Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: meenuraj97
great part
hahaha ...
naina raj ne kya pagal banaya un logo ko
wow shadi ho rahi h dono ki
par ye kya war kaha se aa gayi bech me
kitne ache sere rasme pure hue h
without any problem
bechare raj ke tote udd gaye naina ko dulhan ke roop me dekh kr
naina ke haath me rajveer ka naam how romantic

raj ne mehndi wale din naina ko khud khilaya khana apne haath se wow...

o.m.g
ye kya twist h shadi hote he raj chala gaya war pe
ab kya hoga aagey
naina raj ko or raj naina ko bohat miss kr rahe h
2 month ho gay
raj ke koi khabar nhi h
naina ne raj ke dairy padhi gud ab use pta chala ki raj kitna pyar karta h usse
jaldi se wapas le aao naina ke pas raj ko

looking forward to read next part
thanks for pm

thankyou so muchh naina love ur comments...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: rinku95
Amazing
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

thanks again naina...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
part 24

at kargil...

kargil ki war apne end par hai...raj naveen aalekh ali aur huda abhi safe the...par abhi bhi inhe apna flag lehrana baki tha...bahut se indian army ke officer mare gaye hai...ya kaha jaye ki saheed ho gaye hai...humare sare heros bhi jakhmi hai...par abhi bhi safe hai...bas ek aur fatah aur inka kargil war khatam...sabhi loge chain ki saas le sakte hai...bas kal ka din aur...sabhi loge apne tent par baithe hai...aur batein kar rahe hai...ki tabhi sabhi ke gharo se letter aate hai...

naveen:- oye raj...yeh dekh letters...waise teri ek bhi baar bat hui ghar me...naina se yaa...

raj:- no yar...kahan...2 mahine ho gaye koi baat nahi hui...but aalekh tune to bat kar li thi na...

aalekh:- ha us thakele phone sirf 1 minute bat hui neelu se...keh rahi thi sab theek hai...

naveen:- neelu mumbai me hai??

aalekh:- ha...ma papa ke sath hai...meri koi chitthi ayi...

naveen:- wait wahi to dudh raha hu...yar humara desh advance ho chuka hai...par kargil ke maamle me hum sab wahi 20ve sadi me hai...no phones allowed...yeh le raj tera...huda tera...yeh ali ka,...ye mera aur yeh raha tera aalekh...oh sukhvindar paji...yeh lo baki letters sab me baat do...

raj naveen se letter leta hai aur kone me jake padhne lagta hai...

veer...

kaise ho...2 mahine ho gaye hai...bahut yaad aati hai tumhari..mom dad ayaan aur shanta tai...sab tumhare bare me puchhte rehte hai...aur kuchh nahi kehna mujhe bas jaldi aa jao...miss u alot...bhaiya aalekh,huda,ali...sab theek hai na...plzzz come back soon sabhi ke sath...humare desh jhanda lehra kar...

love u...
tumhari naina...

raj ki aankhon se aanshun girta hai...kyuki naina ke khat me aanshun ke nishaan the...raj samajh gaya naina ro rahi thi...raj aanshun pochhta hai...ki naveen daud kar uske pass aata hai...

naveen:-hey raajjj... kya hua...tu aise kyun...sab theek to hai...

raj;- ha ha..nothing...tu bata kya likha tha khat me...itana khush kyun lag raha hai...

naveen:- raj raj raj...i m so happy today yar...(he hugs raj)

aalekh:- abe bolega hua kya hai...

naveen:- hua nahi hone wala hai...mujhe bachha hone wala hai...

aalekh & raj:- kyaaa...

naveen:- are nahi nahi...mujhe matalab shalu ko yar...wo she is 10 weeks prergnant...main papa banne wala hun...

raj:- what...oh god naveen...i m very happy for u...(hugs him)conrats man...

aalekh:- yes..mubarak ho(he also huga...)

raj:- par yar alekh...teri taraf se yehi khuskhabri kab milegi...

aalekh:- matalab...

raj:- ab dekh tum dono ki shadi ek hi din hui but yeh sala bazi mar gaya...aur tu...

aalekh:- ho jayega...pehle neelu to badi ho jaye...

naveen(naveen smiles then in serious tone):- hey raj ab dar lag raha hai yar...mujhe wapas jana hai...kam se kam apne bachhe ke liye...

aalekh:- oye kya bakwaas kar raha hai...hum sab wapas jayeinge...samjha...hum me se kisi ko kuchh nahi hoga...

