ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #3 : Thread 4 added on Pg 1 (28.10.15)

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#521

Loved the conversation between Arnav and Khushi...finally all the secrets are out...it is the hardest thing to digest.

Will be waiting patiently and take your time dear.

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Peda

@Peda

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Posted: 10 years ago

#522

Wow!!! Arnav seriously is a rock. Staying focused even though you know you being overwhelmed is no easy feat.

I really do hope they don't get intimate just yet cause in my humble opinion that would just cloud things a bit.

I really think Arnav needs time to truly assimilate and digest everything before he moves forward.

I am glad that no more secrets exist cause a relationship without trust is just heading for winter storms.

I hope Kushi understands if he wants space cause she is in a vulnerable place as well.

A very emotional chapter.

Definitely requires a re-read.

Till next time

Take care

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samatha

@samathanune

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Posted: 10 years ago

#523

Well.dats a lovely update n I hope khushi told all the truth n no more secrets even unintentionally.lots of love.

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#524

Hey Chavi, I'm so sorry but lately my comments had been delayed. And let me tell you it not just for yours but all the stories I follow.

Well about the updates. Last to chappy were the one I waited since you revealed Khushi's love for Arnav. I so wanted to know since than how will Arnav react up on learning the truth, up on knowing Khushi's secret. And let me tell you it was precisely the way I expected.

Having lived all of his teenage and early adulthood doubting his worth for the love of his family for himself and being the witnessed of loosing the one he loved or loves wether permanently in terms of his parents or tempererly in terms of her jiju and Akash. It's a big shock for him to understand and realize that he has been loved all his life and to the extent he could never imagine.

But I was worried after the last part of chapter 23 and the beginning of 24 when he questioned Khushi about how her life must have turned had she not met him. And there you surprised me. I dint expect or rather see it int he previous chapter that how that one incident from childhood had affected Khushi, how Arnav's encouraging words helped Khushi.

I had my fears when I had read about how much Khushi had done for Arnav behind his back, how much she has indulged herself in his liking that she herself had none but your update alleviated my fears. So thanks for that.

And I truly loved there getaway. Zindagi namilegi dobara for arshi. But tell me does those beautiful places truly exist in Goa?

Edited by rk2127 - 10 years ago

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sillykudi

@sillykudi

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#525

Freaking hell girl...I had my jaws open while reading the update...like seriously how do you it...how can you perfectly write down their emotions their reactions their every damn thing...I salute you..."ohhh she is simply awesome" i had this in mind after reading every other line of this update...and insanely miraculous boon part totally stole my heart and ohhh even "which is your favorite colour" it was the best out-of-nowhere-yet-the-perfect-line-for-the-situation...good going girl just keep it up as always

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

#526

Simply mind blowing update. ..

Khushi so tenderly spoke the whole thing..

Arnav is the reason for her exitence. He gave meaning to her life n made her what she is today truly Arnav's khushi. .

LI've each word to the T what khushi n Arnav said to each other...

Thank god Arnav didn't push her.. like the fact how well he accepted all.. n didn't feel guilty...

He understood picture abhi baki hai the way he asked let's get over it...

Wow La didn't tell khushi also so kuch respect for Arnav. ..

At the end their confession was beautiful. ..

You through your writing bring the passion n love to a new heights. ..

P.S. - have a wonderful fruitful office trip... Be ready to give long LNB n TTS update

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@svg98

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Posted: 10 years ago

#527

Awesome update..
Khushi is so in love with Arnav..
Like totally she consider Arnav her soulmate..
Arnav is so surprised that so many people follow him and look upto him..
But he truly is an amazing person..
He took care of everything without once thinking about himself getting hurt..
Their chemistry is as usual mind blowing..
Really want to know now what happened with Lavanaya..
And want to read everybody reaction when they will came to know that Arnav knows everything..
Beautifully written..
Cant wait to read more..
Updates soon..

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#528

Hey thanks for the pm..Loved the update . Beautiful. Sorry fr the late comments was held up. Arnav has this insecurity complex that is not allowing him to love khushi or accept her completely. Beautiful description of feelings. Update soon

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#529

Amazing update loved it <33 loved the way you portray their emotions beautifully done loved how you describe Arnav insecurity n his reaction the truth n loved how Khushi reassure him that if it wasn't for her she would've been a complete different person n how he save her n how he is her strength n power something he doesn't believe he is or have the slight imagination that he can change some one life n even tho she did follow his choices she added her style to I n became her own person but glad all the truth is out n their is no secrets between them loved their passionate moment n now that Arnav knows the whole truth wonder how things will be different when he returns home n waiting to know Lavanya story n now that their is no secrets between them everything will fall in place beautifully written cant wait for the next update thanks for the pm