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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Titaliya1234

The much awaited romance is seen! It blew my breath away! How beautifully and emotionally you have described their feeling,longing and yearning towards each other! Romance ho tho aise hi! Well my reaction while reading: i was giggling, blushing, drooling and what not! I could feel myself turning red too lol! Arshi are like that! Anjali caught arnav! K so dhaiyya ho is back! Hope he doesnt harm khushi! Are shyam and Dr. Vikrant same person?Thanks for pm!
P.S aisi precap dene ke baad aap jaldi next chapterwa update kar hi liyo


Thnx Titiliya😊

Love this precise and so beautiful analysis and yes ...Arshi are like that

That is what they do to us

Anjali is his sis and she has her Jasoos...don't you think 😉

RED...No totally Different

Being honest as This is my saving time strategy...instead of giving teaser in the middle , I give Pre-Cap at the end

Once again thnx

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Posted: 10 years ago
🤢Aww faiqu, I dont know how to express what I am feeling after reading this update. But your Arshi are so you...loving, caring, generous with their emotions seeped in a love that laps you from all side. I dig how you feel their pain and pen it down. All those little gestures and feelings that sway our hearts making us smile, that wistfulness, and a constriction in our heart, a lump in the throat...all that makes living and loving worthwhile leaving a surging lingering joy in the heart all day long, something which crops up suddenly in the middle of our day to day chores and makes the heart fly like a bird, till you chide it, scold it, bring it down to earth till it suddenly soars again and you smile...all that the update is about and all of it you write so well my friend. 😃And you need a kiss and hug for that dear Faiqu my dear.🤗 I am feeling so much better by just reading how they have mitigated each others pain. I love your taste in mojos collection of songs and your gifs bring immense joy as hamesha. You are doing a wonderful job in the subtelty of feelings, that is your USP and so you!⭐️
Edited by wiwy - 10 years ago
Mysticaldivine thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

Thank u for d note dear😊 well want to say just some things, you always replies us on comment n scraps n pm's, that what greatest things for us, it never matter u replying early or late. You r giving ur precious time for replying after regular update thats so much for us, it always bring smile on our face. Love u, loads of hugs🤗

🤗 🤗 🤗

Thnx Sona, Love u dear for understanding

What an beautiful update 😳
start was amazing, caring arnav was realy love to see, afterall its related to his khushi nah. Oh so khushi is fine its just Sushi and fish make her dizzy😆.

haha, yes it is all about his Khushi and how can he let that happen to his Khushi even Sushi is his enemy Dammit😆

After meeting, having effect of sound of ocen they headed towards it. Nature also wanted to support them to let go of pain, agony n misunderstandings btwn them. So arnav decide to say sorry bt again khushi's support make him misundstand as her sympathy. Thankfully khushi interrupt him on time, with her own pain n agonizing past making arnav realise that, under dis smiling face a shattered daughter is living, fighting with horrifying past.

So well u said in pink,All elements of nature always played a big role in their relationship and here too ,shooting water of ocean and winds are bringing them closer than ever.He misunderstood her as always and then knowing her pain bigger than his he became the protective source of hers as usually

Khushi let go of her agony in Arnav's embrace while he gave her warmth to let it go. And with that she too decide and take step to make sure his pain also going to dissolve.
Love their first kiss. Kiss of care, concern, understanding, kiss of letting go of pain, past, agony and of course kiss love, passion and tenderness.

Sona u always leave me speechless and here this is again.You wrapped this kiss so beautifully in words .Yes care, live, passion and tender
Oh wow, anjali must be on cloud 9 knwing, her brother's Khushi, i mean happiness is on d way. Arun was ryt, hope anjali wl also understand it and wl move on in her life.

She will when she will see a light through which she is feeling near Arun ans soon she will fall in his arms with his love

Chopper arshi scene was mind blowing. Its so touching that arnav taking step to free khushi from every fright while holding her protectively. And last arnav's sorry was much needed to make them together with having no past grudges.😳

His sorry and her way of extracting it shows how beautifully they are connected today and they don't need words.Do They? Arshi alwys have this connection ,but they realized it later

As usual love aadi n khush's friendship. Awww..Friendship day is on way n Mojo singing friendship song, wow..what amazing scenario. Payal n aadi's teasing talk was hillarious.

aww, how could I leave u all without a gift of friendship...Mojo is sweet in her way and similar is Aadi and Payal

Hope this coming crisis Dr. Vikrant doesn't bring any hurdle in arshi's life.

U don't have to wait for this as the past is coming this chapter

Precap is as always very exciting

ps. Happy friendship day dear



Thx sona😊

Simply blew me off with words dear

So loved ur analysis over kiss, well described

My comments are in blue

Happy friendship day dear, beautiful wishes
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy

🤢Aww faiqu, I dont know how to express what I am feeling after reading this update. But your Arshi are so you...loving, caring, generous with their emotions seeped in a love that laps you from all side. I dig how you feel their pain and pen it down. All those little gestures and feelings that sway our hearts making us smile, that wistfulness, and a constriction in our heart, a lump in the throat...all that makes living and loving worthwhile leaving a surging lingering joy in the heart all day long, something which crops up suddenly in the middle of our day to day chores and makes the heart fly like a bird, till you chide it, scold it, bring it down to earth till it suddenly soars again and you smile...all that the update is about and all of it you write so well my friend. 😃And you need a kiss and hug for that dear Faiqu my dear.🤗 I am feeling so much better by just reading how they have mitigated each others pain. I love your taste in mojos collection of songs and your gifs bring immense joy as hamesha. You are doing a wonderful job in the subtelty of feelings, that is your USP and so you!⭐️


Aww Ritu🤗

U said it all, who knows me more than you🤗 ❤️

Thnx for the kiss and the hug

The underlined pink was all this update about to show how all of us just like ARSHI feel this , go through with it on a regular basis but we always take it out ob those who really are close to us,those who we feel a right on , who we can open up with without a fear , can pout, cry nd all and those loved ones embrace u will care and try everything possible to heal u...