ali:- aap bilkul sahi keh rahe hai aalekh bhai...hey naveen bhai mubarak ho...(hugs him)

huda:- oye...congrats naveen(he also hugs him)aur waise bhi hum sab to godhi chad gaye hai...par apna ali aur apni punjaban ki shadi abhi baki hai...kyun ali...

ali:- haan aur humein pura yakeen hai ki hum sahi salamat apne ghar lauteige...aur apni jindagi bhi jiyeinge...

raj:- bikul sahi kaha...aur bas 1 aur din...jahan hum pichhle 63 dino se yeh sab jhel rahe hai...wahan ek aur din sahi...

all agreed...aur phir apne kamo me lag jate hai...

last day of war...

sabhi taraf sirf aur sirf goliyon ki awaaz aa rahi thi...ki achanak ek goli aai aur wo raj ko chhu kar chali gayi...

raj:- ahhh...

aalekh:- raj...theek to hai...(raj nods in yes...)

raj:- bas chhu kar nikal gayi...naveen left...

naveen starts shooting on left...isi tarah goli bari ka sil sila chalata raha...par finally vijay indian aarmy ki hui...raj naveen aur aalekh teeno mil kar gaye aur akhiri point pe bhi india ka tiranga laga diya...

aaj sabhi k dilon me khushi thi toh aankhon me nami...khushi is baat ki unhone bharat desh ka gaurav bacha liya aur dukh is baat ka...ki is dehshat ki aag me phir na jane kitane sipahi mare gaye...na jane kitane bachhe anath aur aurte widhwa hui...ha yeh sahadat ki jung thi...jahan sabhi sipahion ne apni jaan desh k liye di...par hum loge yeh bhul jate hai ki inn sipahiyon ka bhi pariwaar jitana dukh humare kisi apne ka humse door chale jane par hota hai...utana hi dukh unke pariwaar ko bhi hota hoga...hum sab to is waqt chain se apne gharo me baithe hai...wo is liye ki inhi ki tarah na jaane kitane4 lakhon sipahi...desh ke jawan border par tainaat hai...wo se nahi sote taki hum chain se so sake...wo apni kurabaani de dete hai...taki humare bachhe surakshit ho...wo saalon apne pariwaar se nahi milte taki hum sab apne pariwaar ke sath chain se reh sake...we we dhoop, barshaat, thand har mausham me khade rehte hai...un pillar ki tarah jo humare ghar ki mazbuti ko banaye rakhti hai...theek usi tarah yeh jawaan humare aarmy...humaare desh ke liye pillar hai...jiske hote hue koi bhi humare desh ko nuksaan nahi pahucha sakta...isliye...bas ek baar unke baare me bnhi soch ke dekh lijiye...kyuki wo hai to hum hai...nahin to humara namo o nishaan tak nahi hota...bas apni dua me uthe hue hanthon me aur apni zubaan se liye gaye lafzo me unhe bhi shaamil kar lijiye...yakeen maaniye bahut sukoon milega...

now its time for all of them to come back from kargil and back to their beloved...sabhi ne extra 4 din reh kar sari proceedings ki sabhi saheedo ko shahadat di phir laute apne ghar...kisi ne bhi apne gharo me kuchh bhi nahi bataya ki we kab aa rahe hai...sabhi ghar me surprise dena chahte hai...huda hariyaana ko nikal gay to ali kaan pur ko...aur aalekh seedha mumbai...aur raj naveen pahunche delhi...raj ne bell ring ki...rat ka samay ho raha tha...sabhi dinner kar rahe the...naina ko na jane kya hua...wo daud kar gayi...aur usne darwaza khola...naina ki aankh se aanshun beh rahe the...sabhi bahuit tensed kyuki lagatar tv pe aa rahi news ki indian aarmy ke sakdo jawan saheed ho chuke hai...isse sabhi bahut pareshan the...par ab finaaly sab ke chehre pe mushkaan thi...raj ne naina ko 2 mahine baad dekha...aur dekhta hi reh gyaa...kyuki aaj wo apni patni ko dekh raha tha...naina ne light pink coloure ka salwaar kameez pehna tha...uske baal khule the...hanthon me chudiyaan...mathe pe bindi, pairo me payal, gale me magal sutra aur mangh me sindoor...aaj naina...raj ka pyar klam uski patni aur shekhawat khandaan ki bahu jyada lag rahi thi...veena ji ki awaaz se raj hose me aaya...

veena:- raj, naveen...tum dono...(veena ji jakar dono ko gale lagati hai...) main bata sakti ki main kitani khush hun...mere bachhe sahi salaamat...aur huda ali, aur aalekh wo sab...

naveen:- aunty pehle ander to aane do...aur ha sab bilkul theek hai...

