Journey of Abhilasha---A LRL FF - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys,
Unfortunately some unseen family problem has risen and that is why i couldn't update yeaterday. My family needs all my attention right now. Hope you understand and please keep my family in your minds and prayers...please
I really love you guys
Misha
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Shaad came with two cups of coffee and placed one on the table In front Of Asha.

Shaad: "Asha coffee"

Asha looked up to Shaad and nodded her head as if to say thank you. She placed the watch that was in her hand on the table and picked up the coffee. Holding the coffee in one hand she traced the top of the mug with her other hand as her mind went on wondering.

Shaad was just standing there and observing all that was happening in front of him. They had received the news that Naina's condition was better than before a couple of hours ago. They had decided to leave the hospital as visiting hours were coming to an end and there was no place for Asha and Shaad at the hospital. It was getting late so they decided to leave for KMA the next day and went to a nearby hotel.

As soon as they arrived in their room, Asha sat down on the couch and took out her watch. For hours Asha sat there staring at the watch and the handkerchief they had found at the hospital room. Shaad tried to get her attention but failed, so he decided to make some coffee to lift the energy present in the room.

He went and sat next to Asha and placed one hand on shoulder.

Asha: "Kya hua?" (What happened?)

Shaad: "Hum kab se dekh rahay hai, app issi ghadi ko dekh rahi hai. Kya has hai iss mein" (Iihave noticed for some time that you are looking at this watch. What is so special about it?)

Asha: "Khaas toh bohot hai. Yeah ek vaja ek karan jis kay vajay se mein jinda hoon. Maa kheti thi ki jab tak yeah ghadi hai tab yak papa ka saath hummaray saath hai. Bas yeahi ghadi ki karan mein ne aapney zindagi ka maksaad papa ko dhoona bana diya, warna yeah khali zindagi jeetay jeetay mein kab kay maar chuki hogi" (Iit is very special. This is the reason and the perpose I am alive. Maa used to say that as long as there is this watch papa is with us. With this watch, I made it my mission to find papa, otherwise I would have ded long time ago from living this empty life.)

Asha had gotton sad and Ahaad didn't like that, so he changed the conversation.

Shaad: "kya KMA se kissi ne call kiya?" (Did anyone called from KMA.)

Asha: "Pata nahi, meri phone mera paas nahi hai" (I don't know I have my phone.)

Shaad: "Toh aap phone kar ligiya. Woh waha parashan ho rahay hongey" (So you call them. They must be getting worried there)

Asha: "Aare haa. Mmein toh bhool hi gayi" (h yes. I forgot)

With that Asha got up and headed towards the landline to call those at KMA.

******AT KMA*****

All were at the Mess having a discussing when someone entered the mess. He pulled down his hat and touched his mustache and entered the mess. He saw that everyone was together and there was an atmosphere of love, which he hated. His biggest pet peeve was love, or he believed love was a men's biggest weakness.

The man: "KMA ki atmosphere aaj bhi waisay hi hai jaisay kuch 20 saal pehley thi. Aur iss baar bhi mein iss pyaar ko thord dunga"" (KMA's atmosphere still the same as it was about 20 years ago. And I will break this loving atmosphere this time as well)

Everyone looked up at the door to see Col. Bhargav standing there. Everyone in the Mess stood up immediately.

Vijay to Ridhi: "Aaray yeah tom and jerry yaha..."( What is this tom and jerry doing here?)

Bhargav walked up to the table there the our cadets and Priyanka were.

Bhargav: "Cadet Huda kya aapko kuch kehna hai," (Cadet Huda, do you have anything to say)

Vijay: "No sir"

Bhargav: "Aur kuch keahnea ko hona bhi nahi chaiea. Meh ray baray mein toh tumharay papa neah bata diya hoga. Toh mujhe yeah bata ne ki jarurut nnahi hai ki mujhe kya pasand hai aur kkya nahu. Right" (And you should not have anything to say. You father must have told you about me so I should not have to tell you what I like and what I do not. Right?)

Vijay: "Yes sir"

Bhargav: "Dissmiss"

Quickly and effectively the cadets scrammed out of the mess while Bhargav stood there as he pulled down his hat.

