think of you guys, my little baby boy" She sobbed harder hearing that.

Krishna sat in the car slamming the door shut,

"so not the reaction you hoped for?"

"not at all, drive I will fill you in"

Once he left from there, and she had time to think she ran to the front door and opened it but she couldn't see anyone. She closed the door, did that really just happen?" she questioned her mind. "I need to lie down" she said.

precap:

Krishna got up from the sofa and now was feeling nervous.

"Listen Krish someone mummy wants you to meet.


tbc

Edited by Khushi96 - 10 years ago

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