Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51

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Posted: 10 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: nilusoni
wonderful part
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#332

Originally posted by: rinku95
Amazing
Ayaan too cute
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Reply for part 24:-

Great n lovely part with full of romance. Raj n Naina are so sweet cute together. Aryan is getting very naughty day by day. Thank god all are safe. Naveen is going to be father very soon that is good. Naina was terrified but she is relaxed to see her husband with her n Raj was stunned to see how beautiful she look in form of his wife. Update soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
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Nice n funny update. Thank god both got saved n finally they got married. But he has to go Kargil I wish all of them will return back fine.

thanks again vartika...😊😊😊😊

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Originally posted by: ambersaleem
wowww nice part thank god sb sahi salamat wapis aagaye me to dar hi gayi thi naveen becoming a father great 😊😊 chalo g first night bhi ho hi gai :) :) oye raj chup han khabardar jo mere rajeev ko kuch bola ye shanta tai to bilkul mjhpe gai hen sb miss kardengi magar reporters nhi haha ye aayan to raj se bhi 4 hath aage nikla abhi se larkyan ched raha hai 😆 or ab naina ko kyun gussa aagaya hai oh god plzzz save raj 😛 cont sooonnn

thanks amber yes santa tai tumse hi inspired hai...😆😆
thanks a lot...😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: krazykaju
superb part.
sb long wapas aa gye.
i was soo scared for sometime.
a happy part.
loved it alot.
thank u so mich for pm.

thanks a ton dear😊😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: love_sujalkash
great strtng dear😊😊😊
part 1...Awsmmm all cadets r soo cuTe😳
naveen & Raj soo sweet frndzzz...raj to strt mein he dream dekhny lga😛😛😛 but abi pta nhi kon hai😉

so sis finally tumne part 1 padh hi liya...😡
thanks alottt...
keep reading...and keep commenting...😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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thanks every one...so here goes the last part 😭😭😭of this fic...

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***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
part 25
** Last part**

naina try room jaati hai aur 5 minute mein jab waapis aati hai to jo dekhti hai usse dekh kar naina ka gussa saatvein nahin aathvein aasmaan par hota hai...

naina dekhti hai ki raj ek ladki ke saath khada hai...ahhh ek sexy ladki saath actually... jo koi bhi dekh kar bata sakta hai ki raj par line maar rahi thi...aur raj...no points for guessing bhut uncomfortable lag raha tha...uss ladki ne short dress pehni hui thi...

ladki[seductively]-aapko kya lagta hai mujhpe black zyada accha lagega ya white?????.

raj-[not looking at her]-aap mujhse kyun pooch rahi hain?i mean..

ladki-i know what u meant by that...actually main akeli aayi hun to maine socha kisi aur se madad le li jaaye..aur ek ladke se zyada accha aur kaun bata sakta hai ki ek ladki pe kya accha lagta hai...hai na???

raj-ahh actually i dont know a single thing about all this soo...i think u should ask someone else..

ladki-ohh common...i guess its not that difficult..aap ek colour to bata hi sakte hain...

raj ne socha jab tak vo kuch bolega nahin tab tak vo ladki wahan se jaayegi nahin...iss liye raj ne uss ladki ko wahan se bhagaane ke liye bol diya..

raj-black...

naina jo ye sab dekh rahi thi...jal kar sab kuch jalaane ke baare mein soch rahi thi...

naina[very angrily]...jab maine poocha tab to...mujhe kuch nahin pata..aur ab black!!!!!!my foot...arghhh...

ladki-ohh wow..mujhe bhi yahi lag raha tha...waise aap par bhi black bhut accha lag raha hai..

raj ne tab dhyan dia ki usne bhi black shirt pehni hui hai..raj iss baat par apne aap ko zor se punch karna chahta tha jo obviously possible nahin tha...

ladki-vaise aap bhi yahan meri tarah akele aayen hain???if yes then i can give u some company u know..akele shopping karna bhut boring hota hai..

isse pehle ki raj kuch bolta naina wahan aa gayi...aur jaakar raj ke saath khadi ho jaati hai...raj naina ke expressions dekh kar samajh gaya ki usne sab sunn liya aur ab bas vo bhagwaan se apni salaamati ki dua maaang raha tha...