They were walking down the hallway when Priyanka's phone rang. Hearing that all the cadets stopped on their tracks. Priyanka took out her phone and picked it up. (Phone convo between Priyanka and Asha)

Priyanka: "hello"

Asha: "Hello di"

Priyanka: "Asha, kaha thi tu? Pata hai yaha par sab kitney parashan hoo rahay hai yaha? Aur maa kaisey hai? Unki tabiet toh ab theek hai na?" (Asha where were you? Do you know how worried we all were getting? And how is mother? Is she feeling better?)

Asha with a smile laugh: "Di kitney sawal karti hoo. Aacha theek hai mein sab jawab deti hoo. Mein aapna phone KMA hi chord aayi aur Shaad kay phone ka battery down ho gaya." (Di, how many question can you ask? Ok I will answer all of them. Ii let my phone at KMA and Shaad's phone ran out of charge.)

Priyanka: "Aur maa"

Asha: "Yehi toh khush khabari hai." (That is the happy news)

Priyanka: "Matlab"

Asha: "Doctors keah rahay hai ki maa ki condition pehley se better hai. Woh ab bohot jald theek hongi." (The doctors are saying that mom's condition is better then before. She will get better very soon)

Priyanka wipes her tears of joy: "Asha yeah toh tu neh bohot aache baat batiyae hai" (Asha, you have given such a good news)

Asha: "Di, abhi aur bhi good news baki hai" (Di, there are more good news)

Priyanka: Woh kya?

Asha: "Phone par nahi bata Shakti. KMA aa kar bataugee" (I can't say it over the phone. I will tell you once coming to KMA)

Priyanka: "Waisy tum aa kab aa rahay hoo?" (When will you be back?)

Asha: "Maa ki tabiat theek hai toh kaal tak aa jhaeage. Kyu koi problem hai kya?" (Science maa's condition is better we will return tomorrow. Why is there any problem?)

Priyanka: "Problem to hain" (There actually is a problem.")

Asha: "Matlab"

Priyanka: "Col. Bhargav yaha hai" (Col. Bhargav is here)

Asha: "What? Magar woh toh kuch din baad aanay walay thay" (What? But he was going to come a few days later)

Priyanka: "Magar tum hai toh pata hai na ki ussay tih surprise denay ka shook hai" (But you know he like to surprise people")

Asha: "More like Shock. Anyways see you soon"

Asha cut the call and turned around to see Shaad standing there on the doorway.

Asha: "Aarey Shaad"

Shaad: "Haan who hum yeah keah ney aaya thay ki khaana ready hai" (Yeah, I came to inform you that the food is ready)

The two went and eat their good and retired for the night.

The next morning they were sitting on the couch having their breakfast. They had just returned from the hospital after seeing Naina.

Shaad: "Asha, aaj hum bohot khush hai" (Asha, I am very happy today.)

Asha: "Aacha kyu" (Why?)

Shaad: "Hum ne jis kay bara mein itna suna tha. Hum jin ney itnay maantay hai, unsey mil kar bohot khushi ho rahi hain" (Meeting the person I have heard about and the person I respect has really made me happy)

Asha: "Khush toh mein bhi hoon, yeah jaan kar ki papa zindi hai. Pehley toh mujhe srif doubt tha, magar ab koi doubt nahi hai." (I am also very happy, because I know my father is alive.I had just doubt it before, but now there is no doubt.)

Shaad: "Waisay aap ko kya lagta hai. Rajveer sir kyu is tara chupay hongay" (Wat do you thing? Why is Rajveer sir hiding like this?)

Asha: "Kyu ki woh selfless hai. Woh jantay hai ki agar kissi ko bhi yeah pata chala ki woh zinda hai toh wo secrete organization walay jis ko bhi pata hai uss koi maar dengay. Aur papa aapney Cadets aur Cadet Naina ah' Singh ko baachnay kay liya kuch bhi kar shaktay hai. Kuch bhi" (Because he is selfless. He knows that if anyone finds out he is alive then the secrete organization people will kill all those who know. And papa can do anything to protect his Cadets and his Cadet Niana ah' Singh.)

Asha: "Chaltay hai. Wai say bhi agar KMA lootney mein dher ho gayi to Bhargav aur Nair maar dengay" (Let's go. If we reach KMA late then Nair and Bhargav will kill us)

The two set to KMA, unaware about the new chapter that would soon begin in their life. The chapter of love.

Next chapter---- ALEKH'S ENTRY, AND BHARGAV'S DRAMA.

Then------MENTOR SHIP CHAMP AND MORE

A very happy new years to all. I wish and hope that this coming year brings love, growth, prosperity, love, and happiness to all.

