Arshi/SS:TH#2: Inciting Desires 2/ COMPLETED :CH 4-7 - Page 73

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Posted: 10 years ago
Faiqa 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.


Fauzi😊

thnx for loving the intimate moments in between Arshi and Aadi-Payal

Aadi's concern is always sweet and so is Anjali who is alwys right besides her brother.

Update will be on time tomorrow...lambi or choti😉

OK BOSS !!!!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is me since last 3 hrs

Edited by Roop_P - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anudoll

The only word that comes to my mind after reading the update, flawless.
Khushi and Arnav's bonding, beautiful.
Now, who is Dr. Vikrant?
Can't wait for the story to unfold but I won't ask you too update soon ;)
Take your time.
Thanks for the pm


Thnx Anudoll😊

Dr, part is coming in the next chapter and I think u r the only one who is saying that in the bold😆 just kidding

Glad to see u thrilled
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Beautiful Faiqa dear!!!

Hey first thing first about your note...I did not find it boring at all. Trust me Faiqa you are doing very good with all the characters in your stories. I loved each and every word you wrote here. You are one of my best and cutest writer.🤗
I loved how the things are improving between Arnav and Khushi. Loved their first passion kiss...😳him keep her in her embrace making sure she is alright till feeling secure and relaxed...Awww...very beautifully written.
So engagement is coming on our way.
Loved this protective and cute Arnav who wants her to feel everything above her fear. He wants her to enjoy the Helicopter ride.
Now Shyam is out the dangerous part is coming soon😡
Precap is teasing one.




Thnx suniti😊

for understanding , really appreciate that , so sweet of u dear.Glad you liked the pink.


Shyam is coming yeah...come on cheer up 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AdiGallia

A Poignant and Stirring update👏


Thnx for warming words


I loved the way you have described Khsuhi's state of mind to him without being melodramatic.Actually it shows a sense of belonging and trust there at a high maturity level.The way she is tilting her head and asking him with a rim of tears and smile "Give me your pain" is extremely tender, emotive and heart whelming.She had him and me as a reader. 👏

Awww, that means a lot.So happy seeing so many people like that scene

Beautiful passionate and soothing moments near the soothing sound of waves , calming the nerves.

Right after Ocean , we are in the Sky where he was removing all of her fears.WOW! That contrast had me.


Thnx for this analysis, I know you and your mind too.👏

Anajli and Arun are the most beautiful two characters on their own.Their level of understanding and comfort is simply beyond any relationship..Same is with Akash and Payal.

Now the twist is being added.Dr.Vikrant and Shyam>Lets see what do you have in your mind.


Well said aboutAnjali and and Arun

Thnx Gallia for this intriguing POV


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

That was mind blowing update

First passionate kiss of arshi beautifully written.
Loved the wonderful bonding btw Kushi n Arnav
Excited for the next...
Happy belated friendship day faiqa..
Thanks for the pm


Thnx shruti😊

happy friendship day to u too dear

So good to see you

I am thrilled seeing you happy with the progress of this story


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update as usual.

ARSHI pain sharing was written wonderful. Can't enough of your updates.

Waiting to know who is the Dr and Arnav's past
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Awesome update...

Loved it...
Do continue soon...
Sorry for late and short comment...
Busy hoon but next time will give long comment


Thnx megha😊


so appreciate that u took time from ur busy schedule .

Thanks for your support as always

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: akurmapu

Awesome update as usual.

ARSHI pain sharing was written wonderful. Can't enough of your updates.

Waiting to know who is the Dr and Arnav's past


Thnx Anjani😊

It is an honor and Dr part is coming up in this chapter

🤗

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