ladki-ahhh aap kaun hain??

naina[staring hard at her]-aapko kaun lagti hun???

ladki-ahh how would i know????do u know her???[she asked looking at raj]

naina[looking at raj]-aap batayenge ya main bataun???

raj[gulped hard]-ahh main batata hun...ahh miss...

ladki[smiling]-kaamini...

naina[muttering]:''kamini" ...

raj ne naina ko ye kehte sunn liya...aur apni hassi rokne ki poori koshish ki usne..fir bhi smile karne se nahin rok paaya..jo ki naina ne dekh liya...naina ko laga ki vo ladki ko dekh kar muskuraa raha hai...naina ko gusse mein dekh kar raj ne apni hassi ek dum se rokli aur ladki se kaha..

raj-miss kaamini..this is naina...my wife..

kaamini[shocked]-what???

raj-is anything wrong??

kaamini-u..u r married????

naina[very rudely]-nahin...main aasmaan se tapki hun...wife matlab wahi hota hai...

aur fir kamini wahan se chali gayi..aur raj naina ki taraf dekhta hai...raj dekhta hai ki naina ne vo white kurta pehna hota hai jo shayad vo usse dikhaane aayi thi aur sab gadbad ho gayi ...

raj-tumpe ye accha lag raha hai...isse pack karwaate hain...

naina-nahin...

raj[confused]-kyun?????

naina-kyunki ab mujhe ye pasand nahin...aur mujhe nahin chahiye...

raj-ohh..to aur kuch dekhte hain..

naina-ji nahin..aaj ke liye bhut kuch dekh liya maine..aur kuch nahin dekhna...main change karke aati hun...

fir naina bina raj ke jawaab ka intzaar kiye bina wahan se chali jaati hai...

raj[khud se]-mujhe nahin pata tha...ki shaadi ke baad ye sab bhi hota hai...ab maine ismein kya kiya????hey bhagwaan...ab to mujhe bhi lagta ki mujhe movies dekhni chahiye thi...kam se kam aisi situation mein kya karna chahiye ye to pata chalta...

thodi derr baad naina change karke bahar aati hai aur dono bina koi baat kiye ayaan ko lene jaate hain..aur fir sab ghar aa jate hai...

naina thodi si raj se naraj thi tabhi raj aata hai...

raj;- naina...sari packing ho gayi na...humien kal early morning nikalna hai...

naina:- ha ho gayi...(aur naina uth kara waha se jane lagti hai ki raj holds her hand)

raj;- jaan...(naina heart skip a beat...)i m sorry... yar wo mujhse baat kar rahi thi main nahi...

naina:- kya kha...

raj:- are maine kaha ki wo kamini..mujhse baat kar rahi thi main nahi...

naina;- are nahi uske pehle...

raj:- kya.aaa

naina:- veer...

raj:- maine kaha jaan...plzzz man jao na...

naina hugs him...

naina:- i love u veer...

aur agle subah dono switzer land ke liye nikal jate hai...where Raj has only work to love Naina more n more. they both were enjoying ab sirf 1 din bache hai raj naina ko wapas jane me...naina ne raj ko pahadi pe aane ko kaha aur khud kahi gayab ho gayi...raj kafi der se naina ka wait kar raha tha par naina wahan nahi aayi tabhi raj palat kar jane walatha ki...kisi ne uska hath rok liya...wo ek bachha tha...usne raj ko ek chit di...raj ne wo padhi aur opposite direction me gaya to dekha wahan ek ladki khadi thi...barf ki chadar ke upar...usne off white colour ki saree pehni thi...uske kaale ghane baal uske kamar ko to uske pearls ke earing uske kandhe ko...raj gaya aur usne puchha...

raj:- excuse me...aap kaun...(she turns with a smile on her face...and raj is just blown by the beauty standing before him...and is none other than,,,,Naina...Raj ki naina...)

naina:- veer...kuchh bologe...(raj hose me aaya...)

raj:- naina tum yeh...

