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Meena

@chotidesi

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#641

This first scene reminds me of DDLJ, except with our favorite couple- what could be better? 😆 But there's a difference- Khushi's faith in Arnav. She doesn't believe even for a second that he could have taken advantage of her state. And that she wouldn't regret it. Even if the house has crumbled, the foundation is still there- and that's all you need to build it back up again.

I loved the entire scene before and after her shower. You can just feel her exhaustion. That feeling that we've all felt so many times- the 'I am just done with this", the heaviness in your heart... it's so relatable. And then you slip from that heaviness to a lightness, a warmth that gives us all hope that they will be okay. It may take time, but they will be. I just know it.

I cracked up about the driving. I just couldn't stop the snickering. Those phrases sound so ah... familiar, don't they? 😆

But that silence- uff. So... it just made my breath catch a little, when they lean in and kiss each other. It was such a powerful moment- again, that little burst of light that unfailingly shows up at the end of a tunnel is there. I love that Khushi took what she wanted, without holding herself back. I can see those walls crumbling, and for once, this crumbling is the good kind.

That ending- my god. I was not expecting that rush of emotion. Khushi sounds afraid of these memories, and I can feel her pain as her eyes lock on that doll.That need for fresh air, the heart stopping flood of memories that you can't seem to stop... oh, I wish I could reach out and give her a hug.

I loved this chapter. There's so much that gives them reason to fight in this, but that ending... you did a really, really great job with her pain, the emotions that come from an unexpected trigger. It was beautifully done.

Love always,

Choti.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#642

Our Dream Girl is here!

Right on time as always

Unres for a Super Fabulous update ;)

That image of Khushi crying in her sleep while a pained Arnav held her was heartbreaking. But Arnav needed to see that to understand the depth of her desolation. And then the lovely switch to teasing! But always with the underlying respect. He would never take advantage of her and she knows it. It's something that's a given in their relationship. Isn't that absolutely essential? And then the direct "I never asked you to leave our bedroom". Sigh ... Arnav you have promises to keep and miles to go ... before the fair maiden is convinced.

Societal proprieties are more important for Khushi's mother than actually wanting her daughter there for a milestone event. I'm glad Arnav cut her off before she could rhapsodise over Payal any more. It appears that a son-in-law who's being feted is more acceptable to her. Someone to preen over with her acquaintances. Sadly, too many people of that ilk inhabit our world.

Clever Arnav to grab this opportunity to spend time with Khushi. And I'm hoping Khushi's prophecy of this being the last time will not come true.

An impatient Arnav in a shopping mall and car park was hilarious. But an understanding Arnav, who senses her vulnerability and doesn't let her say something she may regret is the one I love. That whole scene in the car was so beautifully written. As you said, tenderness radiating off in waves from his entire being.

You've brought out Khushi's emotions so well. That feeling of oscillating between I am doing the right thing' and Am I doing the right thing'. A very tumultuous time for her. But if she's asking these questions it's a step in the right direction.

But, what was triggered off by seeing the doll? Her reaction to it clearly means it was a significant something. Something that once again solidifies her determination to part ways with her Arnav.

Once again you leave me waiting eagerly for the next update ❤️

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maina95131

@maina95131

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Posted: 10 years ago

#643

Each update provides new insight into not only their relationship but their relationship with others. Khushi's relationship with her mother- constantly being compared to her sister. Arnav's relationship with Khushi's parents- how they did not approved of him.

Oh how I can relate to Arnav's frustration with drivers. Sometimes the only thing I can say is "Really"?

So what secret is khushi hiding? Can't wait for that to be "Revealed"

So here is a song that comes to mind for this update:

Hum Pyaar Hai Tumhare Dildaar Hai Tumhare
Hum Se Mila Karo Hum Se Mila Karo
Koi Shikwa Agar Ho Aur Shikayat Agar Ho
Hum Se Gila Karo Par Tum Mila Karo
Jaan Maine Bhi Pyaar Kiya Hai
Haan Maine Bhi Pyaar Kiya Hai
Hum Yaar Hai Tumhare Dildaar Hai Tumhare
Hum Se Mila Karo Hum Se Mila Karo
Koi Shikwa Agar Ho Aur Shikayat Agar Ho
Hum Se Gila Karo Par Tum Mila Karo
Jaan Maine Bhi Pyaar Kiya Hai
Haan Maine Bhi Pyaar Kiya Hai
Hum Yaar Hai Tumhare Dildaar Hai Tumhare
Hum Se Mila Karo Hum Se Mila Karo

Kaise Main Bhula Doon Woh Beete Huve Pal
Har Lamha Sataaye Woh Guzra Huva Kal
Kaise Mein Bataaon Yeh Mushkil Raaz Hai
Kal Aaye Na Kabhi Jo Hai Woh Aaj Hai
Meri Jaan Pass Aake Bol Do Muskurake
Chup Na Raha Karo Chup Na Raha Karo
Koi Shikwa Agar Ho Aur Shikayat Agar Ho
Hum Se Gila Karo Par Tum Mila Karo

Phoolon Ki Vaadiyaan Barfile Raastein
Hai Jaane-Tamanna Hai Tere Vaste
Phoolon Mein Hai Chupan Sardi Mein Agan Hai
Saason Mein Raat Din Yeh Kaisi Jalan Hai
Sarad Thandi Hawaein Keh Rahi Hai Fizayein
Yun Na Jala Karo Yun Na Jala Karo
Koi Shikwa Agar Ho Aur Shikayat Agar Ho
Hum Se Gila Karo Par Tum Mila Karo
Hum Yaar Hai Tumhare Dildaar Hai Tumhare
Hum Se Mila Karo Hum Se Mila Karo
Koi Shikwa Agar Ho Aur Shikayat Agar Ho
Hum Se Gila Karo Par Tum Mila Karo
Haan Maine Bhi Pyaar Kiya Hai.

