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mirage123

@mirage123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#221

hi hamletfab ud dutta helped villagers & nana is beliving him as rishi .naku & dutta convo too good ud soon

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sona89

@sona89

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Posted: 10 years ago

#222

Hi Hamlet

Awesome UD! The hide & seek Dutta is playing with Nana & gangs ...Ride on toofan is much awaited ...😊

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afi7861

@afi7861

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Posted: 10 years ago

#223

Hi hammie awesome update like always. Dutta aur naku saath saath love they sweet moments 😳 nana didn't recognixed dutta ab nana ki kher nahi.

ab dekhna hai toofan ride kise jate hai

waiting for next .

thanks for the awesome update hammie and thanks for your prayers for my cat. .

Ramzan Mubarak to all 😊

Edited by afi7861 - 10 years ago

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Hey hammie first tell me how are you feeling ? I hope you are not sweating like Dutta while writing these romantic scenes lol. You know how much I enjoy these parts and I am glad you are giving me a good dose of such scenes. You know now I wish the awkwardness between them decreases. I have a feeling because they are not married so they are not as comfortable with each other as they should be. Not that they don't want to be close but when one of them initiates the other one gets a little uncomfortable or shy. For instance during the tractor ride nakku was all excited but Dutta was kind of apprehensive. Perhaps he wants to be cautious. On the other hand while feeding him he was relaxed but she turned coy and he had to change the topic. But still I just love them and their innocent romance. Dutta has managed to get into the good books of kulte and I thought he was on the verge of transforming nana too with his gyan but I forgot people like nana hardly reform. On the contrary he wishes to absorb Dutta into his smuggling business! Huh. Whatever I like the way dutta is cleverly handling him without getting caught. My nakku is getting daring day by day. Hammie I have to mention that even though Tasha hardly get into physical romance but still one can feel their heated chemistry and that's because the way you pen their scenes. I can imagine the heat radiating between them during the horse ride. It was wonderful. It was like toofan ke upar toofan aaya hua tha. Lol.

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: jedy25
hi hamletsuperb ud...dutta & naku's meeting 😳very nice ..ride on toofan waiting for ud soonhappy ramadan to all

hi jedy.. ummmh , I mean tweetie pie.. blowing bubbles.. ta'dah! you are first in commenting..😛..so pleased you enjoyed the ud.. yes.. more about Toofan next week.. do catch it tomorrow, much love and thanks for commenting ..hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: dilse14
hi hamlet
wonderful ud
dutta & naku eating time
he fooled nana he didn't recognize him😛
toofan ride i 'm waiting too😳
ud soon
ramdan mubarak to all🤗

helooo dilse.. great to see you😊, yes, dutta's nakhre, and naku,being his mamma at meal times, was quite memorable in Ltl1.. Well.. either nana is not all that smart ,or.. dutta has his wisdom.. coming from Bappa..humm.. Toofan kuch tu hulchul machaiye ga! read on his antics tomm.. thanks for reading and commenting dilse.. much love hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
awsemm update tasha alone time fab haye riding on horse fab

helooo partner, great to see you tammy... thujhe pata hai.. muhje aaj bhi yaad hai your emoticon wale comments.. main kya.. all of us loved them.. after some time, today ,I feel like thanking you again..for your ongoing support.. tammy.. wish you best of luck for greater glory.. hope all is going well in revisions..
thanks for your fab,one liner.. now about the horse that has created a stir with readers.. he will be continuing his antics tomm.. read it in your free time.. much love tammy..😊

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee
mein aa gai ...kaise nahin yaad rakhonge i 'm the unofficial acctant of LTL😆 ..25 pgs kya hum ne toh kahi thread dekhe hai hammiee ke ...there's more to come
hi naku, good to see you.. waise you have stuck to your role as page count person.. and you never forget to give praise to us FF writers.. thank you.. makes us feel valued..
loved the ud ..dutta & naku moments together really too 😳 ...they had the field clear with no nana & made most of the time ...having tractor ride ..eating out of hands ..its beautiful visual appeal😊
and you naku have summed up the scenes well.. liked what you said,"eating out of hands"..thank you..
nana didn't recognized our rishi bhau good..he like his work & sincerity ..kulte was singing peahens
nana, has obviously got plans to make use of rishi's plus points..
roops & AS meeting was so cute na ..dutta ke wait hai bas dulha & dulhan raaze hai
yeah I tried to keep in my mind roops ka catch phrase, so cute hai na?
ride on toofan was popular demand abhi full ride bakhi hai moonlight mein ..chup chupke milne ka maaza kuch aur he hai😊
humm ,pata hai.. Toofan ke masti.. will continue.. so do read on tommorrow..
as always u r amazinggg hammmiee
and you are haamaazing tooo..
is baar rasgulla for u ..dutta ke bahane hammiee is expressing 😉
baat sun.. meetha kuch zayeeda nehi ho gaya.. ? waise they are hard to resist.. so one or two.. khane mein koi, harj nehin.. thanku! .. for ras gulla and great comment.. much love naku!.. from hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: uwith
hi hamlet
awesome ud rishi bhau is our robinhood ..helping the villagers & with naku on toofan ride ..dutta & naku are enjoying ..ud soon😊

hi mirage, great to see you.. thanks for ramadan wishes..firstly..yeah its true rishi/robinhood of Ratna giri!😊, read on tomm about dutta, naku, and toofan.. thanks for reading and commenting.. much love hammie

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: mirage123
hi hamletfab ud dutta helped villagers & nana is beliving him as rishi .naku & dutta convo too good ud soon

hi mirage ,good to see you..😊.. so pleased you enjoyed the UD... will ud tommorrow.. read more about your favorite characters.. thanks for reading and commenting.. much love hammie