naina:- kyun tumhari dream girl jaisi nahi lag rahi hun...(haan naina bikul waise hi khadi thi,...jaisa raj ne apni dairy me likha tha...pair me payal, hanth me bhar bhar ke chudiyaan,aankhon me kajal, mathe me bindi, honthon me muskaan,gale me mangal sutra aur mangh me sindoor...she is just looking like a angel in off white saree..bikul waise jaise raj ne kalpana ki thi kabhi...)

raj:- nahin tum to meri kalpana se bhi bahut jyada khubsurat lag rahi ho...par tumhe yeh sab...

naina:- actually wo raj i m sorry but...i read ur dairy...

raj:- what...naina how could u meri personal dairy...tumne sahi nahi kiya naina...(jhuth muth ka gussa dikhata hai...aur naina wakai mayush hokar kinare jakar khadi ho jati hai...raj usko dekhta hai aur use naina pe pyar aa raha hai...)

raj:-
khawaab hai tu...neend hu main...
dono mile...raat bane...
roz yahi maangu...duaa...
teri meri...baat... banee...
baat... banee...
main rang sharbaton kaa...tu meethe ghat ka paanii...
main rang sharbaton kaa...tu meethe ghat ka paanii...
mujhey khud me khol de to... meri jaan baat bann jaani...
rang sharbaton kaa...tu meethe ghat ka paanii...
main rang sharbaton kaa...tu meethe ghat ka paanii...
mujhey khud me khol de to... meri jaan baat bann jaani...

(raj goes behind her and hugs her tighly...and starts tickling her...and say a wishperd sorry...and naina melkted in his beloved arms)

rang sharbaton kaa...tu meethe ghat ka paanii...
main rang sharbaton kaa...tu meethe ghat ka paanii...

ohh yaraan tujhe pyar ki batiyaan...kya samjhawaan...
ohh jaagti ratiyaan roz bitawaan...isse aage ab main kya kahun...

ohh yaraan tujhe bolti akhiyaan...sadke jaawan...
ohh mangle...papiya..aj duaawaann...isse aage ab main kya kahun...

(raj and naina both were roaming around the snow...and keep glancing at each other)

naina:-
maine to dheere se...neendo ke dhage se...bandha hai khwaab ko tere...
main naa jahann chahun...na aashmaan chahun...
aaja hisse me tu mere...
tu dhang chahto ka main jaise koi naadani...
tu dhang chahto ka main jaise koi naadani...
mujhe khud se jod de to...mere yaar baat bann jaanii...
(raj naina ki god me sir rakh kar leta hai uski aankhen band hai aur wo naina ke hanthon ki fingers se khel raha hai aur naina bas use dekh rahi hai aur mushkura rahi hai)

raj:
rang sharbaton kaa...tu meethe ghat ka paanii...
main rang sharbaton kaa...tu meethe ghat ka paanii...

naina:-
tere khayalon se...tere khayalon tak...mera toh hai aana jana...
mera to jo bhi hai...tu hi tha...tu hi hai...
baaki jahan hai beganaa...
(naina kissed his fore head,,,on which raj smiles)

raj:-
tum ek mushafir hun...main koi raah anjaani...
tum ek mushafir hun...main koi raah anjaani...
mann chaha mod de to...mere yaar baat bann jaanii...
rang sharbaton kaa...tu meethe ghat ka paanii...
main rang sharbaton kaa...tu meethe ghat ka paanii...
mujhey khud me khol de to... meri jaan baat bann jaani...
(raj uth jata hai aur naina ko apna hanth deta hai naina bhi uska hanth thaam kar uth jati hai...aur raj use gode me utha kar chalne lagta hai)
rang sharbaton kaa...tu meethe ghat ka paanii...

ohh yaraan tujhe pyar ki batiyaan...kya samjhawaan...
ohh jaagti ratiyaan roz bitawaan...isse aage ab main kya kahun...

ohh yaraan tujhe bolti akhiyaan...sadke jaawan...
ohh mangle...papiya..aj duaawaann...isse aage ab main kya kahun...

