ArHi SS: Inertia [Completed]

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rashmi

@anamika00

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Posted: 10 years ago

#331

beautiful story...👏⭐️

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Pompomgirl

@Pompomgirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#332

i am in love with your writing!

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Mints23

@mints23

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#333

Stumbled upon this story on this Sunday morning... with bright summer sun shining outside my window... What a beauty this one is. A simple sweet story of summer's and growing up... yet it has been exceptionally well crafted and your writing makes it especial. I loved Khushi... her thoughts, her straight-forwardness and have totally enjoyed the graph of her growing up within the span of this summer months. Your description of art and archeology had my interests piqued... and being in the art field myself, I have immense love for history and the stories behind what we see. The bond between Payal and Khushi, their friendship, their sisterhood... the differences creeping within their relationship slowly... the characters of Lavanya and Arnav... everything was so beautifully built up. By the end of it, I was having a contented smile on my face, indifferent to the summer heat around me. Thank you for this wonderful... happy reading moments! 🤗

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Kiara

@perfectpiscean

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#334

Loved the whole story, but especially the ending! I think the best part of your story is the fact that its so relatable.. Each one of us has a Khushi and Payal in equal parts and probably all of us have been through what they have at some point in our life!

And, thanks for the little message at the end of the story. I did message a very dear friend of mine once upon a time.. I dont know if she will reply, and I dont know what she'll say. But I know I am happy just having reached out.

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Archana

@Archu61

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Posted: 10 years ago

#335

Loved it ,you kept it so real ,we all have dysfunctional relationships within our families ,and am glad that Payal and loyalty towards her .looking fwd to more such stories