Arshi/SS:TH#2: Inciting Desires 2/ COMPLETED :CH 4-7 - Page 26

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

hello diduuu😎

my expression reading update..

😳☺️

then 😭😡🤬

then👏

then😔

then😊😲😡

at last

Thank you

let me xplain * rubbing fingers*

Khushi baby day dream abt Arnie hmm gud sign...Ho his eyes..and his stares..Only Khushi can survive it...and naughty gal she enjoyed it well...and then he lean against the wall looking her wid that goofy grin *mere ko kyu maar rahe ho diduu* and that ear ring wala scene...bas...just look at my face..I cant take it any more...😳☺️..

😆 my dear I was so waiting to read your comment ...u r one of those who makes my day

Khushi ko rula diya..😭..her mom was Italiyan..

Kamla ho ya shimla...Ratna ho ya Patna...I want blood...So here I am sending u something dangerous..(Mosquitoes...Idis Igypti with chikun Guniya and Anophilus with Maleria and Dengue too make sure u guide them straight to that ladies room...) 😡🤬

Shahi Uncle u r the best..the way he calls her 'bacha' everything and every damn meaning, relations r there in dat single word..his deep love and affection.

and the words.."dil ka rishtha Khoon ki rishtha se bada hota hai..." I still remember Shashi Guptha's sentense to Khushi in IPKKND...and also Anjali and Khushi's...

and didu u rocked it...lo meri ⭐️👏

🤗awww u rocked it with that pink...yes his calling her bacha is everything

Khushi and Panick attack?? poor girl.😔..I am taking back my mosquitoes...I need all her blood and that useless tongue...Cut it and will make an achar Bas😡 (i WILL not eat it)

😆 😆 I won't eat that

Payal and Adi's baarath is gonna come soon...

Arnav really luved to annoy her just to see her red nose...yeh ladka bhi na...

but apne sasur ji ko patta liya..

😆 yeap , smart guy he is

Mr Law and Order..hmm can she simply call him court or judge...So i am just shrinking dat as Mr LaO to type less...*i'm such Lazy gal*

I like that short LaO

ASR's life in danger...and she overhear his parents death anniversary...but ASR bhi na bark at her😲...and his stupid speech...😡..and she just gone after his Get out...

..Sathyanaash.. Ab thera kya hoga kaaliya...err ASRyaa😆

But he is going after her

Precap: 😉...

NB: I LUV u..and u know it right didu???? and thanxs a lot for including me in list of 15...and I am surprised u lyk my blabbering a lot...dat so chweet...Dinka chika Dinka Chika..

❤️ u dear

Originally posted by: Roop_P

Khoda pahad aur nikla ye 👏 I was right in one way .It was his past and something with Parents' anniversary😃

I am feel so honored .Thank you so much and your writing deserves it.Your versatility and depth with such detail is what making us express more.Thank you!

Now update .

I love the start which connects with the previous night so beautifully .His longing and standing against pillar watching her smiling. mentioning her lost earrings and then her smile in return.Thud😳 His heart must be dancing.

Then a mother's intuition and concern for her child to warn,but still She got hurt.These kinds of women are every where,but A father figured such a beautiful solution to shut everyone's up.So Payal and Aadi's engagement is up.😊

Mojo did Dhan tana tane tane...with Mr Law and Order's name. 👏😉A simple and beautiful thought.

Now this ASR loves to see her blushed 😳 her red nose escalates his heartbeat.😉

Their phone cnvo is all technical,but so sweet.

Baba and Daughter convo made me laugh .His bafflement is justifiable What did ASR win>?😳

o the smarty pants asked permission from her father.😉

so he hurt her in his concerns seeing her hurt and now he is going after her.that will be a treat.😳

pre cap is so appealing.can't wait.

Originally posted by: ushvija

hi ,
congrats on the new thread and also for dedicating chap 2 to me. feel honored :-)

So sry for this late comment but yes AD had been crazy, just got to read chp 2,3,4 on a go and hence commenting for all the three together.


The confusion of khushi's name is also now clear. Mojo is the real entertainer of the gupta house.