(naina apni dono bahein raj ke neck par dal deti hai aur bas use dekhe ja rahi hai)

aur aise hi we apne hotel pahuchte hai...They enjoyed a lot n came back after 15 days...aur apni apni post join kar lete hai...abhi raj sikkim me hai aur naina delhi HO me...dono hi ek dusre ko bahut miss karte hai...par 6 months baad raj ko pata chala ki naina maa banne wali hai.. wo 7 weeks pregnant hai.to raj ki khusi ka koi thikana hi nahi tha...usne apna trasfer kaise bhi kark delhi kara liya...is khushi ke sath sath inki zindago me aur bhi khusi aayi...kargil me safalta paane ke baad sabhi ka promotion ho gaya hai...now, raj, naveen aur aalekh major ban gaye hai to...huda aur ali captains...wahi yeh bhi pata chala ki sam aur neelu bhi pregnanat hai...aur in sabhi ki delivery dates me bas 1 ya dedh months ka fark hai...all are on top of the world...to wahi pooja aur ali ka bhi nikaah ho gaya...sabhi log kanpur gaye the...inki sadi me sharikh hone...par naveen aur shalu nahi ja paye kyuki isi week kisi bhi waqt shalu ki delivery ho sakti thi...aur waisa hi hua...jis din ali aur pooja ki shadi thi usi din shalu ne ek pyare se bete ko janam diya...jika naam aarav rakha naina ne...

7 months later...

naina hospital me hai...aur raj aur baki sabhi log operation theatre ke bahar khade hai...raj bahut tensed tha...par naveen aur baki sab bhi the wahan...aalekh nahi aa paya...par usne phone karne ko kaha hai...naina ki cheekh raj se suni nahi ja rahi thi but thodi der baad wo sahnt hui aur dr bahar aaye...

dr:- congratulation mr shekhawat aapko beti hui hai...(raj is on top of the world)

raj:- oh dr thakyou...(he hugs dr)

dr:- go meet ur wife.,...thodi der me nurse aapki beti ko lekar aati hogi...(dr left then raj hugs every one...sabhi raj ko naina ke pass bhejte hai...)

raj andar jata hai to dekhta hai ki naina aankh band kark leti hai...par uske chere ki chamak hi uske mann ka haal bata rahi thi naina kitani khush hai...raj naina ke pass jata hai aur uska hanth pakadta hai...naina pani aankhien kholti hai...

raj:-wow Naina mai kitna khush hoon bata nahi sakta.raj was over the moon. par meri gudiya kahan hai? (his eyes were searching for her baby.)

naina:-abhi laa rahi hai nurse. Par gudiya ki maa ko kuch nahi milega kya...

off course jaan, ye sab tumhari vajah se hi to hua hai na.( he gave a small kiss to her when nurse bought their baby.)

nurse:sorry beta aap k maa papa romance me busy hain to aap ko thoda wait karna padega. (nurse teased them and both got embarresed.)

Raj took his little daughter in his lap n the feeling in his heart was more than joy n beyond pleasure. He was unable to express the feeling on his own. Shayad pehli baar us ko saari duniya ki khushiyan ek saath mil gayi thi.

raj:Is ka naam kya rakhenge socha hai Naina? (Raj asked while playing with his daughter.)

naina:- Raina...

raj:- hmmm nice...raina...Rajveer + Naina = Raina...best name for our daughter...

naveen (Sabke sath peeche se aate hue):- humara no. bhi ayega ya nahi...

raj:- aayega aayega jarur aayega...

phir sabhi milkar raina ko khilane lagte hai...naveen to sab se jyada khush tha aur ho bhi kyun na...mama banne ki khusi hi kuchh aur hoti hai...

naveen;- nam kya socha...

Raj & naina:- Raina...

shalu:- woow...raj naina..kya baat hai...bahut hi pyara naam hai...

ayaan:- mujhe bhi baby ke sath khelna hai...

raj:- ha ha aap yahan aao...(aur raj ayaan ko naina ke bagal me bitha deta hai...aur raina naveen ki god me hai...aur ayaan use pyar kar raha hai...)

ayaan:- oh bhaiya yeh toh kitani prity hai...aur kitani soft bhi...

naina:- wo isliye kyuki wo abhi bahut chhoti hai...jab aap born hue the na tab aap bhi aise hi the...

ayaan:- kya sach mom...

veena:- ha beta...naina thankyou beta...(naina smiles)

phir aise hi 3 din beet gaye...aur naina raina ke sath ghar aayi...aur shabhi ne milkar raj naina aur raina ke liye pooja bhi rakhwayi...aur 2 din baad naveen shalu, aarav aur mr & mrs alhuwalia laut gaye aur phir naveen ne apni duty bhi joine kar li...aur yahan raj apni zindagi me raina aur naina ke sath khush tha...aur dekhte hi dekhte kab inki zindagi ke 3 saal guzar gaye inhe pata hi nahi chala...

