My Rishbala & Maaneet combined fanfiction - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent os... !! I have readed this in os competition thread... Simply brilliant from starting to end, loved it... But sad part they cnt be united & rk's death.. !! Congratz!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats for d new thread where u can post ur update for both rk-madhu n maan-geet together
i really loved ur story from starting b'coz its really a different story from other stories as well as it has both my fav couples n would love to read ahead to
but i would apologise for not commenting after chapter 35
do continue ur story plz
i would like to know what does these lines meant
Sometimes one life is not enough to destroy the evil powers in ur life..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
dont like sad endings...

insan itne bude kaise ho sakte hai...apne haathonse apne bete k khushi ko maad dala...kitne ghatya log hai yeh...

awesome story...

loved it ...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...


Edited by love2_soma - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

dont like sad endings...


U may don't like it , but all great love stories have sad endings...It makes them epic...Happy ending love stories are not everlasting in mind...I can bet that most of the readers in today's world remember sad love stories than happy love stories because humans are messy creatures ...it is part of their nature...U can deny it , but can't run away from ur natural behavior...

So , I will like if instead of commenting in straightaway rejecting my hard work , u comment something worth reading..
If u don't want to then it is okay...By now I have understood that maaneetians love cute , khatta-meetha love stories...and I can't write such stories and will never write in future...because I am not a cute person...I am bad tempered , selfish , manipulative , arrogant , jealous person and I care a damn if anyone points at me and says 'U are so bad'...

Thank u...
Edited by sanghita0000 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Nyc os,lvd it.
But their story remained incomplete felt sad for it.
Hope u write more os to make feel gr8.
Edited by alekhika20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Beautifully written updates.
Once again you proved you are an amazing writer.
Though I have to say being a sucker for happy ending I was sad as their lovestory was incomplete.
It was nice to see shades of geet and I loved it. I loved the concept and execution .
Edited by Anntempleton - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

great dat u hv made a thread for rishbala n maaneet

liked both the stories
2nd story 'my beloved' was nyc story
bt d 1st 'bounded by destiny' is my fav
finally u will b updating 2 brothers
thnx for d pm
pm me😊
sry fr confusing u
Edited by shivanidvd - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivanidvd

great dat u hv made a thread for rishbala n maaneet

liked both the stories
2nd story 'my beloved' was nyc story
bt d 1st 'bounded by destiny' is my fav
finally u will b updating 2 brothers
thnx for d pm
pm me😊
sry fr confusing u


thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing os geet was mad Maan didn't betrayed his love n he cured by his love n brutally geet killed rk n Maan is felt lone in dis world
Story of Maan n geet was heart touching their love was pure n strong if their parents separate them then their death brought them together forever
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
I have only a vague idea abt sheena murder case.I know that d mother is accused of killing her daughter.she left her hus n married the rich man 4 luxury.could u plz tell me what rly happened in real life?

Though I also prefer happy endings I can be deeply moved by sad endings.sad endings haunt us more than happy endings.This story touched my heart deeply.Hats off 2 u 4 writing on sheena murder case.fate made Geet Maan's step sis.she is older than him.but they fell 4 each other.But Maan's dad yash n step mom played a cruel game by killing geet.How can a mother kill her own daughter?loved nakul's character ho supported them thru out.spitting scene was nice.Maan taking out geet's heart after her death was horrifying.Maan seeing geet's body made me sad.Maan making her boy wear ring n msngalsuthra touched my heart.Ranveer trying 2 misbehave with poor geet,but maan punished him.got irritated when Mohini used geet 2 release him.Maan introducing pottery 2 soothe geet was nice.Kehna hai kya song sequence was romantic,hot n passionate.Pottery scene reminded me od Samud's pottery scene.Geet saying that they r not ghosts but poor souls was lovely.atleast after death they united in a world where they r free of evils like Yash,mohini n ranveer.Yash got punished.he deserved more.
loved this part:WHEN U FULLY TRUST A PERSON WITHOUT ANY DOUBT, IT GIVES U ONE OF THE TWO RESULTS- A PERSON FOR LIFETIME OR A LESSON FOR LIFETIME'


How did mohini n Ranveer die?

Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago

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