**Thrill Ride** 'Full Circle-END!!' pg 71 - Page 39

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Posted: 18 years ago
great prithvis here 😆 y wasnt he jealous really cute part
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Posted: 18 years ago
loved it...cont soooooooooon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
ehy!1 so wht on earth is prithvi doing dre?? well he had better disappear widout causing any disruption..luvd the update..continue soon plz!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was sooooooooooo gud 😛

fight! fight! fight! 😆

cum on angad beat the shyt outta prithvi :p and take kripa.....dun 4get that 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
hmm i wonder wat prithvis doing there? i wonder if mishti had sumthing 2 do with him being there? n*e wayz awesome part!! continue soon i cant wait 2 noe wat happens next 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
"my roommates brother" musta really angered angad.. it angered me!!!! and i wasnt even told that!!!!

continue sooooonnnn!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part.... kool now its gunna be prithvi vs angad for kripa loll 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg! ok, now very honestly, this has got 2 b my most favrit, n d most intrestin part of d hole ff!!! omg i absolutly loved it! ak now, hav such a sweet relationship... but d bst bit has got to be d part where angad n pritvi face eachuva... i loved how u rote dey were 'sizin eachuva up' ok, im probly weird... but i fort dat woz jus.. lyk.. wow! 😆 i can toootttallllyy imagin them both doin dat...!! n awwwwwww, i loved dis part!! 2 good prakriti!!! n ur endin it soon?! omg, its sooo short, stil, wil continu readin ur other 1s.. n i know 4 a fact d new 1s gonna b evn bettr!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys,
i have a new part, thats ALMOST done. Ill have it up in about an hour. But im pretty sure it will suck as im REALLY not in the mood to write- Sanjaya's out of AI. 😭 So sry for the wait, and sry if its a sucky part.

x3 Prakriti
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Posted: 18 years ago

"Where are you?" I asked. I looked around. He stepped out of the shadows. His face was hard and cold. I was relieved to see him, and I ran and hugged him. He hugged me back tightly.

Once our hug was over, I took his hand and dragged him to Angad, who was waiting there patiently.

"Angad, this is Prithvi; Prithvi, this is Angad- my roommate's brother"

The two guys looked at each other, sizing the other up.

"Hey." Angad said graciously. Prithvi just stared at him with the same cold look.

"Alrighty then." Angad said. He turned to look at me, with a weird look on his face. "Ill see you later Kripa."

"Bye." I looked at him in an apologetic way; he shrugged and gave me a tiny smile. I watched him walk away, and then, when he was out of sight, I turned back to see Prithvi staring at me.

"What are you doing here?" I said, trying to seem enthusiastic,

"You told me about Mishti and her surprise so I wanted to surprise you too…" he said.

"Oh. Cool. Well um, it's late right now. Lets get you checked in to a hotel and then we'll talk tomorrow." I said,

He frowned. "Why can't we talk right now?"

"Because I have an early shift tomorrow. And I need to go to bed." O replied.

His frowned seem to become even more pronounced. "I don't have money for a motel room; I just have enough money for gas to get me back home" he looked at me for a second, "What about your room?"

Oh my god. Even though Prithvi and I had been going out for a while, we never went past second base. And right now, was definitely not the time; I was so confused with all my feelings.

"Cant. Boys aren't allowed in girls dorms." I lied. It was a totally free dorm- anyone of any gender went in and out all the time.

"Oh. Then ill just have to sleep in my car." He said, sulking. I could tell he was trying to make me feel guilty.

"Kripa!" I look behind me and saw Alliyah walking towards me with Josh. After the introductions were over, I looked at Alliyah and explained the whole sleeping arrangement problem.

"Oh. Angad and Cole could take him in." Being Alliyah, she didn't wait for a reply and just went ahead and called Angad. After a few minutes she smiled brightly and looked at us.

"You're in. Here, Josh will drop you off Prithvi." She took my arm, waved to Prithvi and dragged me inside the dorm.

"Ill see you tomorrow!" I called out.

"Uh bye" he called back, seeming uncertain.

000

After the surprising night, I slept peacefully, and then went to work at another crazy shift. After the shift ended at 4, I took Prithvi and gave him a tour of Thrill Ride!, as well as of the surrounding areas. We hung out the rest of the time, and he just talked about working, and of course, this Tess chick. What was with him? I let it go.

At around 7, I asked Prithvi if we could go to the party.

"What party?" He asked.

"Well, there's this party that we have every Wednesday."

"That's messed up; why would anyone want to party in the middle of the week?"

I signed. "Well that's the whole reason; it's like a hump party- to get over the week. Kinda like a stress reliever."

He frowned. "Whatever. Where is it?"

"At Angad's and Cole's."

"They have a house?" he asked.

"Well, not really. They're just kinda watching it for the owner."

He got a weird look on his face "Oh. How many times have you been there?"

"A few." I knew why he was asking; I just didn't want to explain anything to him. Just then, thank god, my phone rang. It was Alliyah, and she was waiting for us at the dorm entrance.

"Alright, let's go. Alliyah's waiting at the dorm." I got up, and he followed reluctantly.

000

We were at the party now, and it was kinda winding down. I was having fun as always, talking to everyone. I had to introduce Prithvi to everyone too, but he was jus being a total idiot, and wasn't saying anything to anyone. It was really starting to get to me. But the thing that was annoying me even more was the fact that Angad wasn't paying any attention to me; not even one smile. Ugh. I looked over and saw him on the couch with this one slut. How dare he! He must've felt me staring, cuz he looked up at me. I was about to smile, but Prithvi grabbed my hand and started dragging me out the back door and into the beach. We sat on the sand, and watched the sand rolling around. After a few minutes of uncomfortable silence, Prithvi started talking.

"I hate long distance relationships." He started, "and I don't think I can carry this one any further." We both sat in silence, and it took me a few minutes for all this to sink in.

"But I really like you Kripa." He looked at me, and took my hand. "So that's why im giving you a choice. Come back with me."

"Or?" I asked.

"Stay here."

"If I stay here, then we're over?" I questioned shakily.

"Yes."

That's all he said.

"No."

That's all I said.

"Fine." He got up and left. Where he went, I didn't know. My vision was blurred. I felt a sharp pang in my chest, and I felt hot tears down my cheeks.

"Kripa?"

It was Angad.

That's the part! Although you're comments were amazing, I couldn't continue yesterday as I fell sick. I still am, but since Im better I decided to continue. Im sorry the part was so bad; im in a horrible mood, because Sanjaya's out from American Idol. ; [Please comment! 15 as always and I won't count any that just say good part or something of that nature. Tomorrow, I will reply to all the previous comments, (which were amazing btw) and a new (small) part as well if I get good enough comments. Please do keep commenting!

x3 Prakriti

Edited by prakriti - 18 years ago

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