Arshi/SS:TH#2: Inciting Desires 2/ COMPLETED :CH 4-7 - Page 67

Originally posted by: chinnulu

Wonderful update.

Loved how Arnav took care of her because she cannot stand fish and made sure there is no fish in the menu after their meeting. Both Arnav and Khushi poured out their feeling about the loss of their parents was emotional, though it started with Arnav being angry self when Khushi tried to console him until he knew abt her parents. The kiss between them was beautiful there was no lust but passion with sharing their pain. Loved when Khushi told him to give her all the pain and asked him to smile was really beautiful. For now both started to let out their feelings out though not fully they are taking one step at a time. Loved how Khushi made Arnav to ask sorry for all his shouting at her in the past. It was funny the way she extracted sorry from him.

Chinnulu😊 I love what you said in the pink and that was my intention , No Lust...it supposed to be a comforting hug, a soothing passionate kiss ...a relieving pain moment.Now they have shared the deepest pain only with each other.She is selfless soul and that is what she stands for.A bit crazy and innocent , ofcourse she is the only one who can make mighty ASR say sorry like that.😆

Loved how Adi was protective of Khushi. He is really good friend to her. Adi's and Payal's moments are cute in between Mojo's singing was nice.

Adi is the one who she held the hand after his Baba, He always was a protector of her as a friend , as a big bro,but he always loved Payal for her simplicity and cuteness.

Shyam tried to kill Arnav before was surprising. Nani's fear that he might do something to Arnav and him assuring her was nice. Now the new character who is Dr. Vikrant needed to wait to know abt him and his connection with Arnav and his family.

For red read chapter 2 in the blue section ...where some of his past is revealed. Dr. Vikrant is in next chapter.

Precap looks nice cannot wait for the update to read ARSHI's moments.

All writiers have their own style and have their own way of presenting their views. Please don't think that u are not good at it because as far as i have read ur stories i find it interesting and wanted to read more. U have ur personnel and professional life to deal with other than giving us good stories. Still u reply to our comments by taking time in between which is so nice of u along with the updates. We really appreciate for it.

Looking forward for the next one.

Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Awesome marvellous chappy dear👏

loved it

plz continue soon

thnks 4 the pm😛

Originally posted by: Arshi2503

Their chemistry is amazing .As you rightly said rabbave
alone is not enough to complete the story.Loved their trip
in the copter and their cute conversation .
Devil Shyam out from jail.Akash also coming into the picture.
Liked the way the story is moving
Thanks Faiqa for the pm and inspite of
Your tight schedules replying us

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Mind blowing update
Loved it

It was superb
Really so well written
U really rocks yr


U alwz portrays things so flawlessly
I can envision everything


Love u
Keep smiling

Originally posted by: tuli_jayee

Monsoon is considered as season of romance & here I am reading ur superbbb romantic updt while it's heavily raining outside. Btw ... I read ur updt without any pm.

It was out and out an updt dedicated solely to Arshi. Loved the fact how dey r slowly bonding so well & d kiss says it all. Superbly written.

Since u mentioned next few chapters will be full of ahemmm moments ... I am counting on it.

updt soon. eagerly waiting for nxt updt.

Originally posted by: archnahardik123

Beautiful update. Loved all the lively moments between arnav and Khushi.

Finally they are moving some where. Liked that they share their past and sorrow with each other.

So Shyam is behind arnav and want to kill him. What's the story behind in the past?

You write romantic moments beautifully.

Loved a lot how Khushi try to take his pain away. But when they are going to talk about this thing between them properly? When they will be together officially?

Thanks for beautiful update and pm.

Originally posted by: cuppycake11

Beautiful & lovely update as ever 😳 Really loved Arshi part, so finally we witnessed their first kiss, Their painful kiss at the hotel shore was too good, the way both bring out their past & end up healing each other, the plane romance was hot, scared khushi & muscleful ASR, Looking forward to your next update !! 😳

Originally posted by: sweetakhi71

lovely update..

loved the way arnav and khushi are slowly getting comfortable with each other..

and khushi opened her past to him... and arnav even asked for sorry..

so good

Originally posted by: Aryancha

Mind blowing update!👏👏👏

The first kiss itself was soo passionate and loving..I especially loved when he kissed her cheeks, the stubble pricking her soft cheeks along with the lips☺️ best was they were totally together in their first kiss and none of hem regretted doing it that moment..

Excellent point Dear and good observation.Yes they both are in it , let's see who acknowledges it first...The main purpose of their first kiss is to realize the importance pf each other's presence in their lives which is so connected with PAIN and now the next phase LOVE ...will be laid out ...let's see.

The back story of heir lives must be cleared out more...Shyam came just to kill him and now returning

from jail might cause problems in their lives.Dr. Vikrant seems to be known to both Aakash and Arnav so hope he is a good character and not mixed up with Shaym.

Red and all , starting from next chapter...

Arun and Anjali even though married are not close as husband and wife yet? Arun for sure loves her a lot but guess Anjali is not out of her past😭

They are not married yet , they just are colleagues...and childhood friends