My Rishbala & Maaneet combined fanfiction

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Jasmine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

where r the commetns which disheartened u?

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

My beloved : Rishbala version

www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4591487#p132300317

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

MY BELOVED

RISHBALA VERSION

Pm me for blog password

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

MY BELOVED

RISHBALA VERSION

I want u to make a note before updating it in thread not to bash me for its bold concept...If readers don't like it then tell them not to comment...

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

MY BELOVED

RISHBALA VERSION

Author's note

I never thought that I would withdraw my os from competition...But it was necessary...I am sorry to those who voted for me...

Coming to the os , the idea popped into my head when my family was discussing about Sheena Bora's murder case...I read it in the newspaper and did a little research...Then I kept on thinking ...and before I realised I converted a sensational murder case into maaneet love story... ...weird isn't it?

So u can guess who is who in the story... ...but it was just an inspiration from the case...the characters are quite different...

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

My beloved : maaneet version

www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4591479#p132299616

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Hope you remember me. Sorry for not commenting so long.

BTW. It's a fantastic story and as I said before u r a gifted writer .read all the parts in one go, it's beautiful. This is love between two immortal of two different world .angels and demons. This title is from Dan Brown's novel. But his novel is more of mystery than romance.

I simply love rk the handsome devil. I liked Charles the centaur. He is honest and loyal to rishab. But didn't expect maan to be good. Loved your imagination.

Lol am crazy Monday mar 21 am having boards, but still after learning to comment am here. U are not a writer but a magician.

Note : read most of your stories on rishbala and maaneet.it was fabulous .

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Hey I thought my prince charming is both rishbala and maaneet story ,but...

Hey wat happened to maaan ?.. his relation with sameera caught me off guard .I hated his character.sameera..argh where did u get her ? She disgusts me .geet is bold princess.🥱

Still I love rishab more ,I came to read this story for him only. YOU CARVED THE STORY .

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

MY BELOVED

MAANEET VERSION

PM ME FOR BLOG LINK AND PW

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hello my friends , I have decided to update this story in blog...Password of ch 8 will be given to all who ever commented to this story...But from ch 9 , only the one who is willing to comment will get pw...

Pw will be send by tomorrow midnight...I just want to know who have exams going on and will be inactive in IF...

A brief recap

My Prince Charming is a story of a lonely princess (Princess of Dordale) 'Geetakshi' who just lost her father...She was raised in a very strict disciplined life under her father...Only person who supported and loved her since childhood was Prince Rishabh of Vymland...After the death of King of Dordale , Queen Sameera , 2nd wife of King of Dordale sat on the throne , controlling Geetakshi like a puppet...She was helpless to listen to her...Sameera fixed her marriage with a quite aged King of Samora...But in one of her party , Geet met a handsome and mysterious prince - Maan Singh Khurana of Valdeny...She instantly fell in love with him and Maan seemed to smitten by her too...Her bubble burst when she saw Maan having sex with her step mother Sameera...Broken and humiliated , she decided to avoid Maan at all cost...When she was in a vulnerable condition , Rishabh came back to her life , who was related to King of Samora...He inspired her to stay strong and not to give up to either Sameera or Maan...

In the engagement party ,Geet again met Maan who seemed to be confused of her cold behavior towards him...On the other side , it was difficult for Geet to suppress her love for him...She tried to stay away , but simply couldn't do so...Rishabh on the other side , felt Geet's pain even she didn't voice it out...We saw a invisible bond , a connection between RK and Geet...

When Geet came out of her party to get away from Maan and Sam , she was attacked by a masked maan who touched her improperly and threatened her to stay quiet or he would kill her next time...Shocked by the incident , she fainted ...

In the morning , when she woke up , she saw her best friend RK beside her worried...When she inquired about the killer , he said that no one was found suspicious...She suspected Sam , but RK allied her out...So , naturally her suspicion turned towards Maan , Sam's lover...On the other side , Maan constantly tried to contact Geet and convinced her to trust him and his feelings towards her , but was not comfortable to share anything about his life beyond that...As a result , Geet cut him off completely and began to spend time with RK...Seeing the closeness between RK and Geet and the way she was avoiding him like a plague, Maan couldn't control himself and badmouthed the friendship shared by RK and Geet , breaking her more...

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