3 years later...

raj aur naina apni zindagi me bahut khush the...dono hi is waqt punjab ke base camp me hai.. me posted hai...naina ke kaam se khush hokar uska promotion kar diya gaya hai...ab naina lft nahi balki captain naina rajveer singh sekhawat hai...jabse raina unki zindagi me aayi hai...iinki zindagi me sirf khusiyaan hi khusiyaan hai...

wahi dusri taraf...huda bhi sam ke sath khus hai...sam ko beti hui thi jiska naam priya rakha hai huda ne...wo ab lagbhag 3 saal ki ho jayegi..priya raina se sirf 8 days badi hai...huda is waqt leh me posted hai...aur sam bhi...sam abhi bhi lft hi hai...they are having a great life together...jahan tak baat hai...ali ki toh pichle saal hi inki zindagi me ek pyare se bete ne janam liya jiska naam irshaan rakha hai hai pooja ne...irshaan abhi 1 saal ka hai...aur ali is waqt ajmer me posted hai...aur pooja aur irshaan ke sath apni jindagi me bahut khush hai...wahi...aalekh...he is currently posted at jaisalmer...uske ghar bhi ek pyari si beti ne janm liye tha...jiska naam ahana hai...jo raina se only 17 days chhoti hai...neelu,aalekh aur ahana bhi apni zindagi me bahut khush hai...wo akshar leave milte hi raj naina ke pass aa jate hai...vacation ke liye...raina aarav aur ahana bahut hi jayada close hai ek dusre se...theek usi tarah jis tarah inke papa close hai ek dusre se...yeh teeno ek dusre se door jarur rehte hai...but har week phone me saari batein karte hai..ki aaj inhone kya khaya..kya kiya...sab kuchh...aarav is samay naveen aur shalu ke sath pithauragadh me hai...aur shalu bhi usi camp me as a dr posted hai...naveen bhi apni jindagi me bahut khush hai...wahin armaan aur ishaani ki bhi shadi ho gayi...par as per nature ishaani armaan pe hukum jhadti hai..par atlast ishaani also found her true lover in armaan...aur dono ka 2 saal ka beta advik hai...sabhi loge aapas me door hokar bhi touch me rehte hai..ab yeh kar bhi kya sakte the...aakhir kar inka kaam hi aisa hai,,,,,jahan yeh har baar sath nahi ho sakte...agar ek line me kaha jaye to sabhi loge apni life me settle aur happy bhi hai...

this is sunny morning...it was sunday to koi kaam nahi...raj araam se naina ke bagal me so raha tha...ki tabhi unke kamre ki door pe knock hota hai...naina uth kar darwaja kholti hai...to raina daud kar aati hai...aur jakar raj ke upar chad jati hai...raj hadbada kar uth jata hai...

raj:- are princess kya hua...aap aise kyun...???

raina:- papa...kya aap bhi jab dekho sote rehte ho...now get up...humein ghumne jana hai...

naina:- yeh kab tai hua...aur kahin nahi jana hai kisi ko...jab dekho ghumna...

raina:- maa...plzz aap mere aur papa ke beech me mat bolo...waise bhi aapko koi lekar nahi ja raha hai...

naina:- ha ha...mujhe kyun koi lekar jayega...jao tum baap beti...masti karo...mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai...tum dono ke sath ghumne ka...

raj:- kya naina tum bhi na...princess to majak kar rahi hai...(raj raina ko apni lap par bitha leta hai...aur uske sir par kiss karta hai)...

