MaNan FF:~ Dil Dhadhakne Do~ upd pg 16. - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Hey girl thats amazing...
But plz update regularly na...
I was waiting for ur updates...
I have posted the link of yaariaan forums.. u can use that...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Whoa whoa...it was hell osum..de onli disappointment was u update late, pls post regularly cuz I cnt w8 more 2 read abt jealous manik..I juz luv dt part..n maddys entry was super osum..juz luvd de hol part..tysm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Maddy is good.. nice.. and Manik is jealous of him..even better
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
nice update.👏
manik is burning with jealousy.
bring soha's truth infront of manik.
plz cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Yaar kab update karoge??
Jaldi update karo...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Heyy...it's a perfect story...i just read all the chpters in one go...n i can't tell how much i'm loving it ...
Plzzz...pm me too...plzzz...plzzz..
Byee...tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
I LOVE UR FF
JUST UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON
M DYING TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW
PLZ PLZ PLZ TRY TO UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Hello peeps... happy Navratri...
First of all, I am really very sorry that u all have to wait so much for my updates, from now i will try to update regularly...

Secondly, i have been watching SwaRagini these days on colors, thinking to write something about that...

What do u all think?? Should I???

Okay, so now the update...



Recap:

All the gang members enjoys the party,
Maddy (nandu's childhood friend enters),
Soha comes to the party uninvited, and manik takes her side, &
Nandu ingores manik henceforth.


PART: 14

Its the next morning, and manik woke up quite early. he wakes up and sees the time.

MaNiK: Abhi toh sirf 6am hue hai... aaj main itni jaldi uth gaya.. now i should go get ready and meet nandu, she was nagry yesterday...

After 15min manik was standing in front of mirror and getting ready.

MaNiK: mujhe nandu ko call karna chahiye...

he takes his cell and dials nandu, who was sleeping like a baby on her bed...

Nandu gets up with the buzzing sound of her phone..

She gets happy seeing the name, and picks up the call...

NaNdU: good morning mani...

MaNiK: good morning nandu.. uth gayi princess...???

NaNdU: ummhhhuh... tumne utha diya.. (Pouts)

MaNiK: aww.. koi baat nahi.. wake up now and get ready.. I am coming to pick u up in 1 hour...

NaNdU: hmm.. okay.. bye..

MaNiK: bye...

MaNaN cuts the phone and smiles to themselves... Thinking about how equation changed in just one day!!

Nandu wakes up and gets ready wearing:


MALHOTRAS:

Manik was leaving when nyonika called him for breakfast...

NyOnIkA: manik... atleast have breakfast.. itni jaldi mein where are u going?? and where is mukti??

MaNiK: mom.. please, i have to pick up nandu.. and breakfast i have something later, i am getting late... and aliya will come to pick up mukti.. so dont worry.. bye...

Saying this manik runningly goes out of the house, leaving a shocked nyonika behind...

NyOnIkA: ye manik hi tha, ya fir main koi sapna dekh rahi thi?

Shrugging her thoughts, she goes back to her work..


KIRLOSKERS:

Nandu came down and saw her parents sitting on table waiting for her to have breakfast... She was about to sit, just then manik enters...

MaNiK: good morning everyone!!

ArJuN: good morning manik bete, aap yahan??

MaNiK: haan uncle, wo main nandu ko lene aaya tha, college keliye...

PuRvi: ye toh bahot achcha kia aapne beta, waise bhi since navi is not here, nandu had to go to college alone, so come on now come sit and have breakfast with us!!

NaNdU: haan mani, have breakfast, waise bhi i know u dint have yet...

MaNiK: haww.. how do u know??

NaNdU: i know u manik...

PuRvI: okayy kids, sit down.. and finish ur breakfast, otherwise u will be late for college...

MaNaN have their breakfast, bidding their bye to the parents they leave for college...

In Car:

MaNiK: waise, nandu kal tum angry kyu ho gayi thi??

NaNdU: see mani, i will be very frank, i dont like that soha, i alwaz get negative vibes from her, i mean i dont know what but she is upto something really bad... and when i came to know she is a part of FAB5 toh i got angry.. u r all my friends i cant see anyone hurting u all.. U all are a part of my family.. specially u and mukti...

MaNiK: nandu.. u r getting it all wrong.. soha is not like that... and as far as her being a part of FAB5 is concerned its just because she forced us to let her in...

NaNdU: and u love her so much, that u allowed her... now i know why,because she is ur gf, and u love her.. okay fine by me then, do whatever u want manik, i am not going to say anything... But kal jo usne party mei aakar kia, if it happens again, i will seriously stop talking to u.. as like yesterday u will take her side only..

MaNiK: nandu...

NaNdU: no manik.. let it be.. i understand... anywaz college aagaya hai.. will see you later, and thanks for the lift...

Saying this nandu gets down from the car and goes inside leaving a sadly shocked manik behind...

MaNiK: kya nandu sach keh rahi thi, is soha really upto something?? And what she said i love soha, how can she say that, doesnt she know i can never think of anyone in that light... and soha she was just an attraction, i know... i need to talk to FAB5 regarding this!!