I am extremely sorry that I could not ud when I said I would, but like I mentioned I have some family matter going on right now, plus I made some New Year commitment and did not expect that to come in the way of IF. I need to prioritize and put what is most important meet at the top, which in this case is my family.

Ii understand you all feeling. I know what it is like when someone does not ud in a long time or leaves a book incomplete, but I want to assure you all that I will try to be as constant as possible but there are going to be situation that arise all of a sudden and I have no control over it like my family problem.

Thank you and happy new year to IF

Misha

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Posted: 9 years ago
happy new year
Superb
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsme update
loved it
Edited by newmoon18 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
happy new year
and nice part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
my new ff on RN. plz check it and lemme noe. heres the link http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4552643#p130440362
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey .. when are you gng to update .. its been a long time .. !😕😕😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys,
Sorry haven't updated in a while
I will ud by the end of the day
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey,
I will ud by the wnd of the day
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shaad and Asha reach KMA at midday. Tired and hungry they headed straight for the mess.

In the mess they saw all their friends in one table. Ridhi was the first one to notice them.

Ridhi: Aaaray tum dono kab aaya" (When did you do come?)

The two walked up to the table.

Asha: "Bas abhi" (Just now)

Vijay: "Tum hari maa kaisay hai aab?" (How is your mom now?)

Asha: "Doctor keah rahai thay ki whoh pehley se beethar hai" (Doctors were saying that she is better than before)

Prerna: "Yeah toh bohot aachi khabar hai. Ssach mein sab sun kar bohot khush hongay, especially Priyanka ma'am" (That is really good news. Really everyone will be really happy, especially Priyanka ma'am)

Asha: "Hain, waisay hain kaha di. Mein aabhi jaa kar unhai bata thi hoon" (Yeas, anyways where is di. I will go and tell her right away)

Ridhi: "Woh Brigder Chauhan nein faculty meeting bulaai hai" (Brig Chauhan has called a faculty meeting)

AT FACULTY MEETING

Brig: "Good afternoon officers"

Everyone: "Good morning sir" "Morning Brigadier"

Brig: "Hum ne sab ko yaha kuch important announcement denay kay liya buliya hai" (I have called you here to tell you all some important announcement)

Brig: "Jaysay aap sab dekh shaktay hai, Col. Bhargav hamaray beeth hai. Col. The floor is yours" (Like all of y'all can see that col. Bhargav is among us)

Everyone gave and uninterested look to Maj. Bhargav as he stood up and pulled his cap.

Bhargav: "Thank you Brigadier"

As Bhargav began to speak his music filled the background.

Bhargav: "Jaisay ki app saab ko pata hai, mein KMA ka inspection lanay aaya hua. Yaha kay cadets ka performance kuch khaas nahi hai. Mein KMA ka inspection toh lunga hi, saath hi saath mein yaha I weak aur spoiled cadets ko strong aur disciplined officer banaauga." (Like all of you know, I have come to KMA to perform an inspection. I will definitely do the inspection, but at the same time I will transfer the weak and spoiled cadets of KMA to strong and disciplined officers)

Brig: Thank you. We wish you all the best. Hum ne aap sab ko yaha ek aur news dena kay liya buliya hai. (Thank you. We wish you all the best. I have one more news for you)

Suriji: "Who kya hai ji" (What is that sir?)

Brig: "Suriji koi aaisa hai jo KMA mein wapas aa raha hai" (Suriji, someone is coming back to KMA)

We see someone entering KMA. He was with a straight posture that shows pride. He stops at the gate of KMA and looks up at it. We are able to see his dark eyes that are filled with pain, happiness, and many more emotions.

Dr. Shalini: "Sir Kyon hai woh?" (Sir who is he?)

The person walks up to the flame of honor. Very proudly he salutes the flame and turns around towards the Hall of Fame. He walks up to the wall and stands near an empty space.

The person: "Aapun wapas aa gaya Rajveer sir" (I have come back Rajveer sir)

Brig: "Dr. Shalini, Lt. Priyanka kay shiva yaha beethay sab unko jaantay hai" (Dr. Shalini, Except Lt. Priyaka everyone sitting here knows him.

Just then the man knows on the closed door.

Brig: "and here he comes. COME IN"

The door opens and in walks in Lt. Col. Alekh Sharma. On his chest shines the medals won by him. He walks in and salutes Brig.

