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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Fantastic Chapter...


Khushi shared her terrible past with Arnav..
It brought them even closer..

They got intimated...kissed for the first time..
..

Anjali is such a cute n caring sister..
She got ecstatic over just listening Khushi's name.. 😛

Adi's concern for Khushi shows how much does he care for Khushi..

Payal n her Bekaar Ullu r so cuteee..
But Mojo is the most adorable being..

The precap ws just...😆😳

Can we get a longer update.. that too very sooon..


Fauzi😊

thnx for loving the intimate moments in between Arshi and Aadi-Payal

Aadi's concern is always sweet and so is Anjali who is alwys right besides her brother.

Update will be on time tomorrow...lambi or choti😉
Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalbi

the update was beautiful, well it always is, why m I even mentioning it in every update :P

Awww, so sweet of you...thnx dear😊
There relation has moved notches up with just one trip.. It was disheartening to listen to khushi's past but its better to speak with someone who shares the same pain then to keep it bolted within one self..
well said , it is way better to speak up rather keeping it inside,but if teh person shares teh same pain then it is fine other wise it becomes another reason of laughing stock


Payal and adi were as always the so in love couple.. Its always lovely to read about them.. Being in love with someone and getting married to the same with the families permission is a blessing to have..

So true, it is a blessing when u found a partner who knows u inside out that close

Anjali and her teasing, she defenetly knows her brother too well and I hope shyam doesn't do any more harm to her, she has already gone through enough but I guess arnav and Arun will take care of it..
Blue, 😊 yes she knows her brother way too much

and red, u will have a glimpse in the next chapter

Coming to the precap, I m waiting to read the update soon.
I m truly in love with your work, keep up the good job



awww, thank you so much 🤗shalbi

Really appreciate that

my comments are in pink
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Hina69

Finally i caught up with the chapters and i am glad I did..BRILLIANT STORY LINE WITH AMAZING WRITE UP FAIQA👏

Khushi's past was so tragic..How she saw her father die before her in such a young age but still she let Arnav come out of his grief for that moment by being there emotionally and comforting him by her loving kisses...

And Arnav is falling hard😉 I am afraid what will happen which will break Khushi's heart as in the synopsis I read😳

Thanks for the PMs🤗


Thnx Hina😊

Awww that is n honor , glad u liked it

Red...Def some moments of life make u stop and urge u to stay away from those who u love the most
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wowww wonderful updt...
Loved it so much... So beautiful one it was...
So many arhi moments ^_^
Loved how things improving between dem...
Aww thy r in love !!!!

Awww, thnx gowtu😊 so happy seeing you thrilled with this chapter and with Arshi moments

Khushi's past z so sad.. No wonder she is still getting n8 mares..
But who could hv killed her father !!!

U have to wait for that as that is not that impt for the story...it is impt only for Arnav to know about it
Ye lo ek aur mystery...!
That will be revealed in the next chappy

What z nani telling him now...!!!

Loved aadi nd khushi part... Funny it was...
So aadi did knw about dem.. I thought he ddnt noticed..
Hhmm touched by his promise nd worries fr her.

Chapter 5, He heard her talking with Aman and asking about Arnav...he is her best friend knows her way too well.

So shyam z out of jail.. Mr.O connel plan k peeche ye tho nai !!
NO
Dr.vikrant !!! Ll wait to knw more about him...

Precap- nthng to say., excited fr it..

Continue soon


Thnx gowtu😊 for the lovely comment

Dr. and Shyam are coming in the next chapter

my answers are in pink
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.


Thnx Dark-Beauty😊

love this thought, bond will be stronger as I am really surprised for some including urself who got it so quickly .Thnx for reading in between

Dr. and Arnav's pastis in Chapter 7

🤗

Oh look like 'm rly smart 😛
N yeah i'll be waiting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lovetoread08

Sorry for late comment stuck with some work. Any ways coming to the mind blowing update.The surroundings are described so vividly.The description of Arnav's image in Khushi's mind was too good. I was literally visualizing the scene in front of my eyes."Serene sound of ocean won the tugging game by pulling both towards it", this para and the next para was beautifully written. Khushi read his mind which has gone through so much pain and adviced by saying"life doesn't stop either at one point", to let go off his burried deep wounds some where in his heart,was penned perfectly. I loved the dialogue "her lonely tear and words acted like icy splinters in that moment".The vicious past is revealed and there came her saviour to comfort her at such a heart touching moment."Give me all your pain and just smile" at this dialogue I thought she is a true lover,but far from her unknown feelings. Hold on, fire is burning at both the ends and there should be some icing😊,which comes in the form of much awaited 'first kiss'. I was smiling when these words came:where his prickling friends joined him in tickling her soft cheeks. Later... he was expecting Khushi's call, Aha..!! how can she miss it,this is a perfect chance for Anjali to pull her sibling's leg. Mojo sung the perfect song to the scenario.So, Aadi found the reason behind Khushi's slient mode, such a true friend. Payal was such a tease. Aadi and Payal's banter was (lol).Aadi teasing Payal saying that he has to surrender his freedom was so funny.Last para in red is indeed increasing the curiosity level of readers and arising the Q's like What will be the next step of Shyam? Who is this Doctor?

Recap: So deal is sealed between the passionate lovers😉.Thanks for the PM.



Love2read😊

Love the pink, thnx for flooring me with that

The surroundings play a major role in human's feelings and how do they perceive it

U liked a lot of dialogues , Thnx for reading in between lines

BUT I loved teh blue

yes she is a true lover far from realizing the reality

If u are visualizing these scenes then it is an honor

Red is coming in Chapter 7
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sneharjun92

awesome update. loved it.

beautifully written...
arshi relation is changed for good... khushi told arnav about her father n he was so shocked.
he said sorry to her for every wrong think he done to her.
shyam is out of jail. nani is worried, but arnav said her to not worry...
waiting for next part.😊


Thnx sneha😊ur lovely comment

glad u liked it

underlined will be here in chapter 7

Thnx for
Mysticaldivine thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: meera_beladiya

Such a nice turn after so much denial from both side

Liked the way adi teased Payal
I hope everything goes well
Who's Dr.vikrant??!!!
Do continue soon
Thank u so much for giving a long update n also for pm
Love u


Thnx meera😊

the red is in chapter 7

Well said , after denial and ego...they finally sheding all to join hands


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Wow!! Brilliant...! They way their intimacy was described flawless!! It was proper, passionate and wonderful...

Love that Khushi let herself go and made him happy also herself...
Arnav made the effort to let go of her fear! how cute///!
and Adi-payal's engagement is coming...will see more romance...!
Both are bruised but both will be the healer of each other...!
Isn't it love then what is?
Waiting for more!
As usual great work Faiqa!! 🤗


Saadia😊

Loved the blue dear

Yes they will heal each other's bruised souls

Pink yes lets see what comes on this engagement

Thnx dear for taking time out alwys
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for clearing my previous doubt!I've one more: Mojo is male/female?

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