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Posted: 9 years ago
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Madhu reaching RK's hands 4 rescue from demons.lter with a shock she realized that he was also a demon.the twist is that he actually pretended 2 b evil 4 her safety.he cheated his own family n saved madhu n entrusted his trustworthy pal charles 2 help her.seeing his beautiful heart she fell 4 him,their confession was so beautiful.she didnt want 2 leave him.but he forced her 2 leave.he risked his own life n git killed 4 his lady love.Madhu felt restlessness when he passed away.she is living waiting 4 him without knowing his death
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Maan was lost in the beauty in the rain.she clamed that he knew her,but 4got her.I was wondering y maan 4got her.After romancing hershe killed his bro Rishab saying that it was her revenge 4 betraying her.he was confused so as me.but d library book brought a new twist.in d previous birth maan was dr who loved d patient geet.due 2 circumstance he broke up with her n she became so insane that she destroyed him n all he has.so its her ghost who followed him in the present birth also.as she swore she destroyed his possession in this b'th also.its said that in all his lives her ghost will snatch his possession as her revengeful mind is that sharp.
Does that mean that after killing Rishab in the present life is he free from her ghost's troubles?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
It was such a pleasure to read this story again
Maanveer been a doctor still fell in love with one
of his patients and his family was against their
relationship the patient Geetakshi heard about
his engagement and became violent which
would be understandable in her state as this
is the only way she would know to save her love
she killed everyone including his family yet
she found no fault while he knew that fighting for
her with his family as he loves her but she
proved wrong in her behaviour in anger and pain
Maanveer pushes her and she finds it difficult
to stand so she lights the place up as she already had opened all the gas and both she and Maanveer dies but she also places a curse that his every birth she will come and haunt him and take someone precious from him .
Seems like now his second birth when he is
Maan she again comes to him as an innocent
seductress and he immediately falls in love with her , he takes her to his home and she as promised takes his precious possession his only family his brother
Maan now realizes that no matter how many he will have a new birth she will always come to him
and take his precious possessions from him
Its difficult for him yes but it started when a doctor
who should have stayed away from a patient but
could not help and fell in love
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
I Will Read All Your OS Later Today And Comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Amazing stories!!!Geet was mad...Maan didn't betrayed her but she MU him..OMG!!!she brutally killed RK..its so horrible...poor Maan he felt alone...Loved it so much...
My beloved OS is emotional one...both of them love is strong and pure...Ranveer was such a moron...Maan parents separate them and killed Geet..finally the two lonely souls found peace after their death...Loved it so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I have only a vague idea abt sheena murder case.I know that d mother is accused of killing her daughter.she left her hus n married the rich man 4 luxury.could u plz tell me what rly happened in real life?

Though I also prefer happy endings I can be deeply moved by sad endings.sad endings haunt us more than happy endings.This story touched my heart deeply.Hats off 2 u 4 writing on sheena murder case.fate made Geet Maan's step sis.she is older than him.but they fell 4 each other.But Maan's dad yash n step mom played a cruel game by killing geet.How can a mother kill her own daughter?loved nakul's character ho supported them thru out.spitting scene was nice.Maan taking out geet's heart after her death was horrifying.Maan seeing geet's body made me sad.Maan making her boy wear ring n msngalsuthra touched my heart.Ranveer trying 2 misbehave with poor geet,but maan punished him.got irritated when Mohini used geet 2 release him.Maan introducing pottery 2 soothe geet was nice.Kehna hai kya song sequence was romantic,hot n passionate.Pottery scene reminded me od Samud's pottery scene.Geet saying that they r not ghosts but poor souls was lovely.atleast after death they united in a world where they r free of evils like Yash,mohini n ranveer.Yash got punished.he deserved more.
loved this part:WHEN U FULLY TRUST A PERSON WITHOUT ANY DOUBT, IT GIVES U ONE OF THE TWO RESULTS- A PERSON FOR LIFETIME OR A LESSON FOR LIFETIME'


How did mohini n Ranveer die?


My beloved

In the 1st part I told that Mohini , Ranveer tried to run away from police and died in an accident...Yash survived to bear the punishment...
Edited by sanghita0000 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Maan was lost in the beauty in the rain.she clamed that he knew her,but 4got her.I was wondering y maan 4got her.After romancing hershe killed his bro Rishab saying that it was her revenge 4 betraying her.he was confused so as me.but d library book brought a new twist.in d previous birth maan was dr who loved d patient geet.due 2 circumstance he broke up with her n she became so insane that she destroyed him n all he has.so its her ghost who followed him in the present birth also.as she swore she destroyed his possession in this b'th also.its said that in all his lives her ghost will snatch his possession as her revengeful mind is that sharp.
Does that mean that after killing Rishab in the present life is he free from her ghost's troubles?


Bounded by destiny

No , Maan is still not free...He will be haunted again and again and in every birth , Geet will take away the person from him whom he will love the most...In this birth , it was maan's only family left with him - his brother RK...It was just a start...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
i read that while running away they died.but didnt understand that it was in an accident

Originally posted by: sanghita0000


My beloved

In the 1st part I told that Mohini , Ranveer tried to run away from police and died in an accident...Yash survived to bear the punishment...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Thats what i am asking.Rishab is killed.Now what more can Geet do?

Originally posted by: sanghita0000


Bounded by destiny

No , Maan is still not free...He will be haunted again and again and in every birth , Geet will take away the person from him whom he will love the most...In this birth , it was maan's only family left with him - his brother RK...It was just a start...😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thats what i am asking.Rishab is killed.Now what more can Geet do?

That was revenge of Geet in one birth...It will continue in every birth...may be in next birth she will kill Maan's fiancee ...in another birth she will kill Maan baby etc...I just gave an open ending to the os because I was not sure whether anyone will like the os or not...So in short she will torment Maan in every birth...I planned to make it a FF , but less response disheartened me...If u can , u can turn it into a FF...😃


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