Alekh: Lt. Col. Alekh Sharma reporting sir"

Brig: "Welcome back officer"

Alekh: "Thank you. Yeah hai aapun---mera matlab mera transfer letter" (Thank you. This is my transfer letter)

Alekh hands the letter to Abhimanyu. After talking the letter Abhimanyu turns to rest of the faculty.

Brig: "Jee haa. Yeah hai Lt. Col. Alekh Sharma. KMA ki aab tak kay best field cadet pass out. Inhai koi introduction ki jarurat nahi hai. In kay aaj tak ki har successful mission or spot less track record in kay peeachan hai. It is KMA'S honor ki indian army ki best officer hamaray saath hai. Once again welcome back." (Yes. This is Lt. Col. Alekh Sharma. The best field cadet pass out 'till date. He does not need an introduction. His success at every mission and spotless track record is his introduction. It is KMA's honor that Indian army's best officer is here today. Once again welcome back. )

With that Abhimanyu left and Bhargav and Priyanka followed him after.

Huda: "Aabay quidi, kaisay hai" (oh, quidi, how are you?)

Alekh: "Huda izzat se baat kar. Aapun tera senior hoon Samja na." (Huda, talk with respect. I am your senior.)

Huda: "Huda ki itna buray din nahi aaya ki who tuj se izzat se baat karay. Samjha na." (Such bad days haven't come when huda has to talk to people like you with respect. Understood)

Alekh: "Natuki Saala" (Drama Queen)

With that the two best friends hug

Suriji: "Alekh Putar" (Alekh)

The two selerate from the hug and Huda pats Alekh's back. Alekh walks up to Suriji and touches his feet. Suriji with a smile and tearey eyes loving placed his hands on Alekh's head.

Alekh: Kaisay hai Suriji"

Suriji: Mein toh theek hi hoon. Tu kaisa hai?" (I am fine. How are you?)

Alekh: "Aapun toh ek dum mast hain" (I am great)

Shalin: "Yudi ne nahi batiya ki tum aa raho hoo" (Yudi did not say anything about you coming)

Alkeh: "Mein ne usay kaha tha aap sab ko na bata ne Kay liya. Woh kya keathay hai, hain surprise delay ka liya" (I had told him not to tell all of you. I want to give you all what do you all that, a suprise)

He then walked up to Raghu.

Alekh: "Kaisay hoo Raghu beta" (How are you Raghu?)

Raghu: "Hum theek hai. Neelu Chachi kaise hai" (I am fine. How is Neelu Chachi)

Alekh: "Woh theek hai. Suna hai ki Akriti yaha hai" (She is fine. I heard that Akriti is here)

Raghu: "Maa toh aaj Subha hi chali gayi" (Maa let this morning)

Suriji: "Putar tu thank gays hoga. Thori deer aaram kar" (Son, you must be tired rest for a few)

With that everyone headed towards their respected rooms and offices

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Suriji and Lolita entered the mess with a big smile on their faces. Asha saw them and immediately got up from the chair.

Ridhi: "Asha kya hua" (Asha, what happened?)

Asha: "Suriji aur Lolita ma'am lout gaya matlab ki meeting khasak ho gayi. Mein Abhi JWA kar di se mil kar aarti hoon" (Suriji and Lolita ma'am returned meaning the meeting is over I will go and see Di"

Asha zoomed out of the Mess while her friends looked at her child like excitement. Seeing her running out of the mess, Suriji and Lolita walked up to the table to find out what happened

Suriji: "ki Hoya Putar. Yeah Cadet Singh kyun aaisay bhaagti hua Gaye" (what happened kids? Why did Cadet Singh run out like that)

Prerna: "Sir woh uss ki Maa theek ho gayi, toh woh yehi baat bataney Kay liya Priyanka ma'am kay paas gayi hai" Sir, her mom got better, so she has gone to tell Priyanka ma'am the same)

Suriji: "aarray yeah khush Khabari mein sab ko meri Taraf se special lassi" (Wow, for this good news a lassi to everyone from behalf of me)

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Without looking at where she was going, Asha bumped into someone. She waited to hear the sound of her head touching the ground with her eyes closed, but instead she felt a hand on her shoulder and then she heard a voice

Person: "Ek shoulder ki do aakh aagay aur do aakh peechay honey chaihia aur ek sipahi ho ko khabi bhi kissi se bhi takrana ki izzajat nahi hai" (A shoulder should have two eyes in the front and two in the back and a shoulder never has permission to bump into anyone)

Asha opened her eyes and stood up straight she looked at the person who had saved her from the fall, but when she saw the face of the man, all the blood from her face was drained, because standing in front of her was non other then her Alekh mamu.

