Arshi/SS:TH#2: Inciting Desires 2/ COMPLETED :CH 4-7 - Page 69

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice story.. I will be following it from now on.. Thank u for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
read it all over again...wonderful story..is there any other woman involved
Edited by ranogill - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: xZoyax

Khushi's "Give me all of your pain " is reminding me this song


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8n5Mu_QU_yQ[/YOUTUBE]



Nice Zoya 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wooo
Awesome update..kiss haan seriously very delicately written.
Arnav taking care of her and the chopper scene was great.
Dr Vikrant kaun hai??
Waiting for next update
Thank you for an amazing chapter😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing chapter 5...
Wow made my day seeing my name there ...thanks dear 🤗

Coming to update. .

Fast n Furious glimpse with their driving. ..

Arnav's anger but hidden concern that khushi was able to sense...
Wow he took the key 😆...

Arnav's vulnerable state in front of anjali dhows their bonding I'd grey strong.

Both of them are thinking about each other.. he is worried for her -" what if" n she is understood his pain...

Wow khushi is busy in mind vs heart argument. ..

Arnav have arranged security for her ..khushi is following it good..

Aman too good...Looks like he felt something is there between arshi.

Wow Arnav never leave a chance to rile up khushi. .
Like the way he diverted her attention from height .
Khushi is totally a tigeress ready to answer him. .

Simply beautiful




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Posted: 10 years ago
Arnav and Khushi's pain and wounds of past are reminding me this

"One of the pitfalls of childhood is that one doesn't have to understand something to feel it. By the time the mind is able to comprehend what has happened, the wounds of the heart are already too deep." ~Carlos Ruiz Zafon~

Both are one of those luckiest people who really have survived and not only that thrived and excelled in their lives,but covered wounds are still there as fresh as day one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Are we getting any update near soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios



Hi Faiqa 🤗

First up there is no notification from you about the update 😭..pls do drop in a scrap. 😳

I think I always leave up there PMs later...when I can't finish all

Now coming to this update The chapter has a good flow to it ...I think the scene in the presentation room was very apt and even the one in the lobby. THIS is what makes Arhi 😃

Your story Has a light romantic feel to it and which is a very nice and needed thing after a hard day at work ...I agree with you totally there.😳

Thnx for liking those two scenes.Those are my favorite too.The title is Inciting Desires so it will desires , all sorts of

I also feel that Everything is Just TOO perfect for Arhi , is it the lull before the storm ? maybe I am just reading too much Between the lines but this is what I felt,

After all we need some twist so wait for that

I think your khushi's naive and yet has the bubbly appeal to her.

Arnav here is a layered guy? Am I right ? Will you be showing more hues to his role? I would want that actually 😳

He can't be a Shrewd ASR if he is not layered

Ok thank god ur Anjali is Nice, I will be honest I was not very fond of her in the show but somehow I feel if they had dealt with her properly . Her character would have been better

Totally agreed with you, I loved her in the beginning and after Shyam was thrown out, I hated the way they ruined her sweet character

Faiqa can you also put in a little more about the sheesh Mahal and Shyam and stuff ?? I would wanna Rea tht too ..

We are heading towards it

I have guests at home but once I log in again I may come back and edit ...

I hope this makes u happy buddy🤗

And btw pardon me who thinks ur egoistic 😲ur an angel ...ask me 😳


Thnx for the lovely comment.😊

There is no force as I want to read from an analyzer POV for my sake .
Some Questions of mind will be answered accordingly . My answers are above in between
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suji5

awesome update
khushi's father is murdered before her..
who killed him?
is that murder anywhere related to Arnav's family?


Thnx sugi 😊

Love seeing your curiosity.No There is no relation in between Arnav's family and her father's murder

Now who killed him? That info will come in later chapters
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pravallika

Faiqaaa🤗 beautiful update yaar😊
loved it to bits👏
kushi has a painful past...that's heart wrenching to know she was only 6 yrs old when she has gone through so much in life..
kushi was so confused seeing his care and concern towards her, she just couldn't understand his feelings.. but for the first time his anger was fruitful😆
he wanted to ease her and just wanted to see a smile on her face and as soon as she recovered, she was on mission, how to take away his pain..they are so much in love with eachother👏
their first kiss was beautifully written and out if the world and kiss where kushi was digging her nose into his cheek was very cute☺️ he is head over heels in love with her.. he made sure there was no fish in the party because she doesn't like it..
the scene in the flight where he was trying to make her fearless was awesome.. but the best part was she counting his sorries for what all he did with her😛 she is a real sankadevi..
why did he cancel his appointments till 11:00am next day??
who killed kushi's father?? why is this shyam trying to kill arnav???are they both connected in their past????
😆😆😆 i guess i'm leaving a question bank here instead of a comment faiqa😳
precap: your precap is like a torture to me until the next update dear.. hope you will give us the next update soon




Thnx Asha😊 For the pink
Glad u liked it
In red #1
He cancelled it becuse he has to spend time with Khushi in teh helicopter to free her from fears that day

Second , I answered tht already at the top of chapter 5...Nope there is no connection in between Khushi's past and Arnav's of Shyam

Next chapter will tell u why Shyam wanted to kill him

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