vikash:- raj yeh tere hanth ko kya hua...patti kyun bandhi hai...??rajj...

raj:- ha dad...wo kuchh nahi wo bas goli lagi thi...lekin ab thik hai...

veena:- kya goli lagi thi...tum dr ke chalo...

raj:- nahi maa ab to 5 din ho gaye hai...ab to theek hai...drs ne checkup kar liya hai..kal to yeh bandage bhi nikal jayegi...

naveen:-ha aunty..naina koi ghabrane wali baat nahi hai...aalekh ko bhi lagi thi...suru me wo bhi ab theek hai...naina..bahut bhook lagi hai...

naina:- ji bhaiya main abhi khana lagati hun...

naveen;- aunty wo main kal morning me hi naini taal ja raha hun...aur naina maine jane se pehle tujhe ek envolup diya tha wo bhi lana...

naina:-ji bhaiya...tai aap thodi rotiyaan aur sek dijiye...

santa tai...::- haa abhi laayi...( naina sab ko khana serve karti hai...aur phir apne room se ek envolup lakar naveen ko deti hai...)

naveen(khate hue):- yeh le raj...actually..yeh tere aur naina ke switzer land ke open tickets hai...maine aur aalekh ne sab intezaam kara diya hai...actually humne socha tha...teri sadi ke next day tum dono ko hi rawana kar deinge...par...lekin ab de raha hu...pure 15 din aram se ghumo phiro...

raj:- thanks naveen...aur aalekh ko bhi thanks bol dena...

naveen:- open hai kabhi bhi chale jana...par meri mano to 2 ya 3 din din ke ander chaqle jao..bcz pata nahi...next orders kab aa jaye...

raj:- ya sure...par tu kal hi kyun ja raha hai...

naina:- haa bhaiya kuchh din ruk jao na...

naveen:- nahi naina...tu to janti hi hogi ki shalu prergnant hai...and i want to be with her...

naina:- ok bhaiya to main nahi rokungi...aap ko kitane baje nikalana hai...

naveen:- 9 baje...

naina:- papa ji kuchh du aapko...

vikash:- nahi beta mera to ho gaya...

raj:- hey ayaan kaha hai...

shanta tai:- wo kal uske exams hai na...isliye jaldi kha kar so gaya hai...

naveen:-naina mera room...

naina:- ha aaiye...(naina naveen ko lekar chali jati hai...)

raj thinks:- yeh naina ko kya ho gaya hai...ek bhi baar usne mujhse baat tak nahi ki...(to veena) achha mom dad...gn...

veena & vikash:- gn beta...(raj left from there)

raj apne room me jata hai to dekhta hai ki uska room aaj bhi bikul waisa hai jaise wo 2 mahine pehle chhod kar gaya tha...bas ab jaha par raj ki wall size pic thi wahan par raj aur naina ki wedding ki bahut hi khubsurat pic thi...aur use dekh kar smile karta hai...naina dhoodh lekar aati hai aur table me rakh kar wash room ki ore jane lagti hai ki...raj holds her hand...naina wahi khadi rah jati hai...

raj:- kya baat hai...mujhse koi galti ho gayi hai...jo mujhse baat tak nahi kar rahi ho...(naina ki aankh se anshun girne lagte hai...wo turn hoti hai aur bahut hi force ke sath raj k gale lag jati hai...aur ro rahi hai...)hey naina kya hua...tum naina...naina dekho meri taraf...naina...(naina looks at him...raj wipes her tears...)kyun naina...

naina:- i m sorryveer...i m really sorry...main bahut dar gayi thi..bas...bahut miss kiya tumhe...itani khsuh thi ki kuchh bol hi nahi paa rahi thi...sadi ke baad turant tum chale gaye itane din baad tumhe dekh..kitani sehat gir gyai hai tumhari...dard ho raha hai...(raj has smile on his lips and nods in no...)pehli baar tumhe lekar itna laga...badi mushkilo se paya tha tumhe khona nahi chahti thi...

raj:- naina tum mujhe kabhi nahi kho sakti...

naina(muh bana ke):-achha main to is karan aap se baat nahi kar pa rahi thi...par aap...aap mujhse kyun baat nahi kar rahe the mister...

raj:- oye yeh aap kon hai...

naina:- veer...

raj:- ok...actually na...aaj pehli baar main apne samne apni patni ko dekh raha tha isliye kuchh bol hi nahi paya...

naina:- kya...

