Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III

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Radhika

@YellowBoots

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Posted: 10 years ago

#901

Updated.

Guys, I bunked office to update the story. Just kidding. I am supposed to be working from home and doing a terrible job of it until now 😆

Edited by YellowBoots - 10 years ago

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aquagal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#902

Res

*Unres*

You're updating the story while working from home and I'm working in office and reading this story.. 😉😆
There was so much going here. And well Poonam Raizada is one confused person. She wants to let the bygones be bygones but is not able to do that. Now I'm wondering who is this Mihir Gupta and from where is Shyam getting all the money if he is not working. He can't be Mihir Gupta, can he? I really don't want Khushi's life to get more messed up, also neither their (ArHi) love story.
Anjali can be super entertaining and annoying at times but she does understands few things like she said how Khushi has feelings for arnav if she is putting up with him even after all their not so pleasant history. Of course I want this to be true and so I like her because she is so much on their case. 😆
HP and his sponge ears. Man he is a detective sent by Poonam raizada to get all the gossip. But how come Poonam doesn't know about Payal & akash in that case?
Anand Raizada and Khushi are in front of each other - I'm sure Poonam Raizada is nearby too. She always is when these two are together or at a same place.
BTW what is the deal with Minu? Why is she so friendly with Khushi? Kya sach mein shadi ka khayal dil me aaya hai?
PS: I too like Arnav love their long drives😉

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akai

@akai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#903

Very nice update.

Now arnav dad had seen them?

What will happen?

Each chapter the mhir gupta, shyam and poonam are more confusing..

Why did anand raizada extract more money? Now it's a other question.

Waiting for your next update.

Please update soon dear..

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naaza_deen

@naaza_deen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#904

awesome update. loved it

i for once want to get into Anand Raizada's head so desperately. I somehow dont want to believe that he is a bad person. maybe my love for dad's.

will come back with more comments later.

PS: i just cant stop loving Arnav

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their non dates are getting better and lovely. its nice that the two enjoyed the dance , even though i just cant imagine arnav dance.

anjali ...i dont know what to make out of a sudden change in her. but i stil believe she is not harmful.

i dont know who mihir gupta is...i just hope it is not shyam coz then i thing both arnav's parents will have a hard time to accept khushi

poonam knows it all...she knows she has done something wrong too...but too proud to accept it or rather apologize?

i have this feeling that aman likes khushi. i just feel bad for him coz he is too lost and he really needs someone to hold on. just find him someone.

right now i just want to know anand's side of the story. he is like one difficult puzzle.

too early to say...but u leave us no choice...update soon.

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Mina420

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Posted: 10 years ago

#905

Wow,
this update brought a lot of information for us readers. Finally, Arnav knows about his father being in the hospital and we also got to know a little about what poonam thinks of khushi. I also find shyam's return to be a bit fishy but thigs are picking up speed. I guess, my first instinct was that poonam would see khushi and arnav together but now you gave us a nicce twist and cliffhanger with Anand turning up. Your every update leaves us pinning for more. Can't wait to see how things will move from here. I know you just updated but still, update soon.

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manusmithcl

@manusmithcl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#906

Oh.oh.. What's this new twist? Was thinking Poonam Raizada is gonna confront her...now what? You make us wait a hell lot of time to get the answer ... So amazed at your talent of writing dear.. Lovely chapters

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yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#907

Excellent chapter...arnav and khushi are progressing in direction of understand that they have some feelings for the other...it will still take time for them to acknowledge it for themselves...no out of now here Anand Raizada has come to the party...this is not at all expected...very well written update...

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Vaiga

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Posted: 10 years ago

#908

Wah... Each time ur turn of events, I mean ur choice of turns are really fantastic... I'm glad that it's pappu can't dance Sala n not some romantic swaying type song.

. They are good... But this felt better... With this arnav n khushi, things are different n I love it...

Till now, Anand raizada remained behind the curtain... Now the Mr. Mysterious has decided to make an entry... Looking forward to Anands side of story...

Anjali... Nk n Jun misunderstood ur motives last time I guess... Sorry that I was quite convinced about what they suggested.. So u have decided to give ur blessings ...So tIhink u r done with the "avoid trouble" stage...Tumpa is doing wonders right? .

Aman... U surely know that unlike what lavanya said, surely theirs was or at least is

not an unrequited saga.. So what's up with u n ur mom?? I wonder how did your phone conversation with arnav go last time?

Payal

It's high time you actually have a conversation with arnav... I mean I had a respect for you though I personally didn't like you in the beginning... Now that I'm started to like you, u r taking that respect part away...

Shyam..

Y did u actually ran away from ur wife n kid ??leaving them to fend for themselves?? Where were you?? Whatever be ur side of story, u need to work hard to earn the same love, trust n respect u had once...

Preeto.. I'm so looking forward to ur next meeting with khushi...

Mrs. Raizada... As anjali said, ur son has started to see the shades of Grey... So khushi is definitely not the thorn in his life... I wish u will also learn to give ur blessings over the course of time...

Arnav...

Mr. Wellwisher .. Are we?? Boy... Now almost all the things that worries u are concerned about khushi... Lol...

Khushi..

I thought u called anjali to ask about what to wear to the party... Stupid me.. U did the right thing by telling ur real reason... Lunch at bose's place... U, anjali n Tumpa..are wah...

Utneed time n space to get used to shyam right??

U are not a chuyimuyi??then good for you... Don't make tripati wait for so long... Give back his "no" which he gave u last time

.. N give the news to the "woh ladka" ... Only if you want to give cheap meal treat to a sane person...

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ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#909

awesome chapter...i just want to see their feeling come forefront but i know it will take time..but your story never bore us while waiting for their love to bloom