ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #3 : Thread 4 added on Pg 1 (28.10.15)

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#531

This one was fabulous! So no more hidden secrets between arshi!
Gawd! How difficult it must've been to have so many secrets!
But most difficult thing is to reveal them! He he!
Now they are one! And what's with another impending truth!
Hope they sort it out soon!

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#532

Amazing update they way arnav showed his emotionas whe khushi told him she had been in love with him since a long white ago was just amazing seeing arnav in this update to when the story had first start I can feel khushi had done him good changes
Ps I'm really sorry for the late comments on the update AD has been really busy sorry
PM when you updat next

Edited by hiuytlm - 10 years ago

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#533

such a lovely update

loved how u described everyones feelings through out update

finally Arnav knows everything

looking forward to when they get back to reality n Arnav talks to Aman n Payal😆

hoping he teases them a little u know pretending to be furious etc😆

felt happy how khushi handled Arnavs guilt

n explaining to him that her life without him wouldn't have been an better

the poor guy was hating himself so much

loved how they both were reading each others mind

looking forward to next update

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

n will cya when u get back

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Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#534

so good.. finally both said it out

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#535

wow.. It has been an awesome story so far.. Infact awesome would be an understatement...

Its too good to be defined in words, I m really very glad that you did send me the link to read these, thanks a ton for this, or I would have missed being a part of this story..

your both the on going stories have kept me glued to read ut till the very end leaving all the other works aside..

Waiting for the next update.. To actually see the reaction of others when they come to face the fact that arnav knows everything.. It will be fun to watch afterall the ball is in arnav's court now..

Continue soon and please do p.m me

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sushan

@sushan

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#536

Hi my apologies first of all , I just missed your updates normally i keep t track of stories i follow but please don't think otherwise i really rank your stories very high and specially this one has become very close to my heart just that AD was and still keeping me away form IF since almost 2 and half month now. I read your note no I am not asking you to send me PM I think we as reader should take some responsibility and keep track of stories we love especially when I know already that sending PM is time consuming so no I want you to just write and I will stalk you😉 Just a request if and when you move your stories to blog please keep me in the list

Now coming to story girl you got me tempted to visit Goa I have never been there now I will have one more destination in my list when ever I visit India next time and pics were added bonus. With this beautifully planned trip anybody will for forget their worries . People say we draw energy from nature ,from watching sunrise and remain close to nature and recharge yourself to fight the world again . This is so true and I have personally experienced it so no wonder Khushi got him close to nature and I am so glad that Arnav is able to relate to nature and recharging himself.

Khushi's confession was written beautifully and I love how you put Arnav's reaction to it . Anybody would be awestruck . When all these years he thought he was alone there was this girl who was molding herself in his love in hope that he would love her back some day.

This concept is so overwhelming and amazing and awesome and I ran out of words😳 with my limited vocab.

Can't wait for the next part would love to see how this recharged Arnav will deal with situations

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happy

@lovearshi01

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#537

Awesomeee
Loved it, finally no secrets

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happy

@lovearshi01

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#538

Awesomeee
Loved it
finally no secrets between them

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1053117

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#539

Awesomely written story 👏⭐️👏

Loved it <3

Edited by .HPCraZe. - 10 years ago

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#540

Thank you for pm.

Hope you remember you had sent a pm with links of your stories. But I was holidaying, so could not go through your stories. But after coming back, I got time to go through this story of yours.

This story of yours is truly fabulous.👏 Its intense... You have beutifully described Arnav-Khushi's feelings. Its clear that they are totally in love with the other. There are no secrets. They have gone through hell in the past, but with the help of love, they have both healed.😃

Only Lavanya's secret is yet to come out in open.

Hope so Arnav-Khushi's love blossoms & there is only happiness in their life.

Will love to receive pms for your stories. Will go through "Like Never Before" once I get time.⭐️

Please update quickly.