naina:- ha ha...i know...tum dono jab dekho mere khilaf jo plan banate rehte ho...achha ab meri maa jaga hi diya hai...to chal tujhe taiyaar kar du...fir nasta banati hun...veer kya khaoge...??

raj & naina:- alu ke parathe...

naina:- ok...madam chaliye...(aur phir raina apne papa ko kiss kark chali jati hai...)...

raj bhi naha kar bahar aata hai dinig table par naina kitchen me alu ke parathe bana rahi thi...aur raina table par baithi thi...

raina:- papa yeh maa kitan tyme lagati hai...kuchh kro na mujhe bahut lagi hai...(raj winks at raina )ab dono raj aur raina spoon lekar plate bajane lagte hai...

raina & raj:- bhook lagi hai khana do..bhook lagi hai khana do...bhook lagi hai khana do...(nainagusse se aati hai...)

naina:- oh god...chup...tum dono se sabra nahi hota kya...just stop it...la rahi hun kahan na...

raina:- maa humien bhook lagi hai...aur aap ho ki itana deri kar rahe ho...mere papa hote to 5 minute me bana lete ...bcz he is a superman...

raj:- bikul...beta...tumhari maa ko kuchh nahi aata...

naina(Apne kamar me hanth rakh kar):- oh reallly...toh beta ab tumhare papa hi tumhe bana kar khilayeinge...ok...(raj apni chair girta girta bacha...aur naina kitchen side jakar sara bana hua dustbin me daal diya...)...

raj:- oh no...princess yeh kiye aapne...aur naina tum bachhi ho kya kiya...itna sara khan dustbin daal diya...ab hum kya khayeinge...princess bhukhi hai...achha chalo...ab fir se bana do ha...(naina apna hanth saf kark sofe me jake baith jati hai...)what,...

naina:- veer...aapki princess aapko super hero manti hai na...to jaiye aur khud banaiye...

raj:- tum pagal ho gayi...(tabhi raina also comes)...

raina(kamar me hanth rakh kar):- ok...papa chalo aap aaj hum milkar aalu ke parathe banate hai...

raj:- oye...tu 3 saal ki hai 30 ki nahi...chup kar meri dadi amma...naina maan jao...

raina:- papa chalo mujhe pata hai kaise banate hai,...main aapko bata dungi aap karte jana...wo kya hai na main little girl hoon na...warna main khud bana kar apne papa ko khilati...mujhe bade ho jane do main apne papa ka pura khayaal rakhungi...aur fir main apne papa ko tasty tasty khana bana kar khilaungi...fir aapki koi jarurat nahi hogi...kyun papa...(naina is extreamly shocked..and raj is laughing...)...

naina:- kya boli...ruk batati hun...(naina raina k peeche bhagi use marne ko...par raj ne naina ko pakad liya)

raj:- kya...naina bachhi hai wo...commomn chalo khana bana do...

naina:- ab to kabhi nahi...papa ki chamchi...hnnn...(aur naina gusse se apne room me chali jati hai...)

raj:- princess ab kya kare...

raina:- papa aap chalo mere sath...

aur fir raina raj ka hanth pakad kar use kitchen me le jati hai...

raina:- papa mujhe counter top pe baithao...(raj raina ko utha kar use counter top pe bitha deta hai...)yeh dekho papa maa ne aapka half kam to already kar diya hai...yeh aata gunda hai...aur wo dekho...aalu bhi hai...mashale ke sath...ab is aate ki jaise roti goli karte waise karo...aur beech me is alu ko fill karo aur is belan se gol gol kark...tave pe dal do aur fir is butter use paka do bas...(raj apni beti ko bahut dhyan se sunn raha tha...aur chhup kar naina bhi...naina ki aankh me aanshun aa gye...ki wakai uski beti ab badi ho rahi hai,...kehne ko 3 saal ki hai par baatein to...)

raj:- princess aapko yeh sab kaise pata...

raina:- simple papa jab maa kam karti hai...aur aap nahi chhodti wo mujhe yahi par kitchen top pe bitha deti hai main unhe dekhti hun...to pata hai...ab aap karo...

raj waisa hi karta hai...

raina:-oh papa use palto wo jal raha hai...

