Arshi/SS:TH#2: Inciting Desires 2/ COMPLETED :CH 4-7 - Page 71

Originally posted by: star_fan1

Just read two parts together

Its really wonderful and full of romance

Really loved the way you turn both in romantic mood eventually

Arnav's care and concern for her and Khushi's attraction for him made her accept that she had feeling for him which she never experienced with any other person

Well said😊 She couldn't be able to share it with anyone else and he never felt that with anyone else either

So its true that Khushi saw his father's murder but didn't talk about it to anyone because she promised her dead father

And someone is behind Arnav'a life to who is that person

Don't think Shyam is that master mind he will be some pawn

Let's see how will you unfold mystery of villain

red , so good.Next chapter u will see and u will find out who is after him ,but Khushi's father one ...u have to wait

Aadi and Khushi's friendship is so good

Love His jodi with Payal to much and as usual mojo add entertainmaint in their romance

Thnx

Precape sounds really interesting

Santo know how Arnav and Khushis love story is going to Progress

Waiting for next updated eagerly

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

that was ARSHILLICIOUS

loved how they shared each others pain

n their first kiss WOW

followed swiftly by their second kiss in the helicopter

how sweet was that moment when Arnav was curing khushis fear

looks like fun n romance was in the air

even Aadi had his fun with Payal

n by looks of precap Arnavs romancing khushi has just started

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Originally posted by: scorpio47

Hamesha love this Banner a lot

It is simple yet it has a lot of depth in it.

Thnx

Oh those Hands ...So soft and calming

They are the Balm on the intense Scar etched on a Soul ❤️

Cajoling this Dark Soul into let go...

Cajoling the dark soul, aww Saffron...u had me with this first

Reassuring Hands...

That Far Away look ...

Reassuring that they are with the Soul Every Step of the Way

Those Eyes oh so Dark have Hundreds of Questions ...

But those Soothing Hands Just says Let Go...

These Hands are comforting Hands...

Gentle Hands they maybe...

tenderness is written with love and care with assurance YES! REassuring those eyes and sooting those questions that let it go by reaching to soul...uff

They are saying 'Trust Me'...❤️

Just Let Go...

The Depth in those Eyes ...

The Silent Cries...

Let them flow...

Just Let Go...

Let it go those silent sighs and cries

So let these Hands Soothe that Pain...❤️

Just as You Let Go...

The Haunted Look in one set ...

The Comforting Hands of the other...

Simple it may look...

But to Me It Speaks Volumes...

U re one of those who reads beyond to steal my heart away dear, Speaks volume ...yes

Thank You for the Beautiful Banner.

Sharing Your Banners with Your Readers is what I admire You for...❤️

I shall sign off at this point...

saffron

❤️S

Need to see the other Set of Eyes Please (Request)

🤗 👏

Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.

Finally i'm here with my comment!

What do i say? You are doing a great work with this! No words for the way you are writing!

Amazing yaar!

There's every thing in this! Bit of suspense, romance, tragedy, love! I'm excited about this fic!

Intriguing! You're writing it beautifully!
There's much more to Arnav's past, isn't it? And with Shyam's entry, its gonna be more interesting now!

ArShi moments are written beautifully! Loved it!

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Finally aa gayi mein di 😉

Mmm..dreamy update... sushi and Khushi don't go. Together is it? And Arnav's PAD was awesome... ofc not exactly public.. change it to private ;) oh and beta u confused her as much as u could...

Aww, Sadhna,😊Isn't he adorable when he comes to his teasing mode and Khushi who alwys shut him up becomes mum when he is so flirty...Love that

Hayreee dinner was damn too passionate... u had me swooning over the perfect memory or imagination these two etched in my mind.. oh I loved how Khushi said give me all your hurt.. one strong woman you are.. despite all the problems and hurt she went through...

She is , She is master of hiding her pain behind smile and bringing a smile on his face or others...I am happy making you swooning head over heels

Oh that kiss was the most perfect and natural act performed when two heart beats and syncs together..

👏 well said

Another sleepless night.. but not out of sorrow... I loved that.. and how very beautifully Arnav drive her fear away.. that was awesome.. I really loved Arnav here..

Yes now they are making new memories together, painful or the happy ones

And they are back.. so soon? :( hehe Khushi is lost and ofc adi is bang on.. mojjo love u yaar... clever u!!!

One day trip😆 it was

Payal and adi fight was also cute.. and there raizada main nayee probs? Phir se shyam? Waiting to see how u r going to take this forward... and yep I loved anjali and Arnav ph call too...

Sorry he is the best villain of IPK😆

On the whole... I loved this update...waiting to travel further in this story with u di..

Regarding the note... Oh we can definitely understand and according to me no need of any clarification..we can understand..ofc sometimes I bug u for early updates.. that's all.. but that's ur fault.. u write well iss liye.. but yep take care..

Precap... ohooo red, Arnav and Khushi.. best threesome combo... interest level up!!

Originally posted by: jyothirockz

Loved the update...

ARSHI KISS REAL HIGHLIGHT😳

How I loved the way you set the scenes of Khushi's revelation of her traumatic past, her restlessness in presence of Arnav. How Arnav cannot seem to be in control in matters related to her.

Now who is this doctor, are they in anyway connected to Adi's family..? seems unlikely.

Waiting to see how Shyam's and other Arnav's enemies schemes and what brings on arshi breakup.

Originally posted by: pup03

wow mind blowing part.. loved ARSHI kiss.. a step ahead.. chahe tumne kuch na kaha magar maine sun liya.. ek saathi pyar ka maine chun chun liya.. this is perfect to define ARSHI and their silent conservations.. Khushi first time shared her nightmare with Arnav who is surprised how can she hold such a painful things within herself.. loved the way Arnav was holding Khushi when she wept for first time in his arms.. this is start of beautiful love.. loved the update..

thanks for pm and thanks for dedicating Chapter 5.. sorry couldn't comment on that part.. 😊

Originally posted by: sohara

Uff what an update!

I'm Absolutely enthralled.

Awww, so happy to see that Soha😊

Khushi and arnav are taking their relationship in a different level, where there is not only love exits but reliance also. I was just blown away how arnav comforted a distraught khushi. The first kiss was passionate. 😉

When his Khushi is conceerned with any matter related with pain and all, he is alwys there to relieve her from all the distraught matters..even given by him too..min aisa hi hoon

Felt so bad for khushi. Just at the age of 6 she had to see some terrible thing what still haunts her, giving her nightmare.

I just loved how arnav made her feel good in the helicopter. And the romance part is always my favorite. You know I am a bit besharam in this matter.

So adi came to know about their relationship.

I think we all are in this matter,but ARSHI gave us a lot to imagine too

Sexy Raizada is missing his lady love. He seemed completely smitten remembering the passionate moment with khushi. But his happy moments intruded by Nani's information about Shyam. So shyam is vile person here as well.

SHyam and asr's battle is about to begin.

After that hot hot precap, now it will be Impossible to wait for the next update.

Originally posted by: Linsie

4...
so some very nosey relative... poking khushi
and shashi comforting
words... khushi nightmare
to shut them
keep them away from the girls
payal and aadi..wedding on
arnav love to tease her
now some harm... she is just at the
wrong place and time
so the anger is about that
damm arnav

Originally posted by: angeldream14

amazing

so finally they both have realized that they feel for each other

they may not say it out loud but they hv confessed it in their own way

but dam curious abt Arnav's past

so his life is in danger

n y do I feel that he is d actual owner of sheesh mahal