Hamlet's Revised Fanfic Collection Index - Page 21

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet

1st to comment😃

wonderful ud

dutta is closer to naku

he is helping the villagers too

very nice ud ...waiting to read further😊

Originally posted by: CUTE_SAPNA

@HAMMIE : very very entertaining update. 😃 not a single loophole is there.👏 that why u r the the ace writer and strength of forum👏⭐️. heartiest congrats for such an ace update. 😃👏👏 romantic and a endearing one.👏 a nice turn of events. and the most dutta and naku's "a love house".😳😳 i mean they both with thier love and the animals cum family members too. 😳😳1st there was only kajri. now we do have heera and sona also. more than that, 'toofaan'. luving it.😃👏 getting the idea, if this time naku abd dutta elopes that the toofan will help them , aweee, what a chweeet scene, dutta and naku on tooffan with kajri, woweee.😳😃 r8 now , me frightened, as regarding the reaction of kulte. i don't want him to be suspicious on d but i know this will happen.😕

spl note: deary hammie; what about ur' comment on my os ?😆. seriously , my strength as a newbie writer and the strength of the forum too.⭐️ today i have updated in full.😊 will be waiting for ur comments. luv u. 😊😊

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet

fab ud ..dutta & naku convo very nice ..baji & roops realible friends .dutta is helping villagers ..ud soon 😊

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee

helloo, naku, great to see you, and baat sun thanks so much for the 25 pgs best wishes.. you always keep a count on the pages,naku.. so sweet of you..

mein aa gai ...hammiee ud ko waqt par hamesha post karne ke liye shukriya ..u talented guys r fevicol of our forum..👏

thanks naku, yes I do agree that we writer guys.. try and are blessed to have readers like you self.. forever encouraging writers effort..😊

dutta admission naku is everything after his dad ...greedy bros are on back of his mind let them be there they need to learn lesson for forgetting the words they gave to their father 😡

but you know na naku, he is a pariwar type man..

naku will call dutta sahib even if he is farm hand ..dutta just forget it hammiee luvs u as dutta 😆

ohhh yes, actually.. i like him as dutta bhau.. the action man..

dutta got kheer in his tiffin made by his love & thankfully he gave a thought sometimes he rude with her

kheer tu waise.. baji ki fav pudding thi..

he never forgot the poor villagers

dutta buying stallion reminded me of LTL & dutta riding it will bring back all good memory ...this time make it double ride with his lady luv😳

ohhh yes.. those scenes from Ltl1 with horse were incredible.. both horse and rider looked magnificent.. kya din thi wo naku..

baji & roops never forget their beloved friend ...so cute na

ohhh naku , loved your reminder of "so cute na?.. i seem to have forgotton it for some reason

aise he dutta aur naku chupke ke milte rahe aur readers ko kya chaheye 😳

yes , its my love formula coming into play.. film usually hit ho jate hai

as always u r amazinggg hammiee

and you naku are ..hammazzing!

this time kheer for u 😊

ohhh loved the kheer.. very tasty.. loved the pista wali garnish.. thank you .. read the next up date tomorrow.thanks for the lovely comment,much love hammie

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet

superb ud!dutta is on shopping spree horse wht not ..he got nothing for naku .tasty kheer she deserve it .naku should complain i feel 😆ud soon

Originally posted by: sona89

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet

Awesome ud..A beautiful moment of Dutta & Naku .Dutta is busy with many tasks & he realized he can't neglect his love..Naku had a competition in kajri now toofan😆

Jedy its black stallion..But cute pic reminded of LTL.😊.Tasha takes a long ride on toofan..😉

Ud soon

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

Hey hammie...

Fab update...

Roops baaji like always awesome ..

Tasha together under same roof...

Tasha moments beautiful...

Thnx for pm...

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet

awesome ud ..dutta is smart & let see how he handles when confronted with nana..dutta & naku are magic together ..ride on toofan is most awaited part going by the demand😆 ..pls ud soon