raj:- ha ha...wooo princess...teh to bann gaya...mission a complished...

raina:- abhi to sirf ek bana hai...aur banao na...

raj:- ha ha...(aur raj baki k parathe banata hai...aur naina wapas apne room me aakar muh fula kar baith jati hai...do minute baad raj aur naina parathe aur dahi lekar naina k pass aate hai...aur naina ko dikha dikha kar kha rahe the...use chidane k liye...)wah princess kya parathe bane hai...par kuchh loge...naraz hone se baaz hi nahi aate...

raina:- ha papa...

naina thinks:- dono ko dekho kitane maje se kha rahe hai...mujhe pucha tak nahi...yeh nahi ki mana le...dono baap beti ek se hai...

raj:- nainaaa...

naina(angry ):- no...thanks...

raj:- princess...(raj winks at raina...aur naina ko kash ke pakad leta hai..aur raina aakar jabar dasti naina ko...khila deti hai...parathe wakai bahut achhe bane the...)

raina:- kya maa...ap to baat baat pe aise ruthte ho jaise...aap dono k abhi shadi hui hai...bhul jati ho kya ki main bhi hoon...aur ab to mera bro bhi aane wala hai...(Aur raina jakar naina ke tummy ko kiss karti hai...on which naina smiles)...(ji haan naina 4 weeks pregnant hai...she is again expecting...)

raj:- oh tumko kisne keh diya ki tumhara brother aayega...ha...koi brother aane wala...tumhari sister ayegi...

naina:- ji nahi beta hi hoga samjhe tum...ek beti kam hai...tumhaari chamchi...beta hi hoga...jo meri baat manega,...mera kaha sunega...

raj:- naina...tumhe sirf isliye beta chahiye ki tumhari baat mane...ek baat yad rakho naina betiyaan apne ma baap ka jyada khyal rakhti hai...

naina:- ji nahi jitana mera ab tak experience hai...sirf papa ka rakhti hai...(naina makes a face to raina...on which she also makes a face to naina...)

raj:- dekh lene beti hogi...

naina:- no beta hoga...

raj:- beti naina...

naina:- beta veer...

raj:- naina beti...

naina:- beta...

raj.:-..beti...

naina:- beta..

raj:- beta...

naina:- beti... are nahi nahi...

raj:- yeh i won...

raina udas hokar:- par mujhe to dono chahiye...brother bhi sis bhi...

naina & raj:- kya...

raj:- beta yeh kaise ho sakta hai...achha chalo humien ghumne jana hai na...go get ready...

thodi der baad raj naina aur raina ke sath mal jata hai...3no movie dekhte hai...lunch karte hai...shopping karte hai...raina ne zid kark raj se uske size ki aarmy uniform kharidwaayi...diiner kark...aur phir sab ghar aa jate hai...

naina:- raina baby...chalo so jao...fir kal paly school jane me der hoga...raina...

raj:- kya hua chheekh kyun rahi ho...

naina:- dekho na...pichhle 10 minute se apne room me hai pata nahi kya kar rahi hai...door lock karke...are kuchh nahi...

raj:-aa jayegi...tum bhi jab dekho uske peeche padi rehti ho...

naina:- are main to...

raina:- Cadet Raina Rajveer Singh Shekhwat reporting sirrr...

both raj and naina turns and found her princess in aarmy unform...a sweet smile appears on both of their lips...and their eyes also got numm...

raj:- princess...idhar ana...

raina:- left...left right left...(she comes to them...and raj pics her up)...

raj:- princess aap aarmy join karoge...??...

raina::- ha papa main big hokar bilkul aapki tarah aur ma ki tarah banungi...aur ha mujhe..ma ki tarah beautiful bhi banna hai...(naina kissed her cheeks...)

naina:- ek din humari princess humse bhi badi...aur bahut brave officer banegi...

raina:- sach ma...

raj:- ha baby...

aur phir isi tarah 3 no so jate hai...