Saying this he leaves to Music room, where FAB5 are already waiting for him...

MUSIC ROOM:

Fab 5 were waiting for manik just then he enters...

MuKtI: lo bhai aa gaya...Aap kahan reh gaye the bhai?? hum sab kabse aapka wait kar rahe hain??

MaNiK: wo mukti... i am sorry i am late, and guys i have something really very important to talk to u all?? Cabir please lock the door!!

CaBiR: okay manik...

Cabir goes and locks the door before anyone enters...

DrUv: buddy?? aise kya ho gaya?? tu itna tense kyu hai???

MaNiK: guys.. (Then he tells about his talk with nandu)
So what do u guys think???

CaBiR: i think its time druv we should tell him everything!!

DrUv: right cabir...

MuKtI: tum log kya bol rahe ho??

Cabir then goes on telling about soha, how nandu saw manik and soha kissing and karan informing her about soha's character, and #DruBiNi's plan to keep soha away from manik and FAB5.

Manik-Mukti-Aliya were shocked!!

AlIyA: guys... i know i was selfish, but i alwaz knew this soha is upyo something, i mean come on she literally forced us to let her in FAB5.

MuKtI; its my fault too, i let her come near my bhai!!

MaNiK: no guys, its none of us fault... i mean how could we know that she is upto something like this.. i mean she is so cheap!!

CaBiR: guys.. i know, jo hua that was not good, but still by continuing nandu's plan, we can make soha pay for her deeds...

DrUv: i think, this is the right thing to do!!

MaNiK; but guys, forst of all we have to throw her out of our FAB5, officially...

Before manik could finish saying, someone knocked the door...

*knock knock* *knock knock*

Mukti goes and opens the door and sees its soha...

MuKtI: what the hell are you doing here?? dont u know this place is booked for FAB5,and no commoner can enter this room??

SoHA(evilly smirking): really mukti... i must remind u then, i am oficially a member of FAB5.

Before mukti could say thing, FAB4 joins her...

SoHA: see na manik baby, what mukti is saying??

MaNiK: mukti is rights soha..

Soha gets shocked...

SoHa: what do u mean manik?

AlIyA: he means, now "OFFICIALLY" we forbid u to be a prt of FAB5.

CaBiR: now u r not a part of us...

DrUv: not a part of FAB5.

Soha gets shocked listening all this, and seeing manik standing there silent.. she goes to manik and holds his hand...

SoHa: Manik see na, what ur friends are saying... u know na.. i am a member of FAb5.. i am ur girlfriend so obv i am a FAB5 member...

MaNiK: i cant go against my friends soha.. if they are saying u r not.. it means u r not a member of FAB5 anymore... i cant do anything about it!!

SoHa: but manik...

MuKtI: enough soha.. we have listened anough of ur bulshit. He is my bhai.. and cabir-druv-aliya's best friend.. he can never go against us for a mere girl like u..

AlIyA: exactly, girls like u comes and goes in Manik's life.. so u r no special.. so just leave and let us rehearse, if not, then be ready to face FAB5...

Soha gets scared and leaves from there angrily...

This was all seen by SPARKLINGS as they were coming to join FAB5.

Fab5 goes inside and starts laughing..

MuKtI: did u guys saw her face??

CaBiR: hahahhahahahah.. bechari soha.. uska toh sara plan hi flop ho gaya!!

Just then Sparklings enter music room...

HaRsHaD: guys, what was that??

Fab5 turns and see their friends standing there... girls go and hug each other.. while Manik has his eyes just for nandu...

CaBiR: then tells them all about soha...

Listening this, nandu gets so happy that manik trusted her this time and goes and hugs manik... leaving rest of them shocked...


Manik gets shocked first, then he too hugs nandu.. and slowly the hug becomes passionate and they lose their senses in each other.

Seeing them lost, cabir intentionally coughs, which brings manan back to their senses.

CaBiR: waise kya nandu, sare hugs sirf manik ke liye hamare liye kuch nahi...??

NaNdU: aww... how can u say that cabir... tumhare liye toh a big tight hug..
saying this she goes and hugs tightly, and slowly wispers in his ears...

NaNdU: thank u so much cabir, for helping me to save mani from soha...

CaBiR: (whispers) ur welcum nandu...

saying this he kisses her hair, as brotherly affection...


All gets busy talking and happing teasing each other...

On the other side, soha was seething in anger...

SoHa: this is all because of that nandini.. i wont leave her.. main usey chodungi nahi!!


Precap:

Manik gets upset seeing nandu leaving with maddy.

Nandu in trouble...


Will manik be able to save her?? Or will soha be able to harm nandini????

Stay tuned, and please give long long comments, and let me know if u think i should write a story on swaragini. I promise to not let my readers down!!

Once again, a very happy navratri guys, May Goddess Durga blesses all of yus with right health, wealth, success, and happiness.

*Signing off*

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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
No pls yaar continue with this only! Though I love that show but pls don't...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Soha is still not out... But it was nice that Manik gave heed to Nandini's talks

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