ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #3 : Thread 4 added on Pg 1 (28.10.15) - Page 55

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh man!!! What is ths??? A wonderful excellent piece of work?
Is ths for real?? i wish it was!!
Man! U had me glued to it!
M soo glad tht u gave me the honor to read ur masterpiece!!
Thanx a ton for the pm! I would hv been soo unlucky otherwise...😳
Arnav khushi they are soo into each other soo pure..soo... Intense... A beautiful dreamland...❤️
Arul n arnav's bond is ahmaazng shooo cute...
Thier trust in arnav... Khushi's submission to arnav..thier care for each other evrythng jst evrythng left me in awee...
In short i loved it...
Plzzz continue sooon!!
Love u for writing n sharing it wid me...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanx for sending me link of this story
beautiful story
love it
plz send me pm when u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi!!!!!!!!!!
Am a new reader
A friend recommended your FF
I read the entire FF in one go
After each chapter various thoughts ran through
I thought I'd comment this or that
But after reading all am STUNNED
How did you do it all??????
The emotions
the plot
the richness of characters
the relationship each one shares
the distinct story each one has
the way they feel and react
And the most important
How you've woven all into this beautiful FF
Each character linked so beautifully and skilfully
that one wants them to be one not separate from each other
Beautifully Woven👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its just too good di..i loved it.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is so awesome!!! Loved the way khushi made Arnav believe her. He deserves to be loved. Waiting for the next update desperately...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wooow..fab update n luvvv kushi for making her arnav believe in her...totally awesome...
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Posted: 10 years ago
finaly my first ever comment on TTS. Chavi, realy sorry for taking so long. Read all 24 parts in one go frm last 2 week. Marvelous ff chavi, i just love concept of story. Khushi is actualy taken strength from arnav to be strong and to face all storm with the way he live his life, and becoming her mentor, to make her strong when she lost her precious person and now she is there as a strength to the very same mentor becoming his anchor, she is trending him, with love and care. Giving him what he lost in past 3 years.

Love khushi and her selfless love for arnav, she is wonderful lover, who is determine with all her ways to make her love happy and bring his lost charm back.

Arnav is amazing person here, the way he is fighting inner turmoil, still trying to smile through it for his di, and nani. He is even father figure, friend, philosopher, brother, and ofcourse mamu for his little nephew, when he actual nt less than any lost child. And at last he is realy become child when he is with his love, his khushi. Taking all her pampering and loving like a craving child.

Riya, more than hate i pity her. She such an obsessed, or may i have to say she is worst than any drug addict person. Bt all this is happen because of her own deeds, and now she testing it.

My most fav character is rahul, what an amazing personality u have portrayed here. A husband who is nt having any fault seperated from his wife and son and still strong and understanding enough to stay positive. A father not just for his own blood bt for his brother in law, always mentor and pillar of strength for arnav. And a son in law cum son for the house which is more than home for him, frm where he need to go away coz of third person.

What should i say about payal and aman, u always amaze me chavi with the way u show unbelievable friendship bond.
Love lawanya as well, after going through such cruel heart break she is came back for arnav with strong and determine aim to give him what he deserve. Akash, i love the way, finaly he took stand for family against Riya and took decision to divorce her. Hoping to see him more fighter for his family.

My most favourite update was family reunion, how beautifuly portrayed every emotions. All include khushi fear,payal's assurance, akash fight, riya's anger, arul, arnav and nani's happines and lastly rahul and anjali's unbreakable love, all just fabulous.

Waiting for new chappy and riya's exit eagerly.

Ps. Sorry again for taking too long and for such long comment.
Hope i didnt disappoint u. Waiting for ur reply,
and lastly, thank u for giving me chance to read beautiful creation of yours.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Where is d next update of dis story.?
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazingly beautiful beautiful update
many thanks for pm and apologies on late reply
was busy in study and all
sorry...
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the update. Love how they have opened up to each other.

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