aise hi 8 mahine kab beet gaye inhe pata hi nahi chala...maya ji aur harshad bhi aa gye the..naina ka inn dino mein khyal rakhne ko...naina ki delivery bhi hui...aur jaisa ki raina ne chaha tha...use bhai aur behen dono hi mil gaye...aur raj naina bhi jeet gaye...kyuki naina ne twince ko janm diya ek beta aur ek beti...beti ka naam Tia rakha to bete ka naam kabeer...ar phir aise hi apne bachho ke sath inki zindagi beetane lagi...
mushkile bhi aayi...par raj naina ne ek dusre ka sath kabhi nahi chhoda...har mushkil ko peeche chhod kar inka pyar aage badhta chala gaya...aur aaj inke pyar ki nishani...Raina,Kabeer, aur Tia...inke is kabhi na khatam hone wale pyar ke sakshi the...kisi ka rishta nahi badla...aaj bhi sabhi frnds sath hai...khush hai...inki dosti waqt ke sath mazboot hui...

so here was the end of this story...but actually This was only start of their new life...

***Rajveer - Naina***
***Happy Ending****

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Main Naina Rajveer Singh Shekhawat...yeh thi meri kahani...meri nahi...mere aur mere pyar Veer ki kahani...Cadet Rajveer Singh Shekhawat aur Cadet Naina Ah Singh ki kahani...kehne ko to maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki mujhe kisi se pyar ho sakta hai...main bhi kisi se is had tak pyar kar sakti hu,...wo bhi ek aise insaan se jisse pehli hi mulaakat me mera jhagda ho gaya...aur veer uske bhi thoughts mere bare me kuchh aise hi the...he also used to hate me... and same with me...kya kuchh nahi kiya...maine aur veer ek dusre ko pareshaan karne aur neecha dikhanne me koi kasar nahi chhodi...par akhir kar...pyar me pad hi gaye...wo bhi ek dusre ke...kai galat fehmiyaan bhi aayi...par kehte hai na...ki jahan sachha pyar ho wahan koi bhi galat fehmi kisi ka sirf kuchh dino tak imitihaan leti hai...bas akhir me...sab kuchh theek ho hi jata hai...wahi mere aur raj ke sath hua...sach kaha hai kisi ne jab tak kisi prem kahani ka ant achha na ho samajh lo ki prem kahani khatam nahi hui...par mere aur veer ki prem kaha ka ant bahut hi khubsurat hua...humare 3 bachho ke roop me...ji haan...mer aur raj k ansh...Raina...natakhat hai...papa ki princess aur chamchi...Tia...wo to abhi chhoti hai...but i m 100% sure veer use bhigad dega...wo abhi se kehta hai ki uske pass majority hai...Raina aur Tia ki...par mujhe pura yakeen hai ki...jab mera beta Kabeer bada hoga na...wo humesha apni ma ka sath dega...mere aur veer ki zindagi me pyar ke alaawa kuchh aur bhi imtehaan aaye...dosti ke imtehaan...par kehte hai ki...imtehaan rishto ko mazboot banate hai...theek usi tarah...hum sab ki dosti bhi aag me tap ke nikhar gayi thi...aur bas ab bhagwaan se yahi dua hai...zindagi ke hqar kadam pe veer mere sath ho...aur hum dono apne desh ke prati apna farz imaan dari se nibha paaye...par jab bhi main apni akhiri saas lu to veer ki bahon me lu...aur bas yahi keh saku...''Humko Tumse Pyar Hai''...bahut pyar hai...aur humesha rahega...zindagi ke is paar bhi...aur zindagi ke us paar bhi...

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so every one...this is it...here was my last part of ''Humko Tumse Pyar Hai'',...hope so i have done justice...if there is any loop holes...a bigg sorry for that...i know some readers must be thinking that ki maine story bhagai hai...bahut fast pace pe...but i personally prefer ki har ek story ko ek sweet se end aur point par khatam kar dena chahiye...aur scenes ke repeating mujhse pasand nahi...so maine ek simple way pe story khatam kar di...if any one is not happy with that than a big sorry...but like rajeev...kisi bhi character ya kahani ko ek end pe lakar chhod dena chahiye...warna us character ya kahani ka charm / aura khatam ho jata hai...

be happy...
keep smiling always...

plzz do comment
with lots of love
Chandni
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Rajeev Diwaani...

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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago