~*~Life~*~pt34 pg109 Finale - Page 4

angad will be that "customer"
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just read ur fic...
its gr8 but y did kripa lie 2 prithvi???
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ur ff rocks...i cant wait for the next part!!
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~*~Previously~*~

Kripa laughed, and made her way behind the counter with Prithvi, she smiles at a customer

K - hello, welcome to Big Al's Cafe.....can I take your order.....

~*~Part2~*~

Kripa finishes her shift and gets in her car, Prithvi comes

P - hey Kripa.....erm when are you going to show me your house

Kripa's eyes widen

P - relax i'm joking...but seriously I need a ride

K - ohhh yeah sure get in

P - thanks

Prithvi gets in, Kripa drives towards Prithvi's house, he lives in the not-so-well established area of Mumbai. His house arrives

K - ok see you Prithvi

P - hey you probably leave near by right?

K - erm well no I live further from here

P - ok then....but erm what I said before...I sort of meant it, you've seen my house millions of times, it wouldn't hurt to see yours

K - erm maybe next time hey

P - ok whenever you're ready

As Prithvi leaves, Kripa feels slightly guilty

K - I'm sorry Prithvi..... I really want to invite you over, but I'm afraid, you might not like me for who I am, if you find out i'm rich.....you might treat me like all my other friends who just used me for my money

Kripa drives off, however Angad is partying in a club with his friends

A - this is the life! damn this party is great Josh!

J - yea dude damn right it is

Hours later Angad leaves the club and heads home. He parks the car and goes inside to find his parents still awake, he looks at the time and sees its is 4 am, he frowns and walks in

A - mom dad what you doing awake

D - we could ask you the same thing! what time is this to come home

A - erm 4am

N - Angad!

A - sorry....but anyways im going to bed

D - wait we want to talk to you about something

A - what is it

N - your dads comapny has suffered a minor setback

A - how minor?

D - lets just say these parties of yours have to stop

A - ok i can manage that

N - and.....you need to get a job

A - what!!!!! no way...i can't get a job

D - its temporary Angad....now i've got an interview lined up for you at a local cafe

A - you're kidding me right?

N - Angad we have never been more serious

A - fine.....you guys have done so much for me...guess I can do this for you.....so where the interview

D - Big Al's Cafe.....heres the details

Angad takes the details and goes to his room

A - Big Al's Cafe huh? damn

Angad falls on his bed and sleeps.

oooo can't wait to read the next part

nice but short part
cant wait 4 next part...him n kripa will be workin 2gether lol 😆 thatz somethin 2 luk 4ward 4

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Wow! beautiful fan fic till now

this is one of those fanfics which have a fresh story

Your parts are slightly short but that doesn't make much difference Continue soon

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