~*~Life~*~pt34 pg109 Finale - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: rachandeep

hey guys thnx 4 the comments..i was gunna write my first part yday but my brother came home frm slough so i was buzi but i promise 2 write it 2day as soon as i get sum free time 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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A big house is shown, a room is shown where a guy is working out. We see his hands gripping the weights, as he lifts them up we see his muscles (😛 ). He stands up and we see his back, he lies on the floor to do some sit-ups, we see his bare chest revealing a 6-pac (😉). His lips are shown, then his eyes and then his whole face. He stands up and we see a tall handsome guy. He takes a shower and gets dressed and heads outside his room, as he closes the door we see "Angad's room - do not enter" written on it.
A - mom i'm going out
N - ok son
Angad goes outside and looks at the line of cars in front of him
A - hmmm which one to take today......hmm the Lexus
He smiles and makes his way to the watchman
A - the keys to the Lexus
WM - here you go sir
Angad gets in the car and drives off. He swerves through traffic, he gets a phonecall
A - dude i'm coming, yea don't worry I'm gunna take a short cut, see you soon
Angad takes the next right and races down the road. He approaches a bend, instead of slowing down, he speeds up when....
CRASH!!!!!!!!!
Thr front of Angad's Lexus crashes into the back of someones BMW. Angad walks out to see the damage
A - ****
As Angad looks at the cars, the door to the BMW opens, we see high heels, then legs, a skirt, we see a hand and then a girl's angry face, she walks towards Angad
girl - What the hell is wrong with you! Can't you see where you are driving....God has given you eyes, would be nice to use them! why the hell do you have a license!!!!!!!
Angad just stares at the girl, he rolls his eyes then gets his wallet out, he hands her 1000 rupees
A - heres some money go get your car fixed
girl - excuse me but I don't want your money, I have tons of cars like this at home
A - then why you creating such a scene for?
girl - what i want is an apology
A - that ain't gunna happen
The girl screams and kicks Angad's car hoping it would do some damage to it, but instead hurts herself. Angad laughs and puts his money away. He walks off to his car...so does the girl but in the opposite direction. She gets in the car and drives away. She stops at a cafe and storms in. a guy sees her and gets worried
guy - Kripa...what happened?
K - arghh Prithvi! this stupid idiot hit the back of my car, then has the nerve to give money to me to pay for it
P - then you should have taken the money.....i mean to get that car fixed, will take at least 4 weeks pay
Kripa bites her tongue, and smiles at Prithvi, he co worker and best friend.
K - i know Prithvi, but I didn't want to take money from that arrogant guy
P - if that's the case then you can do my shifts as well
Kripa frowned, she knew Prithvi needed the money for medical college, but Kripa, as she told Angad, had many cars like this at home, but she couldn't tell that to Prithvi otherwise he would know, her friendship was based upon a lie
K - no Prithvi its ok...I know a cheap mechanic.....and besides I can always take the bus or walk it to work
P - ok kripa as you wish, come on lets get to work otherwise we will get fired then none of us will have money
Kripa laughed, and made her way behind the counter with Prithvi, she smiles at a customer
K - hello, welcome to Big Al's Cafe.....can I take your order.....
Edited by Gaurav's Love - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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she lied to prthvi about this. well dont blame her.

good part.. continue soooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

she lied to prthvi about this. well dont blame her.

good part.. continue soooonn

thanx....well basically shes lied 2 everyone at the cafe....no1 knows she is rich ...bcause..well you will find out soon😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome part 👏 👏 👏
cont soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing start
cont soon
liar liar skirts on fire 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

amazing start
cont soon
liar liar skirts on fire 😆

😆😆😆very funny
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome story cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part i bet angad will come there
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part i bet angad will come there

thanx a lot...hmmm keep reading 😃

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