Arjun-Draupadi FF:Shubh Punah Milan#3|Part 69|23/2 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Sadh123

First of all a big congratzzz on this new thread 👏 well deserved after the immense effort u have put..

So here u go mera biggiiieee comment..

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This chapter bought out the raw pain of yagya that was suppressed in the last birth.. it is usually assumed that silence is the loudest scream and sometimes the biggest solution to all problems, all difficulties.. yet in arjun's case it proved to be his biggest defeat and in yagya's case it was her biggest curse..

Yagya felt she can't reach his shadow even, when arjun was yearning to give all his love to her.. I loved how he found solace in her shadow if not her.. how distance gives pain, yet acts as the catalyst to unite two yearning hearts that were deprived of love, companionship and passion..

So for this chapter : PAIN s the rarest yet truest color of LOVE.. and yeah I could feel yagya's raw and hidden pain..

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I loved the line where u had mentioned how yagya's wishes never get fulfilled even when she fulfilled her dear govind's wishes..

But yep arnjun will be thanking his parth for making it happen.. the much expected confrontation took place and wow it was mind blowing..

And do u expect words of appreciation? If so am.sorry sakhi I can't give u any.. Since ur update has bound me speechless.. I don't think any word can even match up to ur brilliance.. and if I write any word also I feel it will taint the pureness of ur chapter.. I know u must have completely live through and experienced to write this chapter.. so poetically framed..

Questions, answers and silence.. all these words sound like oxymoron.. if u take one, the other contradicts it..

Yes yagya s right in every word she uttered and she s not at fault though I don't know why she was held as a pawn n the hands of fate even when she had the almighty as her guide and friend.. and all this just because drupad asked for.. I do wish the gods were little gentler on her or at least given her his support and his words..

And yeah the pain beheld in arjun's silence should have been killing.. when ur hands are tried by the evil enemy called fate, u r helpless and stand their cursing your fate and praying that your beloved doesn't lose her hope, her Will and her fire..

That s all I can tell sakhi, rest u have written and even my words won't do justice to ur writing..

So for this chapter: SILENCE is the voice of a cursed fate and answering it is impossible..

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Okay am giving the next two updates ka comment here.. otherwise it will become an update from.my side.. jus kidding!!

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Finally the whole world could see the love arjun had for his beloved panchali..jise dikane ki mauka hi nahi mila use.. his unspoken words, his every action, his path, and his silence all are defined today.. they r his ways of showing love for her which many could not understand and blamed him even though he only acted upon his karma and it was not in his power to change the fate.. yet I loved how he had laid his love bare in front of her to see,hear and experience and bask in the feeling of love..

The confession which yagya was waiting since when is finally there..that too at the moment when her hope was dangling on a very thin and a dangerous rope.. I loved how arjun pulled the strings back n place though it meant giving pain to himself by freeing her..

U portrayed the two sides of true love that was always hidden and buried beneath the depths of sorrow that was unceremoniously piled upon these two..

So my word: Love is welcoming the pain and undergoing it too in the process of not hurting his beloved..

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Here u go.. yagya u rock.. (in ref to draupadi) ;) finally the two beating hearts decide to synchronize together to their beats and dance as one and experience the pain together so that they can dissolve all ill feelings..

Both will definitely not let go of their love that has bounded and secured them n a knot that will remain strong till they r together..

Finally some lighter and happier moments for the couple to breathe and love than worry..

Hug her as tight, not to let her go at all arjun..she has been etched everywhere as urs..so make it true lad..

Kabab mein haddi.. but yeah those two people madhav and subhi(as in subadra?) Made sure this true and very intense love sees light finally..

Great going fire.. u rocked all these four updates.. they r truly ur best girl... ur true potential is finally out.. though I feel there is still few hidden which I would love to unravel..

P.S: deal yaadh hain?😉