ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #3 : Thread 4 added on Pg 1 (28.10.15)

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yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#551

Awesome chapters 23 and 24...thanks for the PM

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Apeter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Such a awesome story.. Please update soon

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Apeter

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Just found this story... And it is awesome .. Please update the next part soon

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Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Updt plzzz.. It's been so longgg

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poornimababani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#555

hi, i am a new reader, well can't call myself that also because i came across this story of yours about 10 months back you had updated till when Payal was suppose to arrive and then i lost the story ,i didn't remember the name or the writer and was since then was hunting for the story i remembered it in tits and bits so just couldn't find it . just 2 days back i found the story and i read it all at one go . you write very well and have enjoyed the story and looking forward to the update , also wanted to know if you have a blog so i can read more of your stories . thank you for such a lovely story . will wait for a reply . ty

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Ishque

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Posted: 10 years ago

#556

A wonderful update and an unexpected twist I thought he was waiting to hear from her

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sweety421

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Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Wonderful dear...
M so glad to see Arnav relaxed and chilled out...!!
It was a pleasant sight...
What surprised meh about this update was Lavanya...!!!
It was sad the way she cried... Akash deserved her bashing...!! Finally they both know the truth as well as the worth of the enigma named Arnav...!!!
Superb writing buddy...
Great update...

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tuli_jayee

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Good to see that you have started updating TTs. Firstly really sorry for commenting late. I read the chapter last night only, but got the chance to comment now.

he update is as usual very beautiful. So, Aakash knew about Lavanya's feelings ?? & still he chose that Riya instead of his childhood best friend. He made her misplace Arnav's files & what not. How could he actually do that ?? Obviously, the mess that he has created, it's his duty now, to clear everything. & good that finally he is taking initiatives.

Arnav knew what happened but seemed like, he didn't know about Lavanya's feelings. He thought, she was doing all these for her friend only. It must be very much heartbreaking for him to know that his twin hated him so much.

Edited by tuli_jayee - 10 years ago

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sillykudi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wooohhh am the 1st one to comment...dude it was awesome!!!Finally confrontations and all and arnav am in love with his character and the way Khushi is supporting him and the way they are just naturally rocking together I really loved lavz "do you know how it feels when arnav bhai hugs me..." waala part..!!

Edited by sillykudi - 10 years ago