Alekh: "Theek ho?" (Ok?)

Recovering herself, Asha answered.

Asha: "Yes sir. Thank you"

Alekh: "Welcome Cadet..."

Asha: "Asha, I mean Cadet Abhilasha Singh"

Alekh looked thoughtful for a moment and spoke

Alekh: "Abhilasha, Aapun tujse, matlab kya hum pehlay milay hai" (Abhilasha, I have, meaning have we met before)

Abhilasha: "Kya pata. Yeah sansar bohot bada hai. Khabi kissi Konya mein takaray Gayay hongay, Kaisay abhi. Sir mujhe thoda jaldi hai" (Who knows. This is a big world. We could have bumped into each other, like now. Sir I am in a little hurry)

Abhilasha once again runs away and Alekh is left back, shocked and surprised.

Asha knocks on Priyanka's office door but does not wait for a response to open the door.

Hearing someone stepping into her office, Priyanka looked up from her file. Seeing Asha there a smile covers her face.

Pri: "Aaray Asha, aa beath na" (Oh, Asha, come sit)

Asha sits on the chair opposite pri and drinks the water on the table.

Pri: "Maa?"

Asha: "Pehley se beehar hai" (Better then before)

Pri: "Tu mujhse kuch chula rahi hain" (you are hiding something)

Asha: "Aap ko Kaisay pata?" (How do you know)

Pri: "Terat akhay pard leti hoon. Chal aab bata kya baat hai" (I can read your eyes. Now tell me what it is?)

Asha with tearey : "Di, papa is alive"

Pri: "Kya matlab" (meaning?)

Asha goes on to explain all that happened

Pri: "Yeah toh sach mein bohot aache news hai" (This really is a good news)

Asha was about to say something else when an orderly entered

Orderly: "Cadet Singh, aap ko Lt. col. Sharma ne buliya hai " (Cadet Singh, Lt. Col. Sharma has called you)

Asha nods and the Orderly leaves

Pri: "Matlab tu un say mili" (Meaning you met him)

Asha: "Ab phir se mil kar aati hoo" (I will go see him again)

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Asha knows on Alekh's door and opens it

Alekh: "hello again Cadet"

Asha: "Sir aap ne mujhe khi buliya" (sir why have you called me?)

Alkeh: "Mujhe tum hari aasliat pata chal gayi hai" (I know your truth)

Asha: "Excuse me?"

Alekh: "Daar gayi. Matlab mera shak shai hai" (You got scared meaning my suspecting was right)

Asha: "kaisa shak" (What suspicion)

Alekh: "Yeahi ki tum kuch aaisa chupa rahi hoo, jo pura KMA ko jaana ka aadikar hai" (That you are hiding a truth that the entire KMA has the right to know)

Asha smiles and turned around to face the kitchen on the far end of the room.

Asha: "Maa kheti thi ki aap kisi ko nahi bhultay, Magar mujhe nahi pechana" (Maa, used to say that you never forgot anyone, but you are not able to reconize me)

Alekh: "Naina kaisi hai Abhilasha?" (How is Naina Abhilasha)

Asha turned around shocked

Asha: " You...?"

Alekh: "Rajveer sir aur Naina ki beth Abhilasha Singh Shekhawat ko aapun na peechanay, yeah ho shakta hai?" (It is possible that I will not reconize rajveer sir and Naina's daughter)

Asha and Alekh smiled at each other, but at that moment they both did not notice the half open door nor did the notice the Col. Bhargav outside those door with a evil smile

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Hey guys,

I just have one this to say. I want to apologize for the last chapter I reread it and realized that I sounded pretty rude in my comment. That is not how I ment it at all. I support each and every one of you and am grateful for your support. I was going through some stuff, and I still am, and I was very irritated at all that was happening around me. Once again I am sorry for what I sounded like. That is not how it was suppose to sound at all.
I type this on my ipad so please forgive the errors.

ALSO PLEASE KEEP MY FAMILY IN YOUR PRAYERS. We really need it

Hope you enjoyed the chapter

More in 3 days

Love

Misha

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