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Skyfall

@Skyfall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#644

What a wonderful update!

I loved the light heartedness at the beginning of the chapter, it clearly demonstrated the comfort/ease that married couples naturally have. However, as the chapter went on, you could clearly see the cracks in their relationship and how hard it actually is to keep the lightheartedness going when their clearly a wall built by Khushi.

I always had a feeling that Khushi was hiding something, as she was so quick to always make sure her wall was built, through every situation and not wonder what if? I'm so curious to see what it actually is.

I really loved the car scene between them, you could clearly see the restraint Khushi has been showing and how a human being can only control themselves until they reach breaking point.

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#645

Jigs, another amazingly written update. 👏

You know Jigs, this story is becoming a hit day by day because somewhere every person reading it can connect and relate it to their married life and to the challenges they have faced too as married couples. How many times people have come across situations like a forgotten anniversary or birthday or work pressures which have led to less spending time with spouse and at home and ultimately how we won over these challenges with hardwork and perseverance.

Glad that Arnav has started his attempts to win his wife back and to save their marriage.

But it is not an easy task ahead. Years of loneliness has made Khushi build strong walls around her heart and it is going to take a lot of hard work from Arnav's side to break those walls.

Got a peek into Khushi's parents and their attitudes. Interestingly strange!!!!

Now what was that last part!!! Did Khushi have a miscarriage sometime??? Jigs, now my heart is hurting more and more for her. 😭

A song dedicated to my favourite couple:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qju5MTF_-No[/YOUTUBE]

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#646

Was dreaming & I missed my spot 😡..
Actually no, I made it

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The summary chapter - atleast that is my title for this chapter. A perfect blend of what it could/should be and what it can/should not be. As you originally promised, this was the perfect roller coaster I was so eager for. Between all the smiles and frowns reading this chapter, my face is so thankful to you for the massage it got😃.

You probably hear this a lot with your talent, but I cannot stop from restating how truly amazed I am with your mastery of writing those in and out moments. I am especially loving all those tripolar Khushi moments where her thoughts, feelings and actions are in triangular fight.

To get to the glorious days, you have to fight through the bad days. And how can I say how much glad I am that the fight back from Arnav has finally begun. Who knew "sex on the roof" not only has side effects but also effects the people on the side😉.

The mutual teasing, the faith and the trust, the reading of the minds, the moving to the room, the rub on the back, the self-realization of being an idiot, the grocery shopping, and the uninhibited laugh - yes, you were so right when you said "It felt right".

So we got a bit of the in-laws/parents, Anjali and Payal. Why do I already feel uneasy about Payal and the parents. But, Anjali seems to be a darling. But, if that trip can get the relationship closer then, "saath khoon bhi maaf"😊.

Lastly, it's a bad habit you are getting into, hanging us high and dry at the end with every chapter😔. I know, I know, overdose of good medicine is still not good for you. But you my dear, please take your time, "...non c' fretta (there is no rush). I have nothing but time... for you."...hamesha.

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crazyff-fan

@crazyff-fan

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#647

awesome update... Arnav surely trying to correct the mistakes he did... why am I getting a feeling that khushi might had a miscarriage...and arnav is not even aware of it...

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 10 years ago

#648

Lovely Banner 👏👏.

Arnav & Kushi remembering both their good and bad memories is very emotional. This update shows glimpses of how things deteriorated and drifted them apart year after year. Clearly Arnav abandoned his home and wife for years. It is high time for him to fix things before it is too late. Kushi is lonely and craving for baby. I really don't know if she couldn't conceive or she miscarried or Arnav not interested having his own child but Arnav seems to like his niece and nephew. I hope Arnav will soon understand what upset Kushi in the store and they talk about it.

Kushi is confused and don't want to lose her love but can't live in false faade anymore. She don't want her parents to know about her marital problems and want to paint perfect couple picture but don't want to try working on her and Arnav relationship anymore. Also she wanted Arnav to move on but can't see him with another woman. Arnav has tough job ahead. He has to revamp their good old memories and bring back chirpy Kushi.

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deepthi

@deepsdspeed

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#649

ohh dis is more than awesome..yayy i love dis arnav..and nw im sure everything is gonna be alright..👏

glad that arnav resolved to resolve this issue..why was khushi looking at the baby doll? i smell something here..something happened to her baby? arnav dint knew this?cant wait to know what it is..

and need not to say i hate it when u stop and make me wait..😕 but i love you and now as u lost the challenge any ways looong chapter to banta hai..😉

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#650

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Looks like Kushi had a miscarriage..thats the first thought came into my mind while reading her reaction to the doll..how come Arnav didn't sense her discomfort and comfort her?

Arnav is trying his best to repair things..hope he succeeds...what will happen at Kushi's parents anniversary party? so eager to know.. they never approved him? bcos of his dad's history or he is half Italian? does desi parents don't approve architect as a profession? he event went to MIT..!! thats in desi parents approval college list I guess ;-)

Arnav missed taking shower with Kushi..hayeee..I want them to restart it..playful Arnav..muaahhh..loved him but he has done too many mistakes to go to second honeymoon so soon..Kushi won't give in so easily..btw he never spoke about ending Vortex deal with Wakefield..guess Aman will spill the beans

wonderful update as usual Jigs..am already craving for more..

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