Payal and Aadi then what will akash do ??
Is someone planning to attack Arnav ? or may be they are planning to attack him/ make him weak where it hurts the most - ruining sheesh mahal . i guess so


waiting for the next.
might be irregular but will def catch up . check your PM

Usha

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan

Congrats on the new thread Faiqa...and Eid Mubarak to you too!

I think Mojo is the new star of the IPK saga 😆 his talks are so cute!

Ohhoo...I never thought Payal & Aadi!!! What the! 😆 but its interesting...Payash ki kahani mein twist..hehe...this is something different and refreshing! Arnav and Khushi...what do I say about them...you weave their emotions so well...and Arnav's concerns are so high that he even hurt Khushi unknowingly!

Waise, I must say that the precap is so sensuous...the jerk and beating heart and uff...continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: love_u_Sarun

Well I am reading for the first time

And u know I loved ur ff so much.well written Buddy..

U were extremely gud with showing up arnav and khushi emotions ...Mr shashi is such a sweet heart..and garima too..

But buddy I have one doubt is this alliance for payal and aadi or khushi or aadi...

Still gud job..please pm me when ever u update next part

Thanks

Originally posted by: sneharjun92

amazing part. loved it.

relatives of gupta again gossiping about how khushi is not guptas daughter. n payal is suffering coz khushi has half property on her name.

vimla maussi again asked khushi that who killed her father n that cause her pannic attack.

shashi was so angry after knowing this from payal.

payal loves khushi alot like her parents.

payal n adis engagement is in next month...

arnav shouted on khushi after their convo.

after she is gone he realised what he said, as mr. gupta has warned him that khushis safety mentally n physiccaly means what to him...

waiting for next part...😊😊

Originally posted by: shalbi

I didn't like the update, I loved it..

it was beautiful.. U write so beautifully. Though I m not able to read the third part as i use my mobile and due to so much content on that page it doesn't open, i hope i didn't miss much which would be too relevent in the story, though the precap helped me a lot getting to know what was the crux of the last part..

Excited for the next part, waiting for some of there arshi time..

Continue soon

Originally posted by: AdiGallia

Simply amazing👏

Story and it's pace is really appealing.Makes you come back, makes you urge to know what happened to Khushi's childhood, what happened to Arnav's childhood?

Her fear , his fear are so bonded.Her is seeing loved one died and she learnt how to love because she found a great father and a lovable mother.

He saw his loved one died and hated to love or to be love because he didn't find any unconditional love and here comes Khushi.Her touch, her innocence.her unconditional love .

Beautiful flow must say.👏

His anger is just his care for her .He didn't even thought of himself for even a second.

Looking forward to more

P.S. Thnx for the dedication dear.

Originally posted by: latersbaby.

Completed reading 4 chap in one go... beautifully written di...loved it👏👏

Aww i jst love this mojo di..what timing of its song..such a funny creature it is😆😆

Love to see the bond of sashi nd khushi who treat her no less than her own daughter...became her support her strenght in evey thick and thin...so also aadi who was alwayz thier for her no matter what...lovely

Nd those useless relatives whose only work to poke thier nose in others matters than thier..i jst hate these type of people..pathetic creatures😡😡...bt love to see the way sashi make khushi understand nd cheer her up..so sweet

So arnav was attracted to khushi...love thier cute nok jhok...

bt uff his anger...jst lash out at her without knwing that she also going through the same pain as him...

Uff i want khushi should give him tough tym to manofy her..😆😆..bacchi ko daant diya kese

hope with khushi's love heal his evey pain nd he again able to embrace happiness in his life with open arm without any doubt or hesitation

Nd who was dat person who planning to harm arnav??

Looking forward for nxt..

Continue soonish

Ps:- tab me puchna bhul gaee..me apko di bula sakti hoon na??😊

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

For new thread...

Now come to update...

It's awesome and mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Beautiful...

Omg khushi father killed by someone...

Feeling bad for her..

She got a panic attack...

Loved sashi and khushi talk...

You wrote each and everything beautifully...

Omg someone want to harm arnav and his property and khushi hears this everything and she told everything to arnav but arnav blasted on her...

Precap looks interesting...

Do continue soon...

Ans thanks for the pm...

Sorry for late comment...

Just busy