Mojo is lovable and living character and he speaks what we want him to ease or cheer up our loved ones...

Thnx for liking him and all the elements

Hope u r feeling well now❤️





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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: latersbaby.

Stupendo fantabulously fantastic update di...loved it

So khushi felt dizzy due to sushi😆😆..humne socha kuch pee k tali hogaee the..bad guess😆😆


But I mentioned , there is no Holi and no bhang dear

Aww di u just nailed it the way u potrayed khushi's emotion..her pain her agony to see her father died in front of her nd she being not able to do anything..was so painful for her at that tender age

Happy to see that arnav is thier for her to provide heremotional support..who thinks that khushi can never understand his pain.bt her pain is also not less than him..its brought tears iin my eyez thhe way khushi broke down in arnav's arm..so heartwrenching di...

Nailed it with so right gifs...Did I make u cry? shorry ...But this is what happened to her and she never shared with anyone except him like this...def there is a connection of pain they share.He really embraced her in his protective shell

Nd the way she said arnav to give his all pain to her shows how much arnav means to her as she cant see him in pain..beautifully written di..this simple line so hearttouching

Thnx , that one line was more than enough for him to change and lets see how this one line brought him to his knees
Nd the much awaited arshi first passionate kiss
Arnav kissed her to convey that he is thier for her alwayz..to convey what see means to him..to convey how much her words means to her..so as khushi to convey him to give his all pain to him..try to heal him through that kiss...lovely
They both agree that thier must b something more than attraction..ek Anjana se dor jo hamesha dono
k
apne aur kinchta...no matter what...

I love what u said in that pink his kiss is showing her how much she means to him and her is to heal him


I jst loved this mojo di..isko mujhe dedo basss😆😆kya timing hai isska har baar...😉

😆 thnx for liking him so much as he is my fav too
Oh no khatre ki ghanti..shyam was out from jail..nd now this vikram guy..what connection thier should bee...waiting for this mystery to b revealed
Continue soonish di

Coming chapter u all will know

Ahem ahem abhi se maan rabba veying by seeing this precap...😳😳😳


Thnx dear for always such a deep insight.👏

Love ur pink ones and my answers are inn blue

thnx for so lovely gifs😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pmohan89

A mind blowing Update 👏⭐️

His care and attention to fragile detail of hers and the removal of every disturbing element from her life is what gripping her,but she needs time to get it? He is showing her by his ways how important she is to him,but he needs time to acknowledge it.Brilliant sketch of this story is lying in this thought👏

Priya...muahhs


very few get in between the lines...and extract some deep thoughts..way to go!


They are coming closer, passion is oozing but their actions, desires are grounding seeds under the blanket of protecting and soothing each other.👏

She's been through so much more than him, I must say.His embrace was pure comforting where she shed all of her past tears which she couldn't do in years.

pain has connected them together

"Give me all of your pain and just smile"

I am sold here.These innocent words will wake him up later when she is gone.I am assuming too much , may be.


U got that right here...this will jolt him
Lovely romantic moments,but my most favourite is her dipping nose kiss feeling his evening subtle and his feeling her softness.I read that one more than enough times.

😳

Payal-Aadi is a nice and cute couple😳

Now Shyam and Dr.Vikrant , Are they connected?



nope they are not connected

Thnx Priya, for such an intriguing review

my answers are in blue up there
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.



Thnx Asha😊 For the pink
Glad u liked it
In red #1
He cancelled it becuse he has to spend time with Khushi in teh helicopter to free her from fears that day

Second , I answered tht already at the top of chapter 5...Nope there is no connection in between Khushi's past and Arnav's of Shyam

Next chapter will tell u why Shyam wanted to kill him


So, when will be that faiqa??? ( next chapter )
Mysticaldivine thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mahrusweety

that was fabulous
marvellous update
awww
arshi kuss was so soothing and calming not for arshi pain but also.for our hearts
u wrote the chappy fabulously

adi and payal couple is soo cute
with mojo songs as background music
loved it
the suspense here makes me more hooked with this ff
great job buddy


Mahru 🤗

U r so sweet dear

Yes our hearts also get that peace seeing them at ease.Mojo's singing in the BG is providing enough happiness around
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SarunNArshi

U liar.u said nothing is gonna happen between them.😆😆

Bt that was such a surprise.i was sooo happy wen i saw my pm inbox with a mail titled "first kiss"😉
Oh update was soo gud.uff arnav again tried to shout at her btKhushi stopped him and hugged him.sooo sweet.
And the KISS.kya kahooo.it was soo sweet and intense.
And they kissed twice.
Seriously i love khushi's family.they all love khushi soo much.
And my doubt is rohan going to be future hubby to anjali.
.prcap-i just love arnav's predatory walks and her backward walks.waise arnav ne aisa kiya kya ke khushi ki naak laal ho gayi hai


SaunNArshi😊

Love seeing u thrilled with this surprise

Khushi's family is sweeter and they really have so much love for her.

Now pre cap😆 u will find in the new chappy




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty

Outstanding update
that outbust of emotion is rly needed,
it 'll make their new found bond more stronger

finally Arnav said sry, wow thats impressive
aww such a romantic Arnav
now who is this Dr.?
Aadi is such a caring friend
plz continue soon
precap looking dam interesting
so can't wait


Thnx Dark-Beauty😊

love this thought, bond will be stronger as I am really surprised for some including urself who got it so quickly .Thnx for reading in between

Dr. and Arnav's pastis in Chapter 7

🤗

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