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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! Can't wait for it to start!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

wow amazing intro
start soon plz
cant wait
can u give me the link 2 ur other ff???plz

Thnx this is the link to my ff😉

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=355345

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

nice charecter sketch.. feel bad for shalini.. she didnt make it...
o well, continue soonn

Thnks thnks

Shalini didn't make it but how that's a mystery😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 intro.
i am eagerly waiting 4 the 1st part
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1 "Live of the girls"

You see Kripa in her office. Her hair is tied. She is busy with some files. Then her assistance Anita comes in.

An: Can I come in ma'm?

K: Your already in. Ab batao kya baat hai?

Kripa didn't look at Anita bcuz she was busy with her files.

An: Woh Mr Mehra ka phone aaya tha unka case larna hai na. Keh rahe hain ke kal tak file ban jaani chahiye. The deadline is tomorrow ! Kyun ke unke paas ke baad time nahi hai!

Kripa looked up at Anita.

K: Anita lawyer main hoon ya woh hai?

An: Aap hain

K: Case maine larna hai yah usne?

An: Aapne....

K: Mere paas time hona chahiye yah Mr Mehra ke paas time hona chahiye?

An: Ji aap ke paas.

K: So please Anita Mr Mehra ko phone kar ke bol do ke mere paas bohot zyaada cases hain jisse mujhe dekhna parta hai sirf ek nahi! Main ek din mein ek file tayaar nahi kar sakti aur agar koi aitraaz hai to woh mujhe milne aajaye jab MERE paas time ho!

An: Ji ma'm.

Anita was almost walking away but Kripa stopped her.

K: Mere liye coffee lekar aa sakti ho?

An: Ji ma'm.

Kripa picked up her phone.

K: Dev aaj ka newspaper aaya kya?.......Anita coffee lene gayi hai.....Tum wahan ho ok theek hai Anita ko newspaper de do aur usse bolo ke woh us newspaper ko mere paas pohoncha de........bye.

Kripa went to her desk and got a photo out from her drawer. Kripa didn't smile much after her graduation. But whenever she saw her friends pic then she would smiled a very big smile. Mean while Anita came in.

An: Ma'm yeh rahi coffee aur yeh hai newspaper.

K: Thank you.

Kripa had the coffee in her right hand and the newspaper in her left hand.

She was going to drink her coffee when she looked at the front page and her coffee fell down her eyes became wider. Anita got shocked.

An: Ma'm are you alright!

Kripa began to breath very hard. There were tears in Kripa's eyes. Tears of fear and sorrow. She gave the newspaper to Anita.

An: Famous photographer Sahil murdered in his own house. He was stabbed three times with a knife and with that knife there was a letter with "I'M BACK!"

Anita got her eye on the photo of the friends.

An: Aap inhe jaanti thi?

Kripa nodded.

K: Yeh mere dost tha hum school pe ek saath parte the. Aur kuch saal pehle..........

Kripa stopped. I her mind ecchoed the words of Sahil.

"Hum yeh baat kissi ko nahi batayenge we will take it to our deathbed! Promise!"

An: Kuch saal pehle kya ma'm?

K: Kuch nahi........ Anita mujhe bohot kaam hai sab ko keh dena please don't disturb me!

An: Par......

K: Anita!

An: Lekin.....

K: BYE ANITA!

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You see Anjali sleeping in her so called office. All kind of clothes are near her. You see a big "GO KAMPKASS" doll with Anjali's pic on it. Anjali's cell rang.

An: Hello.... ah Seema batao kya baat hai?

S: Tumne woh weekly fashion magazine parri?

An: Nahin kyun kuch khaas baat hai?

S: Tum khud dekhlo wahan bahar koi magazine wagera wagera bechne waala hoga khareed lo.

An: FINE!

S: Bye honey.

An: Bye "HONEY"!

Anjali went outside. She crossed the road and went to the magazine stand.

An: Ek magazine milegi kya?

Man: Woh khatam ho gayi hai lekin humare paas newspaper hai woh lena chahengi?

An: Uhm nahi......actually why not dedijiye.

Man: Yeh lijiye

An: Thank you.

Anjali was in the middle of the road when she read the front page her eyes became wider. The world stopped for her she couldn't move anymore. Cars almost touched her. Meanwhile Muktie was on the same side with her kids (TEACHER DON'T THINK WRONG!😆)

M: Challo bacho wait! Green signal for the cars.

Kid: Phir kya hota hai.

M: Phir aap road pe nahi chal sakte warna ghaari aap ko takkar maar degi.

Kid: Lekin phir woh larki road pe kyun khari hai?

M: Kaunsi?

Kid: Woh wahan.

The kid pointed at Anjali Mukti got a very big smile.

Kid: Woh dekho bhara truck.

Mukti looked at her left this should be a nightmare! She saw a very big truck heading towards Anjali. Mukti screamed!

M: ANJALI!!!!!!

Anjali was frozen she didn't move. Mukti ran towards Anjali and saved her just on time!

Kid: Wow Mukti didi is a hero!

End! Hope you like it!

Preview Anjali's reaction and live of the boys!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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o god.. is it that shalini was murdered???? nobody knowz except kripa and sahil... o god!!!

after seeing mukti how will anjili react.. continue sooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

o god.. is it that shalini was murdered???? nobody knowz except kripa and sahil... o god!!!

after seeing mukti how will anjili react.. continue sooooonn

Shalini was murdered but not only Kripa and Sahil know it....😆 All the friends know it.😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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fab part
poor sahil was murdered...is it only kripa hu knws abt the murderer or is it all the frends
cont soon
i wanna knw hu's the muderer and yh how will anjali react...she'll probably be happy and sad at the same tym lost one and found another frend
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: am_786

Thnx this is the link to my ff😉

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=355345

tnx 4 the link

i was just readin the first part and well i can remember readin it a long tym ago...luks lyk its one of those ff i used to read but i lost connections with😆

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