raj:- ha naina...look at ur self...puri badal gayi ho tum...yeh chudi.yeh bindi, yeh sindoor,,u r looking like mrs rajveer singh shekhawat...(naina blushed..raj naina ke kaan ke pass jata hai...)hey naina...aur jab aise blush karti ho...to u r just look like my newly weded wife...and ...(naina closed her eyes)

naina:- aur...

raj:- aur mera dil karta hai ki main tumhe...(then he placed his lips on hers...and it was too passionate...full og thrust and love...after some time both parted aways...and to hide her embarashment raj hugs her...)

naina:- veer...main abhi aayi...(raj left naina aur naina wash room me chali jati hai...aur change karke aati hai to dekhti hai ki raj window k pass khada hai...naina uske pass jati hai...)

raj:- naina...yeh pic bahut achhi hai...i love it...(naina smiles)achha naina...wo naveen ne humein tickets di hai...to kab chalna chahogi...

naina:- jab tum kaho but...wo maine na delhi HO joine kar liya tha...toh...mujhe leave ke liye apply karna hoga...

raj:- ok...bata dena...phir hum chaleinge...humare honey moon par...naina dekho na kitana azeeb hai na humare sath sadi ke almost dhaai mahine baad hum honeyy moon par jayeinge...

naina:- but duty comes first...

raj:- yup...(And raj picks her up in his arm and went to bed and both sleeps in eachother arma...sadi ke baad yeh pehli rat hogi jab dono chain se soye honge...

next morning...

next day raj to chain ki neend sota raha 12 baje tak jab utha to naina uske bagal me nahi thi...wo neeche gaya...to veena ji ne use bataya ki naina HO gayi hai...aur naveen bhi subah nikal gaya hai...wo so raha tha isliye kisi ne use nahi uthaya...raj ko naveen par guss bhi aya ki wo bina usse mile chala gaya..but fir raj bhi apne faltu ke kamo me busy ho gaya actually he is prerparing somthing for naina...par sabse chhup chhup kar...jab naina aayi to sham ke 6 baj gayi thi naina ready hokar..neeeche aayi to dekha...ki raj kahi se aa raha tha..

naina:- veer kahan gaye the...??

raj:- a nothing naina...bus yunhi kuchh frnds ke sath tha...u know...

naina:- waise raj...wo maine leave ke liye baat kar li hai...parso hum ja sakte hai...par kal mujhe jana hoga...ek report submit karni hai...

raj:- oh reallly wow...great...to main parso jane ka aur baki intezaam karta hun...oh haan wo aalekh aur neelu se baat kar lena...unka phone aaya tha...

naina:- ok...waise kya khana pasand karoge...i will cook for u...

raj:- jo tum khila do...(naina smiles aur kitchen me chali jati hai...)

its about 9 in the night...sabhi dinner kar rahe the...

ayaan:- wow bhabhi yeh gajar ka halwa toh bahut achha bana hai...

naina:-thanks ayaan...

raj:-yes naina the food is amazing...

veena:- wakai naina tum khana bahut achha banati ho...maine expect nahi kiya tha pehle ki tumhe khana banate aata hoga...actually tum ek aarmy hokar bhi...ghar ke sare kaam kar leti ho...

shanta tai:- are jaise mera raj perfect hai...waise hi meri naina bhi...

vikash:-ji nahi humari beti naina sabse achhi hai...

ayaan:- toh aap loge aisa karo na meri bhi sadi kara do...phir naina bhabhi ke competition kara lena...

naina:- kya...

raj(hits on ayaan's head):-oye dedh fut pehle bada toh ja...

ayaan:- dekho bhaiya galat mat bolo main dedh fut nahi hu...main ab pure 4 fits ka ho gaya hun...aur dekhna jaldi hi 5''9 ka bhi ho jaunga...aapke barabar...

raj:- ha ha pata hai...ab khana kha...

ayaan;- bhabhi aapne mujhse ek promise kiya tha...aaj to mera last exam tha...ab promise pura karo...

raj:- kaisa promise...

naina:- ha...wo veer actually maine ayaan ko kaha tha ki main use film dikhane leke jaungi...aap kal free ho...

raj;- haa,,, waise bhi humien to parso jana hai na...

naina:- theek hai ayaan to kal aapke bhaiya aur main chaleinge...tai aap chaloge??

shanta tai:- nahin nahin...mujhe nahi dekhni...tum loge jao...wo kal rat 9 abje to mujhe mere hero ko dekhna hai...

raj:- kya tai abhi tak aapke sir se uska bhoot nahi utara...pichle 11 ya 12 saal se aap bas usi ke peeche pade ho aisa kya hai usme...

naina:- kiski baat kar rahe ho aap loge...

shanta:- tu chup kar...khabar daar jo mere rajeev ke baare me kuchh bola to...wo to mera hero no .1 hai...rajeev khandelwal...aur kal rat 9 baje reporters aayega na sony pe...main kuchh bhi miss kar sakti hun reporters nahi...

naina:- waise tai ek baat batau...bachapan me na mujhe bhi rajeev par crush tha...jab main 11 saal ki thi tab...jab uska pehle show aaya tha na...kahin toh hoga,...tab se...

raj:- kya...stop it...yeh rajeev puran phir suru ho gaya...tai kam thi kya jo tum bhi...

shanta ji:- tu chup kar...par ha naina agar rajeev ki koi film jab dekhne jana ho na tab jarur batana...(raj chhid raha hai...aur naina chhidane ke liye...)

naina:- waise tai aapko nahi lagta ki veer...rajeev ke look alike jaise hai...

raj:- oh plzz main ek aarmy officer hun...a real hero...aur tumhara rajeev ek actor hai...just a actor...ha humari prersonality milti hai but...

naina:- but he also palyed a role of a aarmy officer in a show...few years back...aur aap dono ke naam bhi kitane milte hai...initials bhi R hi hai...

raj:- to main kya karu? nachu,...

veena:- raj tu itana chid kyun raha hai...wo sirf baat kar rahi hai...

raj;- kuchh nahi...mera ho gaya..main ja raha hun...gn...(raj left from their..and naina is smiling...bcz she knows raj is jealous with Rajeev...)

thodi der baad jab naina apne room me jati hai to dekhti hai ki room me andhera hai...par kuchh side candles jal rahi thi...aur window se chand ki chandni aa rahi thi...jisse atmosphere bahut hi romatic sa lag raha tha...aur tabhi uski nazar center table par padi jaha ek heart sape..chocolate cake rakha tha...naina smiles and understands every thing...tabhi raj aata hai aur peeche se use hug karta hai...

naina:- bahut khubsurat hai...

raj;- naina i want to start a new life with u from to night as a real husband and wife...may i...(naina nods in yes...)

naina:- main change kark aaun...(raj nods in yes...naina left to wash room aur change kark aati hai...)

both raj and naina stands at center...both cuts the cake...and feed a bit to eachother...then raj open a wine bottle...both tosted and have a ship...then raj...offers his hand to naina...naina smiles accepts...now both are dancing.very close with the rythem of their heart...

tumko chaha tha...tumko chaheinge...
wade jo kiye wo nibhayeingee...
tumko chaha tha...tumko chaheinge...
wade jo kiye wo nibhayeingee...
aye sanam..is janam ka ikraar hai..
humko tumsey pyaar hai...
humko tumsey pyaar hai...

(naina and raj dancing very close they can even feel eachother breaths...but they both are doesnt want to lose this moment...at each other arms...)

tumko chaha tha...tumko chaheinge...
wade jo kiye wo nibhayeingee...

(after the separation of more than two long months...which were like 2 era of them...this was their first dance...which is very special to them,,,,,)

ohhh wada hai mera...ab dil yeh tera...
kabhi zindagi me na...maayush hogaa...

(naina ki aankh se aanshun ki bund girti hai...aur raj apnehonthon se use wipe off karta hai..aur use kabhi na rone ka ishara karta hai...)

ohhh meri wafayein tere liye hai...
meri jaan tujhko yeh mehshoos hoga...
bas tere hi liye...mera dil bekaraar hai...
humko tumsey pyaar hai...
humko tumsey pyaar hai...
(naina hugs him tight...and both were standning in that position for a long time...)
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tumko chaha tha...tumko chaheinge...
wade jo kiye wo nibhayeingee...
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meri tammanna...khushi bann gayi hai...
koi aa gaya hai..meri zindagi mein...

muhabbat ne meri...bulaya hai mujhko...
uda ja raha hun..main bekhudi mein..
aa bhi ja...aa bhi ja...mujhe , tera intezaar hai...

(raj jakar cupborad kholta hai...aur ek bahut hi khubsurat necklesa nikal kar lata hai...aur naina ko mirror ke samne khada kark use pehna deta hai...aur peeche khada hokar apni bahein faila deta hai..naina turat jakar use hag kar leti hai)

humko tumsey pyaar hai...
humko tumsey pyaar hai...

tumko chaha tha...tumko chaheinge...
wade jo kiye wo nibhayeingee...
(raj fiestly kissed her on her fore head, then to her both the eyes..which make her close them, then to her her both the cheeks...which make naina blush and blush more...then finally he captured her lips to his own...and they both have a passionate kiss...after some time...both seperates to breath...)

aye sanam..is janam ka ikraar hai..
humko tumsey pyaar hai...
humko tumsey pyaar hai...
(raj picks her up in his arm...and naina hugs him and puts her head on his chest...he puts her on bed...and starts kissing her...when a tear of happiness roled down to her chhek...)

humko tumsey pyaar hai...
humko tumsey pyaar hai...
(raj wipes it...)

raj:- naina i wont hurt u bcz i love u...

(naina smiles and her hand goes to open his shirt's buttons...and raj hands goes to open the strings of her nighty...)

humko tumsey pyaar hai...
humko tumsey pyaar hai...

(after some time...scene got blured)
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humko tumsey pyaar hai...
humko tumsey pyaar hai...

movie:- humko tumse pyaar hai...

next morning...

its a beautiful morning...naina apni aankh kholti hai...aur apne aap ko pura mehsos karti hai...she feel complteness in her self...then wo dekhti hai ki wo raj ki bahon me hai...aur raj k chehre me ek pyari si smile hai...

naina in her mind:- i promise u veer...main tumhare chehre se yeh mushkaan kabhi jane nahi dungi...aaj mujhe yeh ehsaas ho raha hai..ki tum mere liye kya ban gaye...tumhare ek pal ke sath k liye...main puri zindagi intezaar kar sakti thi...thankyou veer meri zindagi me aane ke liye mujhe poora karne ke liye...

fir naina...raj ko sweet sa peck deti hai...aur wash room me chali jati hai..jab naina ready hokar aati hai to dekhti hai ki raj abhi bhi so raha hai...wo apni uniform ko sahi karti hai...aur neeche ja kar raj ke liye chai lekar aati hai...

naina:- veer...utho...veerr...get up...

raj:- kya naina sone do na...

naina:- veer tum itani der tak kaise so sakte ho...aarmy officers subah 5 baje uth jate hai...aur tum ho ki...achha ab utho mujhe base camp jana hai...

raj(geeting up):-kya naina kitana lecture deti ho...typical biwi ki tarah...

naina:- ab biwi hun...to wahi karungi na...ab utho yeh chai pakdo...shanta tai tumhara nasta bana rahi hai...mujhe late ho raha hun main ja rahi hun...\

raj:- jao...yar tum jao...waise bhi meri kismat me wo sab kahan...

naina:- kya...? kya bol rahe ho...

raj:- ab dekho...officialy kal humari wedding night thi...aur normally jab kisi wedding night hoti hai...to subah subah patni sadi me sarmati hui...lehrati hui pati ke saamne aati hai...aur use pyar se chai ke uthati hai...aur pati use kiss karta hai...par tum aa gayi...uniform pehen ke order dene...

naina:- shut up...tum bhool rahe ho ki tumne ek aarmy officer se shadi ki hai...agar aisa hi tha to karna tha...kisis gaao ki gori se shadi...jo tumhare saamne lehrati balkhati hnnn...

raj:- wo to main kar leta par kya karu...kambakht yeh dil hi tha jo tum jaisi nakchadi par aa gay...(and gets and and slowly kissed her on cheeks)

naina:- veerrr...main tumhe...

raj:-are naina...tum to naraz ho rahi ho...achha tumhe late ho raha hai na tum jaao...

naina;- are haan...(naina jane lagti hai par darwaaje pe pahunch kar...)waise veer...maine morning me tumhe kiss diya tha...itani bhi buri biwi nahi hu...aur chai bhi lai hun...byee...(And naina left with smile)

raj:- hieee...tum buri nahi...tum to mere liye is duniyaan ki best biwi ho naina...oh god...she is driving me crazy man...(And raj left to wash room)

its night time...
raj aur naina dono hi packing kar chuke hai tabhi ayaan aata hai...

ayaan:- bhaiya bhabhi chalo na aur kitana der lagaoge...mujhe starting miss nahi karni...(raj bites his lips)kya hua...

naina:- ha kya hua veer..humein ayaan ko lekar movie jana hai na...

raj;- haa...but wo kya hai ki main na...ticket book karna bhool gaya...

ayaan:-bhaiyaaa...(jakar bed par khada ho jata hai aur raj ka color pakad leta hai)mujhe aaj movie dekhni hai toh dekhni hai...wo bhi multiplexe...aur ha agar aap dono mujhe lekar nahi gaye...to ma kasam aap dono ka honey moon cancell karwaa dunga...(raj thoda sa dar jata hai...aur naina hasne lagti hai)...

raj;- tum kya has rahi ho haan...aur beta hum chalenge na...chalo naina...

thodi der baad raj aur ayaan neeche wait kar rahe hote hain...naina neeche aati hai...usne orange colour ka suit pehna hua hai...aur koi make up nahin kiya hua...raj naina ko dekhta hi reh jaata hai..kyunki vo itni khoobsurat aur masoom lag rahi hoti hai ki raj chah kar bhi uspar se nazrein nahin hatta paa raha tha...tabhi naina unke paas aati hai...

naina-chalein?

raj[coming back from his thoughts]-ahh haan chalo...

ayaan[very excited]-haan haan chalo chalo...

tabhi veena ji aati hai...

veena-aur haan..raj ab jaldi aane ke baare mein sochna bhi mat...yahan koi tera intzaar nahin kar raha hai...ayaan aur naina ko ghoomaane bhi lekar jaana..samjhna na????

raj[smiling]-ji mom...

ayaan-yeee...bhut mazaa aayega..bhaiya mujhe bat chahiye...

raj-bat????par abhi kuch din pehle hi to liya tha...

ayaan-vo to saath waale khanna uncle ne rakh liya...

raj[confused]-kyun?????

ayaan-vo maine ball se unke ghar ki windows ke glass tod diye na iss liye...

raj[shocked]-kyaaa?????????

ayaan-haan vo kya hua na...vo shelly ko bahar khelne ke liye aane nahin dete..

raj-shelly??kaun shelly...

ayaan-vo khanna uncle ki beti hai..mere school mein padti hai...bhut beautiful hai bhaiya..usko dekhne ke liye maine socha agar windows toot jaayen to dikh jaayegi..iss liye maine ball maar ke tod di windows...

raj isspar statue ki tarah mooh khol kar aryan ko dekh raha tha,,,aur naina raj ko iss tarah dekh kar hash rahi thi...

raj:- tu toh mujhse char kadam aage nikla...

raj-ahhh chalo late ho raha hai...

ayaan-main to kab se keh raha tha...

fir teeno maa ko bye kar ke chale jaate hain...

raj pehle ayaan ko ek shop pe lekar jaata hai jahan se vo usse bat lekar deta hai...

fir wo sab movie dekhne jate hai...actually koi bhi achhi movie ki tickets to nahi mili par ha...ek theatre me kuchh romatice aur family type ki movie chal rahi thi...to raj ne wahi dikha di dono ko...movie koi aur nahi kabhi khusi kabhi gum thi...jahan naina ka mood off tha...wahi ayaan bhi chid gaya...aur raj unn dono ka gussa jhel raha tha...par raj thoda emotional bhi ho gaya...kyuki movie bhi to rulane wali thi...jisko dekh kar naina aur ayaan ne raj ka khub mazak udaya...fir lautate waqat...vo sab icecream parlour mein jaate hain...

raj-ab batao kaunsi icecream khaaoge??

ayaan-mmm chocolate,strawberry aur ek blackcurrent...

raj-kya???itni saari...

ayaan-haan mujhe saari khaani hai...

raj-bilkul nahin tum bimaar pad jaaoge..

ayaan[stubbornly]-nahin mujhe saari khaani hai...

raj[strictly]-no means no...

ayaan-mujhe khaani hai...

raj-par...

tabhi naina bolti hai...

naina-ayaan itna keh raha hai to laa dijiye na...kuch nahin hoga...

raj:- tum na naina ise bigad rahi ho...

ayaan:- yehhh...bhabhi ne bhi keh diya ab to lado...

raj[looking at her lovingly]-theek hai...lata hun...

ayaan[chair pad chad ke]-cheating..cheating!!!!!!!

raj-ayaan kya kar rahe ho??????

ayaan-main kab se bol raha tha...aap sunn hi nahin rahe the aur bhabhi ne ek baar kaha to maaan gaye...mujhe koi icecream nahin khaani...aur aap se baat bhi nahin karni...aap mujhe pyaar nahin karte...main jaa raha hun...

ye keh kar ayaan chair se utar kar bhaag jaata hai..

raj[worried]-ayaan!!ruko...

par ayaan raj ki sunta nahin...vo mall ke andar bhaagta rehta hai...raj uske peeche bhaagne waala tha jab naina ne usse rok liya...

naina-ahh main lekar aati hun usse...

raj-lekin vo...

naina-maine kaha na aapse...main usse lekar aati hun...tum uski favourite icecreams lekar aao...main bas abhi aayi...

raj-theek hai...main icecreams lekar aata hun..

fir naina wahan se chali jaati hai ayaan ke peeche...

kuch der dhoondne ke baad naina dekhti hai..ki ayaan ek kapdon ki shop mein table ke neeche baitha hai..naina uske paas jaati hai..

naina-ayaan...

fir naina ayaan ko kisis bhi tarah mana kar lati hai...aur dekhti hai ki raj sabhi ke liye icecream lekar aa chuka hai aur ayaan ke liye teeno,...ayaan khush ho jata hai aur khane lagta hai...aur raj naina bhi

naina ne bina icecream ki taraf dekhe chamach uthaya aur icecream uski dress par gir gayi...

naina:-ohh no...raj ayaan main abhi aayi..

naina wash room chali gayi...

raj-abhi aur kuch khaana hai?????

aryan-no...bas...[saying this he rubbed his tummy]

raj[smiled]-ok..to chalein???

ayaan-bhaiya bhabi ne to icecream khaayi hi nahin..dekho unki icecream melt ho gayi...

raj dekhta hai ki naina ki icecream sach mein melt ho gayi hoti hai...

raj-ahhh koi baat nahin main aur leke aata hun..

naina-nahin mera mann nahin hai..

raj-par naina tumne kuch khaaya hi nahin..

naina-koi baat nahin main ghar jaake kha lungi...

raj-u sure??

naina-hmmm..

raj-ok tum log chalo main bill pay karke aata hun...

naina-ok..

fir we sab ek mall me jate hai aur shopping ke liye...aur ayaan daud kar game section me chala jata hai aur raj naina ladies section me

naina kuch kurtis dekh rahi hoti hai aur raj...naina ko...raj dekhta hai ki naina kuch confused si lag rahi hoti hai...vo naina ke paas jaata hai...

raj-kya hua naina?????any problem??

naina-vo actually mujhe kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha..ye lun ya fir ye????

naina ne do kurtis haath mein pakadi hoti hain...ek white aur doosri pink...

raj-ahh ab iska kya kiya jaaye???

naina:- tumhe kya lagata hai??

raj[surprised]-ahh vo...main...mujhe kuch nahin lagta...

naina-huh????

raj-ahh mera matlab hai mujhe iss sab ke baare mein kuch nahin pata..maine pehle ye sab kabhi...

naina smiled at this...and deep down somewhere felt happy too...

naina-its ok..

raj-tum dono le lo...problem solve ho jaayegi???.

naina-dono???par dono ka kya karoongi??dono ek jaisi hi to hain...

raj-ye to maine socha hi nahin...

ahh koi baat nahin tum fir bhi dono le lelo...jab white pehne ka mann ho to white pehan lena aur jab pink pehnne ka mann ho to pink...

naina gulped hard at this suggestion...usse bas ayaan ki ek hi baat yaad aa rahi thi...

''raj needs training"

naina-ok...main try karke aati hun...

raj-ok..main yahin wait karta hun...

naina try room jaati hai aur 5 minute mein jab waapis aati hai to jo dekhti hai usse dekh kar naina ka gussa saatvein nahin aathvein aasmaan par hota hai...

end of part 24
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago

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amber saleem

@ambersaleem

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#324

wowww nice part thank god sb sahi salamat wapis aagaye me to dar hi gayi thi naveen becoming a father great 😊😊 chalo g first night bhi ho hi gai :) :) oye raj chup han khabardar jo mere rajeev ko kuch bola ye shanta tai to bilkul mjhpe gai hen sb miss kardengi magar reporters nhi haha ye aayan to raj se bhi 4 hath aage nikla abhi se larkyan ched raha hai 😆😆😆😆😆 or ab naina ko kyun gussa aagaya hai oh god plzzz save raj 😛😛😛😛 cont sooonnn

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LaviDovey

@Lavi_dovey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#325

superb part.
sb long wapas aa gye.
i was soo scared for sometime.
a happy part.
loved it alot.
thank u so mich for pm.

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Anmol

@love_sujalkash

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#326

great strtng dear😊😊😊

part 1...Awsmmm all cadets r soo cuTe😳

naveen & Raj soo sweet frndzzz...raj to strt mein he dream dekhny lga😛😛😛 but abi pta nhi kon hai😉

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Reply for part 23:-

Nice n funny update. Thank god both got saved n finally they got married. But he has to go Kargil I wish all of them will return back fine.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#328

Reply for part 24:-

Great n lovely part with full of romance. Raj n Naina are so sweet cute together. Aryan is getting very naughty day by day. Thank god all are safe. Naveen is going to be father very soon that is good. Naina was terrified but she is relaxed to see her husband with her n Raj was stunned to see how beautiful she look in form of his wife. Update soon.