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bellacoolio

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Posted: 10 years ago

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That was such an emotional update! I could feel Khushi's loneliness! Such is the power of your writing! Beautiful writing Jigs. I loved the seven steps bit a lot! Looking forward to tomorrow. Hope to read and respond right away without life getting busy!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Dammit the woman had to have the last word, this B**** wants her husband and wont tske no for an answer, and is just feeding her lies so she will become the shrewish wife thus moving them even further apart. Why do I get the feeling that although his mother passing away was the beginning, this Alisha had lit the match that started the separtion?. Im l8ving your writing jigs... although I might move over to the blog... really fed up of these pop ups.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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OMG! Tat was tear jerkingly beautiful. First the scene where Lavu asks Khushi if she has had sex on the roof! And he thought that Khushi was talking about their private life! I am assuming its some coctail, similar to the one on the beech 😉 hillarious him having to cover her mouth lest she let out any more secrets. But thd last chapter was so sad, seven steps their seven pheras, to start their life. Her then asking him to stay the night in their bed. His last words to her.. God I hope he makes her see sense! Well done Jigs absolutely brilliant! X

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Manasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arshi67
Not long to go before we know whether it was a dream

I don't want Khushi to think ki sapna mera toot gaya, but ...

Sach Hai Ke Dil To Dukha Hai
Hamne Magar Socha Hai
Dil Ko Hai Gham Kyon
Aankh Hai Nam Kyon
Hona Hi Tha Jo Hua Hai
Us Baat Ko Jaane Bhi Do
Jiska Nishaan Kal Ho Naa Ho
Har Pal Yahan Je Bhar Jiyo
Jo Hai Sama Kal Ho Naa Ho